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Healthcare system - Goal of study , study plan for gks during my degree program



Moon_Moon 3 / 6  
Jun 21, 2025   #1
My vision is to help build a healthcare system where high-quality medical care is both efficient and truly accessible to ordinary people. I want to be a part of creating a system that provides good healthcare outcomes while sharing compassion with people during their most vulnerable stages. This desire to enhance humanity remains at the core of my goal to pursue a decent and impactful career in nursing.

To become the kind of healthcare professional I aspire to be, I have set out a plan for my five years of study in Korea. First, I aim to achieve TOPIK Level 6 by the end of my degree program, as becoming fluent in the Korean language will prepare me to work effectively within Korea's healthcare environment. I am also determined to maintain a GPA above 80% and to graduate among the top 10% of my class. To accomplish this, I will dedicate at least three hours each night to self-study, a method I already follow and find peaceful and effective. I will use that time to review class materials and make use of the university library for extended reading and research.

From my first to third year, I hope to excel in core nursing courses such as Human Physiology, Clinical Pharmacology, Adult Nursing, Nursing Ethics, and Community Nursing. These subjects serve as the foundation of any competent nurse's practice, and excelling in them will strengthen my understanding of essential nursing principles. During these years, I also hope to master core clinical skills such as taking vital signs, administering intramuscular injections, providing basic CPR, and managing patient pain. Gaining confidence in these areas will allow me to deliver effective patient care and improve patient outcomes. I look forward to practicing these skills in the university's Simulation Lab Center, where hands-on training will help prepare me both physically and mentally for the real clinical environment.

In addition to academic and practical excellence, I plan to gain real hospital experience. This exposure will sharpen my clinical instincts and help me better understand how to meet patients' physical and emotional needs. Furthermore, I hope to join the university's nursing student clubs, such as AGAPE from Sungshin Women's University or ESEL from Pusan National University. Joining mission-based clubs like them, which focuses on medical outreach and Christian volunteer work, will give me opportunities to participate in healthcare service projects in medically underserved areas. These experiences will broaden my perspective beyond the classroom, helping me develop a deeper understanding of global health issues, especially in under-resourced communities.

Being part of such activities will not only shape my nursing skills and knowledge but also improve my Korean language fluency and cultural understanding. I expect it will also strengthen my communication abilities, teamwork, and leadership-traits that are essential in any healthcare setting.

In my fourth year, I will enter a more advanced phase of study involving clinical rotations and hospital-based training. These experiences will help me refine my patient care skills and build confidence in applying my core nursing knowledge in professional settings. At this stage, I will also begin working on my research project. For my thesis, I am especially interested in exploring how to improve community healthcare in underserved areas with limited resources. Through this research, I hope to gain a deeper understanding of how rural areas function despite lacking proper medical care, and how patient outcomes in such environments can still be improved using low-cost, practical solutions.
I am also eager to study some of the strategies the Korean government implemented in transforming its healthcare system. I believe that adapting these practices to communities like those in Nigeria and other similar regions could lead to significant improvements in care delivery, even when resources are scarce.

By the end of my degree, I hope to have become not only a well-trained nurse but also a thoughtful, globally-minded healthcare provider with the skills, knowledge, and compassion to serve both in Korea and back home in Nigeria. Thereby, contributing to the kind of healthcare knowledge that changes real lives and brings hope to everyday people.
Holt  Educational Consultant - / 15682  
Jun 21, 2025   #2
Try to develop a more concrete goal of study. Your presentation is too generic. It shows that you do not have any solid study plans. Everything you are discussing in the essay are not special nor unique because these are expected of all the Nursing students in Korea and in other parts of the world. In order to develop a more solid goal of study and study plan, you need to first, have an ambition for becoming a nurse. Why? What sort of nurse to you hope to become? An emergency room nurse? A pediatric nurse? A practical nurse? You need to determine your nursing specialization before you can develop a proper study plan that aligns with the rotations and internships that are available at the medical universities and teaching hospitals in Korea.
OP Moon_Moon 3 / 6  
Jun 27, 2025   #3
@Holt
Thanks so much I'll review it and paste once I'm done. Thank you
OP Moon_Moon 3 / 6  
Jun 30, 2025   #4
@Holt
[Urgent] review on previous essay for goal of study plan
I made a mistake and couldn't edit the above . I'm sorry.

My vision is to help build a healthcare system where high-quality medical care is both efficient and truly accessible to ordinary people. I want to be part of creating a system that delivers good health outcomes while also showing compassion to people in their most vulnerable moments. This desire to uplift humanity remains at the core of my goal to pursue a decent and impactful career in nursing, specializing in community health nursing.

To become the kind of healthcare professional I dream of being, I have created a clear plan for my five years of study in Korea. I am determined to maintain a GPA above 80% and graduate among the top 10% of my class. To achieve this, I plan to dedicate at least three hours each night to self-study-a habit I already practice and find peaceful and effective. During this time, I will review class materials, revise lecture notes, and make use of the university library for further reading and research.

