Hello, so the prompt is described below, I just needed general thoughts and ways I can make it better and see if it is ambitious enough. Thank you!
Prompt: Please provide a statement detailing your interest in MSMP, your commitment to completing a college education, and your interest in a career in medicine
Medicine is a highly evolving field, and through which doctors have attained an essential evolutionary role in the society, not only working on individual basis but on a broader long term betterment for the society. My interest in medicine rose when I saw various doctors in the news coverage of the conflicts in Europe and Middle East. All were in intense situations, but they were generous in their help, inclusive and caring to everyone. This is what really drew me towards medicine, it is one thing that connects all people from different backgrounds, despite all the differences, for a unified goal that serves a noble purpose. This is what doctors do across the globe; they have the capacity to attend people's adversities and courage to aid them through their journey. After I graduate, I plan on getting an MD/MPH education with focus on global health. As a young migrant student in the U.S., I feel I can truly contribute to this field. This dual degree will enable me to provide medical care for individuals for a period of time, and at the same time provide what that population needs to prospectively sustain it.
Education, first and foremost, is invaluable; and college in particular is a truly challenging and cultivating experience at once that not all people are fortunate enough to be able to attend. My college education with all its components is important to me and I am committed to it, from classroom education, volunteering, engaging in university programs, to challenging career experiences; all of these parts allow me to grow and learn personal experience that enriches my over all education. I am committed to completing my college education because it is a stepping-stone to me as a female, an opportunity that my mother did not have growing up. After completing my college application I will be able to apply my gained knowledge to practical purposes use it in and through my years in medical school. It will allow me to access many doors and opportunities that I would not have been to otherwise. I am committed to completing my college education, as it is a great accomplishment, but most importantly is a first solid step towards greater endeavors.
The MSMP program substantial its entirety is and complete that any student can truly learn and gain great benefit from. I am looking forward in particular to the immersive and complete medical experience that MSMP offers to students. It will give me a clinical experience in a realistic medical school setting, and guide me in the medical application process. UTMB is Texas's first medical in Texas and I am definite that no other program can provide a better support in preparing for medical school. Attending this program will allow me to explore the MD/MPH program that UTMB offers. Last but no least, I am interested in MSMP because it will allow me to go to a place I have never to before, and learn from individuals who I would not been able to learn from were not for this generous opportunity.