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Study plan for MS in Structural Engineering from Yokohama national University Japan


hafizawais5 1 / 1 1  
Dec 2, 2016   #1
Study Plan

Education is a vital tool that is applied in the influential exalted and brilliant world to succeed, as it mitigates the challenges which are encountered in life. Education intensified our self-assurance and provides us with the abilities we need to partake in today's world. It enables us more independent and aware of what is going on the world today. So education is an essential element to a successful and happy life. Human beings have an inalienable right to contrive themselves. In the desire to exercise this right, I travelled the journey through life in the pursuit of ultimate success, and in the meantime disclosing my potentials and unleashing my capabilities. Self-belief, quest for knowledge and aiming for excellence are the constituents of my distinctive character that have lend me a hand to attain in life whatever I desired, thought and dreamt for as a student.

With my strong willing power and predetermined goals I got secured admission for an undergraduate program in Civil Engineering Technology, "Muhammad Nawaz Sharif University of Engineering & Technology (MNS UET), Multan, Pakistan" which is working under the supervision of "University of Engineering & Technology (UET), Lahore, Pakistan" which is finest engineering college of Pakistan. With this completed my bachelor's degree in Civil Engineering Technology from Muhammad Nawaz Sharif University of Engineering and Technology Multan, Pakistan in September 2016. I secured 3.42 / 4.00 CGPA (85% Marks) and got 5th position in the Civil Engineering Department out of 40 students. I also have the honor to achieve dean of honor roles which is the most prestigious award for those, who secure GPA more than 3.7 in any semester. When I was studying I took keen interest in each topic which was taught in the class by our respected teachers. But my basic interest has always induced me to concentrate on those topics/problems which demand much thinking for their solution. The Structural Engineering subjects like Mechanics of Materials, Materials and Methods of Construction, Structural Mechanics, Concrete Technology-I, Concrete Technology-II and Seismic Design of structures drew my attention. I always have interested to solve the assignments and discussion related to these subjects. With my complete attention to these subjects, hard work, dedication and work ethic is the reason of obtaining such impressing grades.

To tell you more about my interest, my final year project, The Analysis and Design of Special Moment Resisting Frame Structure in high Seismic zone IV at Lakki Marwat, KPK Pakistan, with the help of Modern Computer Design Addis like CSI ETAB 2015, CSI SAFE 2014 & Auto CAD 2013. At the end compare the design results of software's with manual design results which is obtained by using ACI 318-14 design excel sheets. I was the group leader of Final Year Project. Upon receiving my Bachelor of Science in Civil Engineering Technology, many factors have influenced my decision of pursuing Masters of Science degree in Civil Engineering with an emphasis in Structural Engineering. My interest in Structural Engineering was sparked during my Final Year Project. Also my interest in Structural Engineering was sparked by topics such as the Light weight Structures, High-rise Buildings, Fiber Reinforced Concrete, Composite Structures and Seismic Design Philosophy introduced to me in my bachelor courses. It was further cultivated when I began attending seminars presented by the Structural Engineer. I am interested in a broad range of topics including Structural Dynamics, Fiber Reinforced Concrete, and Seismic Response and would like to further my knowledge of concepts similar to these through my graduate program of study.

Just after the completion of my study I started my professional career as Associate Engineer in one of the top client organization named "Communication & Work's Department of Punjab Government". After that I had been offered for the jobs of Sub Divisional Officer in this Department and Educator in Punjab Education Department, but my quest for research and love for education forced me to dedicate myself for teaching, where I will get the opportunity to serve my nation better. So, currently I am working as Educator in Punjab Education Department, Pakistan.

To dedicate myself into the studies of Structural Engineering (Seismic Design of Structures and Concrete Engineering) is my finest and wisest selection. I am the inhabitant of a country which has encountered some of the most horrible disasters in the history of mankind. A large number of people lost their precious lives, property, livelihood and infrastructure. I have eye-witnessed the 8 October, 2005 earthquake of 7.6 magnitude when about thousands of people dies and injured and millions displaced. There is another 24 September 2013 Earthquake in which hundreds of people are died and injured. How can I forget the effect of most recent earthquake of 26 October 2015 Pakistan? The unbearable loss, the sorrowful memories still retain in mind. I have observed them very attentively, screaming for helping hand and calmness. At that day, I have made a concrete plan I will serve humanity and my nation through my education. According to my point of view the study of earthquake engineering is best choice for me.

I am applying because of the excellent research facility and devoted faculty provided by your esteemed institution. Japan is among world's top countries that are furnishing quality education .The universities are ranked among the best universities of the world. My admission into your esteemed program is prime importance for me. With my previous knowledge and professional skills, I am well equipped to meet your expectations. I wish to pursue a Master's degree in Geotechnical Engineering through this program as it allows me to affiliate my interests in this field, gain new knowledge from various domains and then apply them in my career positively. It is my goal to use my expertise to provide innovations and face the real world challenges.
Holt  Educational Consultant - / 14,767 4772  
Dec 2, 2016   #2
Muhammad, your essay does not qualify as a study plan. The content of your essay is more of an academic biography rather than a plan of study once you are admitted to Yokohama National University in Japan. While about 85 percent of this essay is not applicable to the requirements and expectations of the prompt, there is a section that you can rehash for use in the more aligned essay that you will be writing.

For your new opening statement use the part of this work that starts with "To dedicate myself ..." That sounds like a pretty good opening statement because it introduces the background of your interest in this particular major. You can follow it up with "Just after the completion of my..." as your second paragraph. For your third paragraph, focus on the course curriculum of the masters course and other internship programs or training facilities that the university offers its students. This is where the study plan comes in.

Explain, in a summary form, what you hope to accomplish while you are a student at Yokohama. Focus on the facilities and academics that the university allows the students access to and explain how your future plans will benefit from exposure to these aspects of higher academic learning. Then delve into a discussion as to why you believe only Yokohama can offer you the kind or learning that you desire to have.

Then, in the conclusion, reiterate your excitement to attend the university and why you are looking forward to completing your studies there. These information will suffice for you to be able to develop a proper study plan.

By the way, my advice has room for adjustment. Kindly provide the full prompt requirement so that I can compare my advice to what the university requires of your written work. I may need to guide you regarding some adjustments if it becomes necessary to do so based upon the additional requirements of the essay prompt.


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