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"Emotions that are never conveyed will never die. They are buried alive and will appear in a worse way." Sigmund Freud
Mental health is still being a taboo things in Indonesia. It causes adolescent to be easily affected by mental illness. According to the data of Indonesia-National Adolescent Mental Health Survey (I-NAMHS) in 2022, there are 15,5 millions adolescents in Indonesia experiencing mental health problems. One of the main reasons why adolescents develop mental health disorders easily is that they are easily stressed out over small things and can't figure it out in the right way.
One of the activities that I do is to be a Quran teacher at the mosque near from my house every evening. I teach children from 4 to 9 years old. Is it easy to teach children? Teaching children is not easy thing to do. The most difficult part of teaching children is how to be patient and how to manage my stress while the children don't want to be conformed to the existing rules. Thing that I do to manage my stress is to tell the story to my father. Then my father teach me how to manage your stress in physcology with Neuro Language Program (NLP) method. NLP itself is psychotherapy, personal development and communication approaches that can help you to manage your stress. Since then I have interest to learn more about physcology. Learning how human behavior is based on their mind is such an interesting thing.
Hello, my name is (my name) decided to continue my studies at Eötvös Loránd University because I believe that Eötvös Loránd University has lecturers who have the best experience in their fields and has an adequate education system. My future plans are to combine psychology with technology in accordance with the times so that it can be approached by everyone, anywhere and any time. And create a youth community to channel mental health knowledge, especially for adolescents in puberty. So that they can be more aware and know how to overcome their stress.
"Emotions that are never conveyed will never die. They are buried alive and will appear in a worse way." Sigmund Freud
Mental health is still being a taboo things in Indonesia. It causes adolescent to be easily affected by mental illness. According to the data of Indonesia-National Adolescent Mental Health Survey (I-NAMHS) in 2022, there are 15,5 millions adolescents in Indonesia experiencing mental health problems. One of the main reasons why adolescents develop mental health disorders easily is that they are easily stressed out over small things and can't figure it out in the right way.
One of the activities that I do is to be a Quran teacher at the mosque near from my house every evening. I teach children from 4 to 9 years old. Is it easy to teach children? Teaching children is not easy thing to do. The most difficult part of teaching children is how to be patient and how to manage my stress while the children don't want to be conformed to the existing rules. Thing that I do to manage my stress is to tell the story to my father. Then my father teach me how to manage your stress in physcology with Neuro Language Program (NLP) method. NLP itself is psychotherapy, personal development and communication approaches that can help you to manage your stress. Since then I have interest to learn more about physcology. Learning how human behavior is based on their mind is such an interesting thing.
Hello, my name is (my name) decided to continue my studies at Eötvös Loránd University because I believe that Eötvös Loránd University has lecturers who have the best experience in their fields and has an adequate education system. My future plans are to combine psychology with technology in accordance with the times so that it can be approached by everyone, anywhere and any time. And create a youth community to channel mental health knowledge, especially for adolescents in puberty. So that they can be more aware and know how to overcome their stress.