Health workers - knowledge gained from your master studies to contribute to your home

master studies influence

I will utilize the knowledge and experience gained from my studies to empower our health workers with new public health skills, knowledge and strategies to improve the health and wellbeing of the people. In Sweden, I will be availed the opportunity to learn new leadership skills, connect and make new friends, learn different cultures and professional knowledge from other areas through it's activities and trainings. I will be opportuned to be a member of the network for future global leaders which will help to build long lasting collaborations between my country and Sweden. knowledge and experience will provide me the opportunity to contribute to strategic decision making in formulating and implementing a good health policy to promote standard practice in health service delivery. My research experience obtained will be use as a guide in conducting health research to promote evidence base practices and equal distribution of resources to improve the health and wellbeing of the people.

Since the discussion is all about knowledge learned and gained, which is theoretical in application, there should not be any reference to the network and an idea regarding a collaboration between yourself and Sweden. That aspect is physical or virtual in nature, which is a departure from the theoretical reference that the prompt contains. Simply removing the networking reference will help the statement response stay on track. You can revise the essay to connect the opening sentences with the later portion that starts off with:


From there, you will need to revise the overall statement to become a bit more concrete in terms of knowledge transference (from your training in Sweden to your counterparts in your home country) along with professional applications (in relation to decision making). The "Why?" and "How?" of your ideas need to be responded to in the statement within the character limitation.

@Holt
Thank you very much for going through the work. I will put in the necessary recommendations. Thank you.