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GkS Graduate Scholarship For Master's Degree In Early Child Education



Tumi d 1 / -  
Jan 15, 2025   #1
Hi I would love if my personal statement could be reviewed.

A written statement is judged based on the following,

Motivations with which you apply for this program

Educational background

Significant experiences you have had

Person or events that have had a significant influence on you

If applicable, describe awards you have received, publications you have made, or skills you have acquired, etc.Others (e.g., extracurricular activities, community service, or work experiences)

My Personal Statement

My Motivation

Discovering the Global Korea Scholarship (GKS) during my university education inspired me to pursue graduate studies in South Korea.

The program's comprehensive support system, emphasis on cultural exchange, and focus on internships and seminars stood out to me as a unique opportunity for academic and personal growth.

I am particularly excited to enhance my Korean language skills, which I have been studying independently, and gain both theoretical and practical knowledge in my chosen field through GKS.

What draws me most to the GKS is its commitment to supporting students financially and academically, allowing them to focus fully on their studies.

The chance to study in a progressive academic environment while experiencing Korean culture will empower me to contribute meaningfully to both South Korea and Nigeria. I aim to leverage this opportunity to build meaningful global relationships, achieve my career goals, and advocate for inclusive education policies in my home country.

My primary interest for my Master's degree is in Early Childhood Education, a field I am passionate about due to the lack of attention it receives in Nigeria. Many teachers in this area are not well-trained, and there is little emphasis on specialized learning for young children, especially those with special needs.

I see the GKS Scholarship as a reliable support system that will allow me to pursue this important course without financial worries. South Korea's advanced education system, especially its focus on early learning and child development, inspires me to study in a country that values innovation and inclusivity in education. I believe this opportunity will help me gain the necessary knowledge and skills to drive impactful changes in early childhood education back home.

One essay at a time.

Holt  Educational Consultant - / 15539  
Jan 16, 2025   #2
This is not a GKS responsive personal statement. The specific information as required by the prompt was not provided at all. You cannot use any aspect of this essay. It will be best for you to write a new one. His time, use the question and answer type of outline as you develop your presentation so that you can be sure that you did not miss responding to a question and, that your response is aligned with the question provided. That way you can properly develop your response personal statement. This response is too superficial and selective in partial responses, making it unusable as a response. Do notbtell the reviewer what you want him to know about you. Tell him about the data he wants to know about.
Eleana 1 / 2  
Feb 1, 2025   #3
If you look at the other examples of GKS personal statements, most of them are written in a neat format. So, I suggest you to revise your personal statement. Also, I consider that you only mentioned why you think GKS will help you achieve your goal, meanwhile, it's also essential to explain which university you choose and how that university provides your needs on studying Early Childhood Education. I hope this advice can help you!
clauana 2 / 2  
6 hrs ago   #4
Study

The essay is too short and not properly written in an organized format. Try to rewrite it, ensuring that each required information is addressed.


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