WHY HAVE YOU CHOOSEN THIS COURSE OF STUDY.
please help me review this essay which m supposed to hand in anytime soon.thank you all for you quick response! this is how it goes;
Today I feel greatly honored and blessed to be doing something I wanted to be. The Tourism and hospitality industry are regarded as the world's most dynamic and fastest growing industry. They are fast paced , energetic and exciting fields which provides a wide range of career and employment opportunities both at home and overseas in many and various industry sectors such as tour operators, airlines and hotel groups. Working in this industry enables you to discover the world, to meet new people, discover new cultures, learn new languages and see new places. It is a wonderful opportunity to open the world for those that want to see it.
Hospitality and Tourism management is a wide term that includes various sorts of careers. However, they are different in terms of responsibilities, the various careers all have in common the fact I will be serving people by providing specialized services. I can select the general hospitality and tourism industry and will discover I have many options in terms of employment opportunities. My training for certification in any of the fields of study includes a customized curriculum to suit my educational requirements.This industry is also in continuous need of managerial staff with a graduate status, enthusiastic and committed managers in all areas of the industry. This program links business principles with sector expertise by introducing me to the principle and practice of modern tourism. This program goes on further to explore issues such as Eco Tourism and Sustainable Development. As a student holding to this qualification I will be confident in applying key business and management to this growing sector.It is one of the few industries, where careers are available in a number of different businesses. In some cases, careers are even built by blending more than one field of study such as Flight Catering , Travel and Tour Operator. And new ones are being developed everyday such as Film and Television Tourism.
The careers in the hospitality and tourism industry are widely categorized travel or hotel management . By acquiring a certification within my selected field of study , I am able to jump start what would take years of on job training, it resulting In a faster promotion and wider opportunities. By entering into a career within the hospitality and tourism field with an understanding of various roles and departments within the industry, I can decrease the chances of taking a wrong turn along my career path, instead o bouncing aimlessly ,I can instead be going with a set of attack plans for which direction I would like to take and it offers a dynamic work environment than most professions.
It's a wonderfull opportunity to establish cordial relationships with guests, visitors, or strangers and providing them kindness and care. Because am a good communicator, easy-going and sociable person who would like to join the collective and inspire it with new ideas and enthusiasm.Working in this industry no doubt demands perfect communication skills and interpersonal skills and it's a good opportunity to develop and demonstrate my abilities.
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hey are fast paced , energetic and exciting fields which providesWell, the verb provides here should be a singular noun
a wide range of career and employment opportunities ( a comma here)
both at home and overseas in
many and(I think the word many shows redundancy. Omit it)
various industry sectors such as tour operators, airlines and hotel groups.
they are different in terms of responsibilities, the various careers all have
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Today I feel greatly honored and blessed to be doing something I wanted to be.Today I feel extremely happy and blessed because I have been able to do something I always wanted to do.
The Tourism and hospitality industry
regarded as the world's most dynamic and fastest growing industry.
fast paced , energetic and exciting fields
a wide range of career and employment opportunities both at home and overseas in many and various industry sectors such as tour operators, airlines and hotel groups etc.