Being in a culturally diverse society helps everyone, and benefits them as well. I being part of one, has helped me understand and immerse myself in other cultures that I thought at one point where dull and boring. No culture Is boring or dull they all are colorful and show so much about an entire society.
This paragraph needs more sentences. It needs a few examples, too. Right now it is incomplete. Write about diversity in terms of globalization, communication technology, and ethics.
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The new student knew only Spanish, so I took it upon myself to tutor him every mornin
g; h e soon knew almost fluent English and passed all of his first semester classes.
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Apart from doing that community service I also helped everyone communicate with him, and see the true person behind his challenge in the language.
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