"a fascination with numbers" - Educational Goals and Objectives

Hi guys,

I saw how you were helping everyone else with their essays, so I was wondering if you could help revise mine. I only have 129 words, and the max is 250, so if you think I should add some more to it, let me know! Thanks!

Topic: 250 word essay describing your educational goals and objectives.

Ever since I was little, I had a fascination with numbers. As the years have progressed, this fascination has turned more into a field I enjoy. Majoring in Accounting, I want to study different aspects of our society's financial system and get a more in depth understanding of the way it runs. After receiving a Bachelor's in Accounting from UTEP, I will further my education by attaining a MBA from the University of Texas at Austin. With both degrees, I plan to pursue a career as an Auditor for the Internal Revenue Service on both the corporate and personal side. I want to give back to society the money that they were unfairly cheated out of because someone did not want to pay their fair share of the taxes.

Ever since I was little, I have had a fascination with numbers.

After receiving a Bachelor's in Accounting from UTEP, I will further my education by attaining an MBA from the University of Texas at Austin.

With both degrees, I plan to pursue a career as an Auditor for the Internal Revenue Service on both the corporate and personal sides .

I want to give back to society the money that they were unfairly cheated out of because someone did not want to pay their fair share of the taxes.

Here are some minor things to correct...good luck in school!

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