My country has one of the least number of people that have higher degree levels of studies and this fact should be changed. By taking this scholarship it will not only benefit myself personally but will contribute to the percentage of people with higher degree levels on (my country). Furthermore, studying in a reputable university and in one of the most developed countries is a score added.
Studies and degrees - How will this scholarship contribute to the organisation's human resource
You are totally off base with your response. The question being asked pertains to your current career attachment. Where do you work? What sort of work does your office do? How will your upskilling help improve the human resource of your company? These are but a few response guide questions that you can consider when you develop your new response. This has nothing to do with the overall skills problem in your country. That is not the focus of the scholarship. The improvement consideration should be localized in terms of benefits. Yes, it will benefit the country overall, but that is a different discussion presentation. Focus on the discussion that is actually required for this question.