One of the key to success is establish connection. Writing essay about networking

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essay regarding networking

One of the key to success is establish connection. I believed that good connection can make easy to achieve what we want. During I am working at XXX, I met a lot of employee which is have different discipline and character, hence can applied as lesson learned and made me learning more.

Approach type with operator and engineer are different. Need special effort if in touch with operator, since operator especially senior operator is conservative person who not willing to change their mindset. The operators relies on their experience to set operating condition without any ideas to bring operating condition nearest optimum condition.

Advanced Process Control (APC) is proven control technology and have been implemented in oil and gas, petrochemical and soon on in worldwide for 20 years. In other hand, XXX implemented APC in 2014. In the beginning, production operator team doubtful about APC since change to old mindset. I was process control team, in which responsible assisting and supervising APC vendor. I engaged with operation team as provide information plant, Distributed Control System (DCS) team as provide regulatory control system and instrument team as provide instrumentation. We regularly conducted meeting with related party about APC outstanding and followed up to solve it to ensure that APC successful to implemented. My team conducted operator training regarding APC utilization as well as how to use APC properly. Sometimes, we conducted training APC for operator refreshment. The project lasted for almost 1 year from the target project 1 year. After the completion of the project, ET plant obtained a benefit of around 1MUSD/year and payback period of less than 1 year.

As Process control and optimization engineer, I often met with vendor for meeting or workshop. Meeting regarding process control, process solution, process simulation and so on, even offering new product. I regularly conduct process simulation workshop for my department. Aspen provided free workshop. We made case which meet as real plant, hence after workshop we more confident to applied simulation.

I joined in chemical engineer Indonesia forum by using Telegram as one of administrator. Whole chemical engineer either students, lecturers, fresh graduates, or professional are welcome to join these forum. Forum itself sharing everything regarding professional experience, transfer knowledge, jobs, hand book and so on. Occasionally, we provided online discussion by professionals, lecturers or someone who willing to participate as speaker who expertise in their field. Due to join these forum as admin, our team often invited by student association in some universities as speaker as well as trainer. I had experienced as process simulator trainer in some university in Indonesia such as xxx University (2016) for advanced level, yyy University (2016, 2017) for basic level. Even, In Indonesia company such as IP (2017).

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However, your writing has a lot of grammatical and spelling problems, you need to work on the content as well. I am confusing with your second paragraph starting sentences. I could not get what you mean by (Approach type with operator and engineer are different. Need special effort if in touch with operator, since operator especially senior operator is conservative person who not willing to change their mindset.)

Try to be clear in your narrating. Here are some example and there are lots of others as well.
During my working at the XXX, I have met a lot of employees which had different disciplines and characters, hence those issues can be applied to me as lesson learned and made me to learn more.

Mochamad, your essay sounds like you used an online translator to write it in English. I cannot understand anything you are trying to say in the essay. What I can manage to pick out of your essay, tells me that this is not the networking essay that Chevening is looking for. This sounds more like your training manual than a discussion of your existing contacts outside of your office, how you developed that network, and what that network has done to help you with your job. This is more of a job description essay on your part.

A networking essay ties in with your leadership skills. In order to remain at the top of the office chain, you need to create contacts outside, but within the same profession, who can offer you assistance when performing office tasks that cannot easily be accomplished without outside help. That is the idea behind the networking essay.

You have to discuss how your network can help you improve your skills and why this network will be useful to Chevening scholars as well. Your essay is nowhere near providing the required information so you cannot use this essay. Try to look at the examples of networking skills essays here. Maybe you can get an idea as to how to write your own from their examples.