I saw how you were helping everyone else with their essays, so I was wondering if you could help revise mine. I only have 129 words, and the max is 250, so if you think I should add some more to it, let me know! Thanks!
Topic: 250 word essay describing your educational goals and objectives.
Ever since I was little, I had a fascination with numbers. As the years have progressed, this fascination has turned more into a field I enjoy. Majoring in Accounting, I want to study different aspects of our society's financial system and get a more in depth understanding of the way it runs. After receiving a Bachelor's in Accounting from UTEP, I will further my education by attaining a MBA from the University of Texas at Austin. With both degrees, I plan to pursue a career as an Auditor for the Internal Revenue Service on both the corporate and personal side. I want to give back to society the money that they were unfairly cheated out of because someone did not want to pay their fair share of the taxes.