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"give up to three practical examples of how you intend to use" - AAS Scholarship


mthnhejja 1 / 1  
Feb 13, 2019   #1

ways to use the knowledge, skills and connections gained



Please Review my answer. THANK YOU
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Please:- a) give up to three practical examples of how you intend to use the knowledge, skills and connections you will gain from your scholarship. Possible tasks can be personal and/or professional; and

b) list any possible constraints you think may prevent you from achieving these tasks.*


Firstly, this program will have the greatest impact on increasing my expertise and skills in global financial management and regulations by introducing me to the biggest and strongest financial markets in the world. In turn, I will use these skills to provide my clients with better advice and consultation regarding their portfolio investments and financial instruments available around the world which will hopefully result in new opportunities of business relations between communities.

Secondly, I will work on transferring my acquired knowledge and expertise to the community through teaching financial management courses at the University I graduated bachelor's degree, as a part-time lecturer. Students at local university lack the necessary exposure to global markets and up to date international financial regulations. I intend to increase their exposure to these markets by employing my newly acquired knowledge in my teaching methods.

Lastly, the fact that international professionals from around the world will be joining the program is indeed a unique opportunity to increase business cooperation on the international level, these international business connections will have a significant positive impact on my firm. Meeting with international financial and management professionals will help me grow my partnerships database and exchange market insights between firms around the world. This is very crucial in the financial investment business as it decreases the investment risk by opening the scope to diversify the investments portfolio of the firm to include securities from different economies with different characteristics.

There are some challenges that are unique to the Palestinian society due to the fact that our economy is under occupation and most of the financial policies are imposed by the occupation and is politically-driven. However, we've learned to overcome these challenges and the Palestinian companies are known for their resilience and their ability to sustain success despite all of the obstacles, politically and financially.

Holt - / 7,546 2001  
Feb 14, 2019   #2
Moe, the way that you wish to practice these skills in your profession can be seen as admirable by some who read this essay. The lack of various educational experiences and implementation devices are key to the reasons why you were able to provide 3 examples of how you will apply your knowledge and skills after you complete the scholarship.

The only problem with the presentation is that you did not really discuss the possible obstacles that you will encounter in the implementation of your 3 desired objectives. Your essay makes the implementation appear to be a given that will be implemented with ease. Nothing could be further from that implication. You will be facing obstacles in the performance of these tasks. Discuss these obstacles as they apply to the second question of the essay which is:

... list any possible constraints you think may prevent you from achieving these tasks.

That is the strong missing element in your presentation. Edit the essay to allow for the inclusion of this discussion per practical example.
OP mthnhejja 1 / 1  
Feb 14, 2019   #3
Much Appreciated Holt :), thanks for the useful feedback


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