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My paragraph for applying for a scholarship about experience in Sweden


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Feb 6, 2021   #1

essay on Knowledge & Skills Gained



Describe how you can apply the knowledge and experience gained from your time in Sweden in your organization/company and/or in your home country/region upon your return from Sweden:

The study program in sustainable development will influence my ability to apply the designed methods and processes in a case study that concerns quality education and gender equality, where the outcome will contribute to the UN 2030 agenda. As I will advance, grow professionally and further develop my leadership skills, I plan to expand my voluntary work with X organization and connect it to the NFGL alumni by organizing workshops to improve quality education and gender equality. Thus, the outcome will positively contribute to the SDGs by 2030 and further build an exchange network more diverse of expertise and knowledge that would last for long generations. Moreover, the knowledge and experience I will gain in Sweden will speed up the process I have started at my company to reduce our waste, have a responsible consumption, and apply innovative solutions for enhancing our office with sustainable ideas by transferring the best practices will be gained from the internship.

Holt  Educational Consultant - / 10,317 3351  
Feb 6, 2021   #2
Do not divide the information in the presentation. Either focus on your company or focus on the UN 2030 Agenda. If you read your response again, you will see that the UN agenda is better discussed than your plans for your company. You will have to decide. Which is your priority? The agenda or advancing your company interest? This is a character limited response statement so you need to make an impression quickly by relevantly discussing the application of information you will be receiving in Sweden in a specific field. My suggestion, is that you remove the personal interest through your company. Why? Well, you fully developed the application of the UN agenda in the presentation in a manner that, I believe uses the knowledge you will be using in a completely relevant manner. The response is relevant when compared to the single line reference you are making to your company in the statement.
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Feb 6, 2021   #3
@Holt
thank you so much, could you please check the below and tell if i have improved in writing it or not?

The study program in sustainable development will influence my ability to apply the designed methods and processes in a case study that concerns quality education and gender equality, where the outcome will contribute to the UN 2030 agenda. As I will advance, grow professionally and further develop my leadership skills, I plan to expand my voluntary work with X organization and connect it to the NFGL alumni by organizing workshops to improve quality education and gender equality. These workshops would dig deeper into empowering women to help them step away from poverty and build a better future for their families. Other workshops will be for building a school community for all children left behind and have forced to be out of school. Thus, the result will positively contribute to the SDGs by 2030 and further build an exchange network more diverse of expertise and knowledge that would last for long generations.
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Feb 16, 2021   #4
I dont get the idea how you improve your leadership skills, is it just gone by the time, or you plan to be involved in several activities that you aim to lead?

I prefer to use the UN 2030 agenda idea but supported by plan relating to your company


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