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Scholarship motivation letter for masters studies - how you can apply the knowledge and etc..

komadx 1 / 1  
Feb 14, 2021   #1
hope you are doing well!
I need help checking the motivation letter for my scholarship application.....
Small background i applied for studies in the fields of: industrial analytics, robotics and control, sustainable energy engineering and intelligent automation

i am required to submit one motivation letter of a 1000 characters for all the porgrammes i applied for. the essay is on question and answer format and has only the following question...

application letter

Question : Describe how you can apply the knowledge and experience gained from your time in Sweden in your organisation/company and/or in your home country/region upon your return from Sweden.

[Maximum 1000 characters incl. spaces]


Technology is reshaping the world. Through my master's and NFGL platform I will gain knowledge in engineering and technology, develop my leadership skills, network and exchange knowledge with experts.

Employing my knowledge in Sudan:

In industrial systems and robotics by utilizing robots to monitor Agriculture fields which will foster healthy soil and optimize yields. Also, by utilizing automation in production, harvesting, washing, extraction, testing tasks can be Automated minimizing time energy and costs.

In sustainable energy by employing solar energy to power homes, ICT systems, and light roads which will foster sustainable environment, buildings, infrastructure, and affordable energy, food and water for all

All are linked to the UN SDGs 2030 goals 2,7,8,9,12,13,15

Holt  Educational Consultant - / 10,317 3351  
Feb 15, 2021   #2
Be a little more specific in your response. What subjects will you be taking that will have a direct application to your situation Sudan? Such responses will help give clarity and urgency to the completion of these studies. Right now, you have summary responses, which do not really tell the reviewer much about how you plan to apply specific study points to your work in Sudan. Connect the work with the studies. That way the reviewer will be able to connect the dots and figure out exactly how and why you will be applying such studies in Sudan. Don't narrate the UN SDG's at the end either. The reviewer will not have the time to look up each reference number. Instead, be specific. Just mention the UN SDG program in general or as it applies to the plans for the development of Sudan.
OP komadx 1 / 1  
Feb 15, 2021   #3
Dear Holt.
Thank you very much for your timely response.
I will connect the work of the UNDP mission in Sudan and the SDGs with 2 specific project idea i have in mind one in Automation and the other in renewable energy

Although should i mention exactly how i plan to execute my projects mean do i have to mention that i am planning to join a specific company or work for UNDP sudan to achieve my goal

one more question: is it ok if i write how i can employ my knowledge in each program separately or should i come up with one paragraph and one idea that can employ the knowledge i will gain in each masters.... meaning a project where i can apply any of the master programs in...

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