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Jan 13, 2026   #1
I didn't quite get the word limit for this it was in characters I believe but does it include or exclude space? I'm trying to go off what I see in doc's

I am applying to the Civil Engineering Bachelor's programme at the Budapest University of Technology and Economics (BME) to leverage my background in robotics and art to contribute to sustainable urban infrastructure development in Mongolia. BME's status as a preeminent institution with a long-standing engineering traditi ex on makes it the ideal environment for me to develop my curiosity into a professional degree.

My interest in engineering is grounded in practical experience. During high school, I was an active member of the Robocon robotics club, where I learned the value of structural analysis and mechanical feasibility. For an RC car project, I was specifically focused on the design of the robot's frame and joints, learning firsthand how load distribution and joint reaction forces determine a body's overall performance across various projects and its contacts with itself. Other notable projects included Sumo robots and Cube Collectors. Nonetheless, I learned that constant testing in 3D CAD software significantly reduced errors, allowing my final models to perform with almost no issues. This taught me that precise analysis is fundamental to practical engineering success.

This technical precision is complemented by my creative skills, as demonstrated by my top performance in IGCSE Art and studies in fashion design, which enhance my ability to approach engineering challenges with innovative and practical solutions. Art, particularly my acrylic painting and portrait work, requires balancing technical precision, such as composition, structure, and viewing perspective, with creative visualization. This practice taught me the resilience and patience to sit for long hours and finish projects. In civil engineering, this balance means I can approach a large-scale design challenge with spatial awareness and aesthetic consideration while always grounding the solution in technical feasibility.

The Budapest University of Technology and Economics is highly appealing due to its robust curriculum, particularly its focus on Structural Analysis and Geotechnics, and its vibrant international environment that fosters diverse perspectives. BME's Faculty of Civil Engineering is renowned for its specific focus on Structural Analysis, Geotechnics, and Transportation Infrastructure, all of which are taught in English. As an international student, BME offers a diverse and accessible learning environment, exposing me to rigorous European engineering standards and collaborative project-based coursework. Furthermore, studying in Budapest provides a unique opportunity to engage with a European city that has successfully navigated complex urban development challenges, offering invaluable lessons that I can adapt for Mongolia.

My ultimate goal is focused and urgent: to address the pressing air quality, housing, and urbanization issues in Ulaanbaatar, particularly within the Ger Districts. The reliance on coal for heating in these rapidly developing areas necessitates durable, energy-efficient housing solutions and improved public transport networks to reduce emissions and decentralize the city. I aim to use the knowledge gained at BME to design and implement modern transportation solutions, such as effective tram or light rail systems, and to develop sustainable, affordable building materials to replace current infrastructure. This programme aligns directly with the national development challenges that I am determined to help solve.

I understand that studying abroad presents challenges, such as adapting to a new academic culture and the demands of an English-language technical programme. To ease this, I plan to engage with BME's diverse international student community and utilize all available mentorship opportunities. I am committed to maintaining the disciplined study routine that I developed through my intensive A-Level Maths, Physics, and Chemistry subjects, as well as my art practice. I believe overcoming these challenges will not only strengthen my character but also make me a more globally aware and resilient engineer, prepared for complex international projects.

I am confident that BME will equip me with the technical knowledge, practical skills, and international perspective necessary to become a capable engineer. I am highly motivated to join this programme and contribute meaningfully to both the BME community and the future of sustainable infrastructure in Mongolia.

Thank you for considering my application.
Holt  Educational Consultant - / 16060  
Jan 14, 2026   #2
When it comes to character count, the program usually includes the spaces in the consideration so writing less, but concisely would benefit your essay response when submitting to an automated website.

You heavily used AI to polish this essay which could prove to be a problem for you should you be asked to submit to a formal oral interview. Cut and paste was done in such a manner that you were careless enough to not notice the typographical error that the Ai committed in the writing process. Those small editing mistakes are what could be the dead give away to the reviewer that you relied on AI to write this essay in a manner that could make you sound more academically capable than you actually are. Based upon the non Ai writing that you did at the start, I would say that you would be facing that problem later on, should you pass the first round of considerations.
OP Serod 1 / 1  
Jan 15, 2026   #3
Stipendium

I see thank you, 4534 characters is where my essay is right now including spaces. Should I cut down? Other than there polishing is the content I show enough is there anything that I could maybe do differently when it comes to the questions answered?
Thank you


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