prides itself in hard work
prides itself
on hard work
prevention and, counseling
I think the comma after 'and' is not needed
it's not surprising that I am in theHonors Program with a GPA of 3.76, multiple
You should use a more subtle approach. This information will be available in your resume. If not then you can use it here.
Therefore, I am qualified because I possess the qualities worthy of an outstanding scholarship leader .
Don't tell them directly, show them like in the previous paragraph.
You should make your last paragraph a little bit more
subtle otherwise it is well written. ;)