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Who do you want to be in the next 10 years? (minimum 50 words, maximum 150 words)


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Oct 29, 2015   #1
"Life isn't about finding yourself. Life is about creating yourself." ― George Bernard Shaw
This quote is absolutely the best answer of me for the question. When I was a little child, many people asked me who I want to be in my future. In fact, my answers were different in specific times. Many years later, I grow up and understand that nobody can predict their future or tell exactly what they will do in the next 10 years because life is a long journey which is full of unexpected twists and turns. However, what I can sure that in the next 10 years, I would be a well-educated and successful man. In next 10 years, maybe I would become a programmer, an IT guy, or have the job relating to my passion. Moreover, in the next decade, I want to love every part of my life and live in a place that innovation and creation is valued. Lastly, I wouldn't like to be a selfish person or an anti-social guy that just only know about myself. Because of that, I wish I could be a useful person for society to help other people to get their dreams like the way I will have done.
vangiespen - / 4,134 1449  
Oct 29, 2015   #2
Brian, the essay that you wrote is quite generic in feel. It does not offer any solid information that the reviewer can hold on to and assess as part of your college application process. While others will tell you that being genetic in reference to your statement is a good thing that will allow you to spin the fact that you have not made up your mind about your major yet, I would like to caution you against doing that.

This type of essay prompt requires you to examine your current college major choices. Are you absolutely sure about the major that you have chosen? Are you truly enthusiastic about studies in this field? Then let the reviewer know about the sense of self-assurance that you have by indicating a foretelling of your future. It does not have to be a solid plan, it just has to be a plan. Something that tells the reviewer that you understand the demands of your major and what your potential career will be.

Now, if you do not have a major in mind yet, you can use the statement you wrote above, BUT, it will definitely not be as effective as it can be in trying to make your application memorable to the reviewer. On that note, I'll try to point out some grammar corrections that need to be addressed should you decide to use this essay in its current form.

This quote is absolutely the best answer of me AS FAR AS I AM CONCERNED for the question.

who I want to be in my future. In fact, m my answers were different in specific times.

Many years later, I grow GREW up and understand UNDERSTOOD that nobody can predict their future or tell exactly what they will do in the next 10 years because life is a long journey which is full of unexpected twists and turns.

- Please break this up into at least 2 sentences. The idea you are discussing is too long to be expressed in only one sentence.

However, what I can BE sure OF IS that in the next 10 years, I would WILL be a well-educated and successful man. In THE next 10 years,

live in a place that WHERE innovation and creation is valued.

guy that just only knowS about myself.


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