Focused intention and effort - the UWC values / personal challenge

Question: One of the UWC values is personal challenge. How do you challenge yourself? In what ways are you challenged on a daily basis? How do you deal with failure? 150 words
Answer: One of my biggest challenges is the idea that, through focused intention and effort, I can shape myself into the person I aspire to be, an ideal I strive to maintain. Daily, I focus on areas I wish to improve, setting small, specific goals. For example, today I will spend an hour studying a particular subject, cleaning my room, or even talking to someone unexpected. At the end of the day, I reflect on what I did well and what could have been improved, programming my mind to materialize my desires.

I must admit that I am an extremely insecure person; there is always something inside me saying that I am not good enough to achieve my goals. However, the trick is to deal with these thoughts as if they were from an inner conspiracy theorist. Just as a conspiracy theorist believes in unfounded theories, we should address this inner voice by demonstrating that what it says is incorrect, providing evidence of our abilities and achievements.
Postdata: I think it's a shitty text but I need to confirm it haha

This is an interesting response to the question provided. However, I believe it is too abstract for the reviewer to consider. Self improvement is something that is done on a daily basis and does not require an immediate response to failure. Self improvement is a continuing process that, although admirable in intent, does not offer a clear idea regarding how you deal with failure. Try to use a stronger value such as integrity, honesty, fairness, to name but a few. What sort of situation have you found yourself challenging this and then failing? How did you recover from that failure? That is the sort of presentation you can use as a more appropriate response to the provided guide questions.