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Group work and human resources

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Mar 7, 2023   #1

Discuss a time when you faced difficult challenge or hurdle during your study and how you navigated through it!

(150-300 words)

What I remember the most when reading my parents' dissertation on human resources is how to organize a resource owned to achieve goals. However, I learned more directly in the field when working in groups during a pandemic to work on animation. As a group leader, I needed help managing my team's performance. We worked together on animation for 4 months, from the idea to the execution of drawing the animation. Even though we've only known each other for a month during online lectures, we worked effectively in the first to the second month; we worked on animated scenes regularly every day. Every day I check on how the team is doing and check on the work. But in the third and fourth months, our team started to wear out gradually, and the scene schedule got delayed. So I plan a schedule for regular meetings. We meet online to exchange stories about life in different areas, watch movies together, discuss our favorite anime, and do assignments together, so we both can't wait to be able to meet in person. The closeness was slowly established, and we started to get to know each other making our spirits rise again. Finally, we finished the animation and tried to submit our work to various festivals, which turned out to be in the 70 best scripts of FFACR 2021 and won second place at the ANIMAKINI 2022 animation festival. I realized that strengthening bonds with one another will bring the strength of persistence and togetherness to support each other in achieving goals. Successfully getting through the difficulties of organizing groups during my studies made me more flexible and confident to lead group work.
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Mar 8, 2023   #2
Note that the essay prompt refers to you, in the singular in reference to the writing topic. The provided essay uses "we" as the pronoun reference for group pronouns. That is not the way the response should be written. The focus should be on a personal obstacle that you had to overcome, not a group problem. So while you understood the question, it is the approach to the response that was not provided correctly. I am afraid you cannot use this response at all. Pick a problem that focuses on your solo problem solving skills. The screener needs to understand how you tackle a problem that affects only you. Deliver a sense of problem assessment, motivation to find a solution, and solution implementation in your revised response. Remember, the focus should be on you and you alone.

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