Masters in Sweden, SI scholarship: I'll return to Vietnam, become a leader to tackle health problems

Describe your previous leadership experience? in SI scholarship (250 characters)

Facing to the dispute the drug storage conditions in different wards, I successfully resolved by initiating and leading my team to compile a guidebook for this issue. It has contributed to improve practices for nurses and drug safety for patients.

What do you plan to do after completing your master's degree in Sweden?

I prefer to return to Vietnam and become a competent leader in a research institution to tackle health problems. I also plan to cooperate with Swedish embassy in holding events so that students with an interest for Sweden can find helpful information

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Describe your previous leadership experience? in SI scholarship (250 characters)

I resolved the problem of drug storage in different wards by developing a response guidebook that led to improved nursing practices and safety nets for the patients.

What do you plan to do after completing your master's degree in Sweden?

I will return to Vietnam and become a competent leader in a health research institution. I will cooperate with Swedish embassy in holding events for students so that students with an interest in studying in Sweeden will have a veue for inquiry.

I think that 'brain drain' is a serious issue in Vietnam now. To highlight your contribution to the development of home country, I believe that mentioning this issue is helpful.

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