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I will join Federal Board of Revenue Anti Money Laundering Unit - Clear Post Study Goals


Navid2 1 / 2  
Oct 29, 2017   #1
This is

Chevening Scholarship clear Post Study goals

which read like this.

Chevening is looking for individuals who have a clear post-study career plan. Please outline your immediate plans upon returning home and your longer term career goals. You may wish to consider how these relate to what the UK government is doing in your country.

My answer is written below. Need professional opinion regarding contents of my answer and whether it sufficiently address the question contents.

"Financial policing in done by four major organizations in Pakistan namely,
I)Federal Board of Revenue - Anti Money Laundering Unit
II)National Accountability Bureau - Financial Embezzlement investigation
III)State Bank of Pakistan - Financial Monitoring Unit
IV)Security and Exchange Commission of Pakistan.
Upon returning to Pakistan, I will join Federal Board of Revenue Anti Money Laundering Unit to deal with cases suspected of involvement in money laundering. With the kind of theoretical and practical knowledge which I will obtained from UK, FBR will welcome me in posting to this unit in order to improve its output. Interacting with British practitioners is nothing new to me as already I am participating in a serial training program on transfer pricing conducted by senior officers from HMRC. It's a workshop oriented training program where real life cases are discussed with the trainers and tools and techniques are discussed and refined to deal with such kind of cases. The program is held under World Bank Umbrella. The overall emphasis of this program is to investigate and coupled with degree from UK, I will far better off in curbing financial crime like money laundering committed in Pakistan with relative impunity.

My long term career goals involve building and strengthening Anti Money Laundering Unit of FBR into a center of excellence. Keeping in view of rampant financial malpractices in Pakistan, I can foresee myself working at senior level in any of the three above institutions especially in State Bank of Pakistan which carry the burden of maintaining financial discipline in the country. Keeping in view of the current global environment against financial malpractice especially money laundering, advance degree from UK in financial investigation acquire grave importance in the context of Pakistan.

Further my long term career goal revolves around introducing more stringent financial discipline in the realm of government organizational working and financial dealing of people with state. Mega financial corruption scandals in Pakistan is a proof that financial monitoring is very weak and government is definitely lagging behind in curbing this problem through stringent measures. UK government is well aware of this gap in human resource and is aggressive imparting trainings. The fact that FBR selected me for training with HMRC professionals nicely fit into this strategy of developing competent human resource by acquiring advance degree from UK.
SelmaRF 2 / 4 1  
Oct 29, 2017   #2
@Navid2
Financial policing in done is
obtained from UK, FBR will welcome .
program is to investigate, and coupl
will far be better off in
OP Navid2 1 / 2  
Oct 29, 2017   #3
@SelmaRF
Thanks for corrections.
Hadeer 5 / 13  
Oct 29, 2017   #4
@Navid2
i am also applicant but i hope i would help you
in my opinion, the second paragraph you mentioned more details about your work experience instead of concentrate on your future plan
it would be good if you mention chevening as a partner in achieving your goals
Holt  Educational Consultant - / 14,767 4770  
Oct 30, 2017   #5
Naveed, remove the outline at the start of the essay. You do not need to explain how financial policing is done in Pakistan because those do not relate to your post study plans. Start immediately with the opening paragraph instead. Now, I will say that you impressed me with all of your career plans. You have a clear idea as to where you see your career going in the immediate future. However, you do not have any reference to a money laundering project that the UK government supports in your country. Please try to find that reference because that is crucial in terms of final considerations for your scholarship application. Surely there is some sort of project ongoing in your country. Perhaps you can look up anti-terrorist projects in Pakistan that are supported by the UK with some sort of focus on anti-money laundering as it relates to the terrorism threat. That would be the best way to indicate that there is a clear cooperation / connection between Pakistan and the UK in a manner that relates to your chosen masters degree course and future career.
OP Navid2 1 / 2  
Oct 30, 2017   #6
@Holt
Thanks Holt. Your feedback is appreciated.


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