Help another non-english student to correct one of the essays :)
I really appreciate any comments and correctionsChevening is looking for individuals who have a clear post-study career plan. Outline your immediate plans upon returning home and your longer term career goals, considering how these relate to UK priorities in your country.
(minimum word count: 50 words, maximum word count: 500 words)
Compared to Europe and America, commercial photography market in Russia is only beginning to develop - even now, most of advertising campaigns are shot abroad. The main problem - the lack of a full-fledged professional education, and, as a consequence, professionals. The only BA in Photography provides a branch of the The British Higher School of Art and Design in Moscow and only on a commercial basis, making it virtually inaccessible to ordinary people.
Education in England - is the ability to obtain and, eventually, transmit to others, the knowledge, that most of the amateur photographers in Russia learn fitfully from internet articles. Therefore, after returning to Russia, I want to get a job as a teacher in my former university. Currently, photography course is based on only technical knowledge - students learn how to work with studio light, how to use camera, learn the basics of composition, perspective and etc. Unfortunately, this is not enough if someone want to be a professional photographer and receive a steady income every month. That's why, I want to develop a more complete course of commercial photography, including lectures about photography market, finding customers, shooting organization, retouching workshops compiling a portfolio and all the things that will help students in the end get their first order.
Also, now I'm developing a project of the creative cluster, whose launch is planned in the next couple of years. Apart from the profit from commercial lease and residential rental, the cluster will work closely with the creative universities and provide them free spaces for lectures and workshops - as an example - will be open free photo studio and a computer room for students where they can come at any time and work on their projects.
In addition, I'm going to to reassemble my team, consisting of a make-up artist, stylist and manager and start producing shootings, working on a commercial basis with the local brands of clothing.
As known, no sweet without sweat. Perhaps the plan looks too ambitious, but I believe that if you work hard, you will succeed. And I'm ready to work hard to ensure that in the end everything described above will become my lifework.