From my first to third year, I hope to do well in core nursing courses such as adult nursing, nursing ethics, community nursing, health education, and counseling. I also plan to take elective courses like global health nursing. These courses will build a strong foundation in nursing practices and help me develop the skills needed to deliver effective and compassionate care to patients. I am especially drawn to courses focusing on community and global health because that is where my passion lies.

Furthermore, I hope to join the university's nursing student clubs, such as AGAPE from Sungshin Women's University or ESEL from Pusan National University. These mission-based clubs focus on medical outreach and Christian volunteer work, giving me chances to serve medically underserved areas while also developing my Korean fluency, cultural understanding, and teamwork skills.

I also plan to participate in broader community health outreach programs, where I can apply the nursing process to families, communities, and high-risk population.These experiences will help me better understand the role of community health nurses, especially in teaching health promotion and disease prevention to the public-particularly the elderly. I believe these activities will strengthen both my academic and practical skills.

All these plans will be scheduled carefully, based on my university's academic calendar and class timetable. I'll ensure there are no clashes between my lectures and extracurricular activities, so I can manage my time well and benefit from both. I will also attend nursing-related seminars, workshops, and conferences to broaden my understanding of up-to-date practices in the field. These events will give me the opportunity to learn directly from experienced professionals, stay informed about current trends, and build meaningful networks with peers, professors, and mentors. This kind of exposure will support my goal of becoming a global nurse who can help bridge gaps between Korea and Nigeria's healthcare systems.

During my fourth and final year, I will focus more on practical training and hospital rotations. For my internship, I hope to work at a community health center affiliated with a major Korean hospital. These placements will allow me to observe how Korea's public health system works in both urban and rural settings. I also hope to analyze those systems and suggest areas of improvement where needed.

By the end of my degree, I want to have become not only a well-trained nurse but a compassionate and skilled community health nurse. I want to be someone equipped with real-world experience and evidence-based strategies to support underserved populations-not just in Korea or Nigeria, but anywhere in the world. My goal is to serve people with both knowledge and kindness, showing cultural sensitivity and deep empathy at every step.
OP Moon_Moon 3 / 6  
Jul 1, 2025   #5
@Holt

Study plan essay during my degree program

[Urgent] review
From the contributor

My vision is to help build a healthcare system where high-quality medical care is both efficient and truly accessible to ordinary people. I want to be part of creating a system that delivers good health outcomes while also showing compassion to people in their most vulnerable moments. This desire to uplift humanity remains at the core of my goal to pursue a decent and impactful career in nursing, specializing in community health nursing.

To become the kind of healthcare professional I dream of being, I have created a clear plan for my five years of study in Korea. I am determined to maintain a GPA above 80% and graduate among the top 10% of my class. To achieve this, I plan to dedicate at least three hours each night to self-study-a habit I already practice and find peaceful and effective. During this time, I will review class materials, revise lecture notes, and make use of the university library for further reading and research.

From my first to third year, I hope to do well in core nursing courses such as adult nursing, nursing ethics, community nursing, health education, and counseling. I also plan to take elective courses like global health nursing. These courses will build a strong foundation in nursing practices and help me develop the skills needed to deliver effective and compassionate care to patients. I am especially drawn to courses focusing on community and global health because that is where my passion lies.

Furthermore, I hope to join the university's nursing student clubs, such as AGAPE from Sungshin Women's University or ESEL from Pusan National University. These mission-based clubs focus on medical outreach and Christian volunteer work, giving me chances to serve medically underserved areas while also developing my Korean fluency, cultural understanding, and teamwork skills.

I also plan to participate in broader community health outreach programs, where I can apply the nursing process to families, communities, and high-risk population.These experiences will help me better understand the role of community health nurses, especially in teaching health promotion and disease prevention to the public-particularly the elderly. I believe these activities will strengthen both my academic and practical skills.

All these plans will be scheduled carefully, based on my university's academic calendar and class timetable. I'll ensure there are no clashes between my lectures and extracurricular activities, so I can manage my time well and benefit from both. I will also attend nursing-related seminars, workshops, and conferences to broaden my understanding of up-to-date practices in the field. These events will give me the opportunity to learn directly from experienced professionals, stay informed about current trends, and build meaningful networks with peers, professors, and mentors. This kind of exposure will support my goal of becoming a global nurse who can help bridge gaps between Korea and Nigeria's healthcare systems.

During my fourth and final year, I will focus more on practical training and hospital rotations. For my internship, I hope to work at a community health center affiliated with a major Korean hospital. These placements will allow me to observe how Korea's public health system works in both urban and rural settings. I also hope to analyze those systems and suggest areas of improvement where needed.

By the end of my degree, I want to have become not only a well-trained nurse but a compassionate and skilled community health nurse. I want to be someone equipped with real-world experience and evidence-based strategies to support underserved populations-not just in Korea or Nigeria, but anywhere in the world. My goal is to serve people with both knowledge and kindness, showing cultural sensitivity and deep empathy at every step.


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