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implementing nuclear fusion; Research Benefits


yosh503037 12 / 22 2  
Sep 14, 2013   #1
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What benefits do you think your research will bring to the world? What additional steps, and by whom, might be needed for this benefit to be realized?*

Thus far, the research that I have conducted has delineated the viability of implementing nuclear fusion as a primary energy source, particularly in impoverished areas, for it is now able to generate more energy than is initially required for ignition. Thus, as exhaustible energy fuels come to an end, and with the economic repercussions of other alternative energy sources, fusion reactors can be implemented ubiquitously, which do not pose a threat for misuse for weapons nor destructive potential.

Moving forward, however, there are still a multitude of improvements that are needed for sustenance solely on fusion. Namely, as the energy generated scales with the size of the reactor, and so too are instabilities mitigates on larger scales, the reactors have to be built on larger scales as to determine whether they can generate sufficient energy for society, which will be central to the study of fusion scientists. Instabilities, therefore, have yet to be understood and are a grand quandary that has yet to be understood in terms of their manifestation and development by theoretical plasma physicists, which will be critical to maintain fusion over long spans of time. Thus, despite the progress that has been made, more always exists over the horizon.
c_lignelli 5 / 11 3  
Sep 26, 2013   #2
Maybe just a clause too many. Break this up into two or three sentences so that the reader can follow each thought. You touch on size, amount of energy, whether that quantity will satisfy need... too many!

hus, despite the progress that has been made, more always exists over the horizon.

-- first, it may sound better to actually use a synonym for progress instead of using the "more" in blue. However, if you choose to leave this undefined, the verb exist should not have an "s" so satisfy the noun progress.

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