knipod, I have some grammar errors to correct in your statements. Both statements meet the prompt requirements. I am just not sure about the word count. Do you have a limit on it? I would like to know if you are over or under the word count so the correct adjustments to the content can be made.
Describe your research interest with regard to your career vision
I am currently interested in studying abouthow South Korea people manage themselves to be developed country. It is not likely to be easy to rapidly raise the growth of economy by few decades. In contrast, my country, as everyone knows, Thailand is still a developing country and we really need a lot of hard working to be developed one. Thailand needs much more know-how and effort to approach the same level as South Korea. The distance of success makes me curious what kind of the obstacles that keep us away from South Korea. However, this rapid rate has to impact something for sure. So, I also want to study how come this success affects the other aspects of the country, for instance, social change, quality of life etc.
In the future, I would like to apply the things I have researched or studied to work in the practical position that responsible for developing social or the position that related to international affairs which both suits my passion the best.
For the reason above, xxx School would be a great choice for my learning and my future career.
- ... South Koreans managed to develop their country's economy over a matter of decades.
My country, Thailand, as everyone. .. makes me curious
as to what kinds of obstacles... from South Korea
's success .