Education is an important part of every step in my life. It is a key driver, which always leads me to the right direction. I have found myself clearer and closer to my dream by the education. Hence, I need to study in higher degree that will be a tool to help me pursue my dream. However, the financial is an obstacle that obstructed me to follow my dream. My parents cannot support my education at higher level and I also cannot support myself even though I have a strong believe that I have high ability to complete my degree at high level education. Therefore, I have to find another financial resource to support my education. XXX Scholarship is a special scholarship that helps Thai student who requires and seeks for financial supports to study in XXX University. This will be a great opportunity for me to study master degree in Sweden. I hope to be one of candidates who are honored to be awarded this scholarship. It would be honor a great opportunity in my life and bring good reputation to my family.
First I would like to introduce myself hereby wish to apply XXX Scholarship and state my motivation for entrance to the Master program in XXX at the XXX University for the 2015/16 academic year. I completed bachelor degree of Bachelor of Business Administration Programme in Tourism Management from Mae Fah Luang University in 2013, the Second Class Honours. With my employment background, thank to my professors who gave me an opportunities to work with as research assistant at school of management, Mae Fah Luang University for XXX year. While I have worked here, I had chances to work with government organizations and diverse people in The Greater Mekong Subregion (GMS) countries. The goal of my work is providing information and knowledge to support government organization. Especially, most of our work focused on border countries of northern in Thailand, which living quality of people development in these countries is the ultimate goal.
As my work experience, I found my desire to work with government organization, which cooperates with international countries. I like to work with diverse people all around the world. However, my current skills are not sufficient to work in my ideal career. I have to to develop more additional skills and specific knowledge. Therefore, I decided to fulfill these gaps by study in master degree of XXX at XXX University because my current knowledge and experience that I could get from the degree will be necessary. Moreover, Sweden is a country which has an excellent education country in the world. I will gain plenty of useful experience and knowledge more useful than study in Thailand. This can be benefit to develop my country in the future.
The financial is a crucial barrier for my higher education level especially study in international countries. Study aboard is a rather difficult for Thai. They have to be rich or high status in society if they want to study in foreign countries. My family is not a rich family but we appreciate the value of education. My grandmother and grandfather did not have education. They worked very hard to give education for their seven sons and daughters. Only my first aunt did not have any chances to study because she had to work with her parents for other 6 brothers and sisters to have chance to go to school at that time. Education has improved my family obviously. We have better living quality more than our previous generation. Therefore, this is the reason why I want to study in higher level. Hence, education can improve the life of people around me such as my family and other people. Moreover, study in master degree in foreign country which has high quality of education can develop my ability better than study in Thailand that I can help my country and family in the future.
However, although my parents always support my education until I graduated bachelor degree but they cannot support me anymore. The financial situation of my family is not in a good condition. My parents have low income because they have got some financial problem. The long term debts have made us troublesome. There is a big amount of money for remission. Furthermore, they will retire in the following six years. Saving money is very important after their retirement. I do not wish to be their burden anymore. Additionally, for my own financial, it cannot support my goal to study in XXX. I graduated in the last two years and I had a working experience for 1 year as a research assistant. This job is not a high salary job. It is only sufficient for living in Thailand. But it is useful for me to preparing myself before study in master degree level. I can learn how to do research in academic environment while I try to find the scholarship to study master degree. Therefore, I really need some financial aid to fulfill my will to study in XXX. XXX Scholarship is the opportunity to assist me in this great step to achieve my goal in this near future.
People always say that we should not let any opportunities passing by. XXX Scholarship is a great chance that I do not want to let it pass. This scholarship will assist me to reach the goal of my life. What I will get from this opportunity will be useful for me and other people. I will share what I receive from this opportunity. Therefore, It will be worth if I get awarded this scholarship. Because it is not only benefit to myself but it also effect to other people around me in the future.
I would like to thank you in advance for considering my application.
"I have found myself clearer and closer to my dream by the education." --> "Education helps me find myself clearer and makes to way to my dream shorter."
You had better not use "first, second, third,..." --> initially, moreover, additionally, further more... "First I would like to introduce myself "
"While I have worked here,..." --> While I was working here,..."
"some financial problem" --> "some financial problems"
"But it is useful for me to preparing before study in master degree level." -->".... for me to prepare before studying ...."
"Therefore, I really need some financial aid" --> "... aids"
