There is much controversy
While the topic is controversial, the presented discussion, which asks for your opinion to be presented, leans more towards a debate. This is due to the strong . presented on both sides. The paraphrase should reflect the discussion mindset in the presentation properly.
I am in favor
Good response but lacking in supporting substance. Think of 2 supporting reasons to allow for a proper thesis outline.
Animals Act 1986
according to the U.S. Bureau of Statistics,
This is a problem. Your actual response is based on research regarding the topic. You cannot do research during the test. The computers do not have access beyond the LAN of the testing center. That is why the instruction asks you to:
...use your own ideas, knowledge and experience and support your arguments with examples and relevant evidence.The reference to the act is proof of researched evidence rather than relevant evidence. This means that you will be unable to discuss during the actual test based on common sense rather than research.
from the early 19th century until the end of the century. this century. this century. this century. this century. this. 20.
What happened here? You lost total control of your thoughts, leading to a failing C + c and GRA score.
Improve on the problem points indicated to better improve your presentation.