WHAT YOU EXPECT WILL CHANGE IN DEVELOPMENT TERMS FOLLOWING YOUR STUDIES, INCLUDING:
a) the outcomes that you aim to achieve?
b) the timeframe for their implementation?
c) who the beneficiaries will be? (250words)
Following my studies, I will have been equipped for the desired change in zero hunger sustainable development goal. Through trainings, seminars and workshops I will communicate my result-based techniques for modifying the genetic composition of staple food - rice, cowpea, yam, cassava and plantain - in order to fast-track the cultivation and production of rapid growing, pest and disease-tolerant, high yielding, high nutritional value and longer shelf-life crops. My primary aim is to make staple food be of high quality, cheap and available all year round. In doing this, I will expect more people to venture into agriculture. When more people venture into agriculture, food becomes cheap. This in turn increases the economic growth of Nigeria and its Gross Domestic Product. I also expect that private individuals and non-governmental organisations alike will be willing to support those in need of food especially those who have been displaced from their homes.
Not to forget that there is a perception out there that there's more harm than good in consuming GM food, this will be taken care of through seminars held in both rural and urban areas.
I will expect that two years after acquiring an M.Sc in Plant Science and Biotechnology and with the innovation of cutting-edge technologies, 5-10% of farmers will have started cultivating genetically modified crops that will be available to and affordable by even low and middle income earners who are my target beneficiaries. They will then have food in constant supply in the markets.
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Hi there. Here is my feedback on this writing of yours.
Be cautious of the tenses you are using in the essay. Remember that having a loose grip of this part of the technicalities won't really benefit you in the long-run because you need to ensure that you will be professionally appreciated throughout the write-up.
Having said that, other portions of the writing also have to be treated with the same regard of formalities. Notice how the leap from the second paragraph to the third seemed to still be far-fetched. I suggest knitting everything altogether prior to jumping into massive conclusive strides to make sure that you will be appropriately understood by the readers.
