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Please provide a personal statement supporting your application. [Maximum 200 words]
As a recent graduate from Khon Kaen University, Thailand with the first class honour in English, I decided to continue my study in the master's degree after considering my own experience form working as an English tutor and suggestion from my university teachers. Continuing my further study in Australia is my big dream, and I believe that, once I complete the master's degree from Australia, I can bring the knowledge, skills, and experiences to become a full-time English lecturer in an academic institution. However, financial hardship of my family obstructs me from studying overseas. Therefore, I decide to apply for Endeavour Scholarships and Fellowships as I believe that this is a great opportunity to come and study in the developed and English native speaking country, Australia. I also believe that, as in a teaching position, this is an opportunity to develop English education in Thailand, and I will be able to fulfill, inspire, and encourage Thai students' skills in the English language abilities. Consequently, having experience as an Endeavour Scholarships and Fellowships scholar to master in applied linguistics will help me achieve my goals.