Please help me to review my reference letter.
This reference letter originally written by my supervisor in February 2019.
That time, I used this letter for Australia Awards Scholarship (AAS). But, if it is possible, I wanted to use this letter for other scholarship and to apply to the universities.
positive opinion about aas candidate
I write this letter on behalf of Mr. HYW who is applying for Australia Awards Scholarship (AAS) in order to continue his study for postgraduate degree. I have known him for over three years during the time he worked as an administrator in Market Risk Management Unit, MMM Bank.
I have recognized him as an employee who is very diligent and responsible in every task and job given. He is also very quick to adapt to new environment and job descriptions. In addition, he has high enthusiasm in each learning process. In the early years of his career here, he showed his willingness to learn and had high curiosity in his task/job. He learned tirelessly and often had a discussion with his senior or other departments in order to master his job.
Currently, Mr. HYW is responsible for daily report to regulator, monitoring derivative profit/loss, position and risk, daily profit/loss on fund report, etc. He has made 2 important improvements on his job. First is monitoring tool for derivative's transaction. Second is creating a macro to calculate bank's monetary claim and generate option data for regulatory report. These 2 improvements have made the reporting process become simpler and less prone to human error.
Thus, based on my experience working with him, he has a high interest in finance and banking. Also, he has an attribute to learn eagerly and tenaciously in order to gain more knowledge related to area in which he is interested. Therefore, without any reservation, I think he is already well prepared to continue his study for postgraduate degree.