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'my preachers, Charlie & Kathleen' - Op Left Scholarship Questions essay


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May 7, 2012   #1
Who is the most interesting person you have ever met? What makes him or her interesting? (Answer must be between 80 and 120 words.)

The most interesting people I've meet in my life were my preachers, Charlie & Kathleen. Not only did they give me a reason to have faith in God, but they also taught me some level of maturity & morality. In a sense, they were sort of like a secondary parent to me. They would occasionally take my brothers and I to visit Kingdom hall, a sacred holding place for worshipping, similar to that of a church. They would take us out to movies, restaurants and events. I was even fortunate enough to visit the factory where they manufacture all the bibles and magazines. This was sincerely a blessing from God that I have had the opportunity to meet these two wonderful people.

What was your most challenging class in high school? What did you do to overcome the challenges? (Answer must be between 80 and 120 words.)

For me, the most challenging class in High school was Ap biology. My professor had a lot of expectation from me coming into his class because my older brother was a former student of his. I was already struggling to come on time, I performed borderline on exams & I was barely ever active in class. My professor made sure this was readily apparent to me.
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May 9, 2012   #3
The most interesting people I've meet in my life were my preachers, Charlie & Kathleen. Not only did they give me a reason to have faith in God, but they also taught me some level of maturity & morality. In a sense, they were sort of like a secondary parent to me. They would occasionally take my brothers and I to visit Kingdom hall, a sacred holding place for worshipping, similar to that of a church. They would take us out to movies, restaurants and events. I was even fortunate enough to visit the factory where they manufacture all the bibles and magazines. This was sincerely a blessing from God that I have had the opportunity to meet these two wonderful people.

The prompt indirectly asks you what sort of personality traits of this person made you like him. I feel you should talk more about these people in terms of their qualities, personalities, talents etc.etc. that impressed you. You have mentioned that they were instrumental in nurturing your faith in God. But it is not enough and without giving an account of the places they took you to visit, talk about them more on the lines I mentioned.

In a sense, they were sort of like a secondary parents to me.


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