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I have no doubt that studying in Turkey will be a wonderful experience. Letter of intent for correct


student115 1 / -  
Mar 30, 2015   #1
Hello, my native language is not English and i write a letter of intent for Turkish scholarship, can you help me please to correct any mistakes in the wording or grammar or other

I have no doubt that studying in Turkey will be a wonderful experience, and will have a profound impact on my life, I will have most ability to contribute to the development of cultural exchange, understanding between countries and the exchange of knowledge.

It will be an important opportunity to aware and experience the cultures and experiences of others in a scientific environment containing 3.5 million students from different races and cultures. It is great cultural and civilization legacy!.

It will be an important opportunity to know about the unique Turkish model in cultural progress and economic growth.
On a scientific level, I am sure that after studying in one of the most important educational entities - especially after I am reading about Turkish universities - I'll get a great deal of science and experience make me more than ready for a future anywhere in the world.

Therefore, I plan to be a distinct in my master study, and then transfer the interest through academic work.
When I was in the middle school, I visited an engineer and I have seen his drawing tools and drawings. At that day, I told my father I will become an engineer, and since then love engineering began to grow up with me, I finished high school - Scientific Stream- with superiority, but the bad financial situation compelled me to enroll a diploma in civil engineering not bachelor's as i dream, but my ambitions and determination was the motivation to continue my education and graduate with a Bachelor Degree in Civil Engineering from IUG university, I had to study and work at the same time in order to guarantee the continuation of my learning which is the reason for my low GPA.

My understanding to the importance of the course increased during my career, especially my work in the xxxxx project, and that our country " Palestine" has seen a lot of wars and destruction, which is on the verge of reconstruction, and this needs the specialist and skilled engineer.

In Turkey, I will have the opportunity to experience both modernity of west and tradition of the, and within the last decade, Turkiye has achieved remarkable economic growth and substantial progress in political and social fields, now it's the 6th largest economy in the Europe and 16th largest economy in world.

High quality of education, Turkish higher education system has developed significantly in the last few decades, which reflected in international ranking lists, there are 7 Turkish universities in the top 100 university list, and 3 of them are in the top 10.

Turkiye represents and promotes dialogue, peace and cooperation in the region, as a fundamental principle for Turkiye "Yurtta sulh, cihanda sulh"
I am sure I would be a strong choice for the scholarship, and he is a great honor for me.

IqbalThemi 44 / 46 13  
Apr 2, 2015   #2
Hi, student! this is some suggestion for your writing.

Hello, my native language is not English and i write a letter of intent for Turkish scholarship,.can you help me please to correct any mistakes in the wording or grammar or otherCould you help me to correct my essay both spelling or structure?

I have no doubt that studying in Turkey will be a wonderful experience, and will have a profound impact on my life,.I will have most ability to contribute to the development of cultural exchange, understanding between countries and the exchange of knowledge.this sentence is bad flow. you should write straight point of what you think.this is really important to participate to develop my country through exchanging various cultures and knowledge from a different countries.

I am so sorry, I have activity now. If I have free time later, I want to continue for correcting your writing. Overall you write good enough. However, you make some mistake for structure and repetition.


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