KGS-G STATEMENT OF PURPOSE - language in Korea

Greetings all, below is my statement of purpose to be submitted for KGS-G. Please help review it. Thanks in anticipation

KGS-G STATEMENT OF PURPOSE

Language Study Plan
Korea language is the principal medium of learning in Korean universities and communication locally. I currently embarked on online Korea language training to help get myself familiar with Korean alphabet and how Korea language sound, laying foundation and ensuring that my one-year training in Korea would not be tormenting but fun instead. All is geared towards my stay in Korea and of course my PhD program. My goal is to hid higher level of Korean proficiency 5 or 6 levels.

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Your language study plan is not impressive. There is no sense in mentioning that Hangul is the teaching language in Korea. That is precisely why you are being asked to explain how you are preparing for the Hangul based class teaching prior to your arrival. How are you getting your language training? Where are you getting it? At what level would you judge your Hangul proficiency at this point? Let us say that you have a basic skill level at the moment, how will you further improve once you begin your classes in Korea? Will you get private help aside from the mandated language classes? How will you learn the language in a manner relevant to the masters course you will be attending? These are basic questions that are relevant to this statement which you failed to address in your paragraph. Revise the presentation to include specific language learning plans and methods. Include a social and community aspect to the language learning schedule.

@Holt, thanks for your observations