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How have I contributed to implementing change or reform
[Question: How have you contributed to solving a challenge and to implementing change or reform? (Be specific and include: what aspect/s of your leadership knowledge, skills and practice you consider to be well established and effective; which people or organizations you worked with to solve the problem; and what creative methods were used.)
ANS; My friend Is the founder of an organization named AS 'NGWO' which works to help those students in our area who can offer to study in private schools . Government school education system has become so ineffective and dumb in our region that no one wants to study there and most of people cant afford to make their children to study in private schools so need for such organization was really required . when I saw my friends working with a lot of passion and love them I joined them . I helped them to do their work officially . I helped them to maintain their data records of their work and helped them to make secured pdf files and a secure system to regulate them .
one day when friends were working effectively to help those students who need help then I decide to make my own organization which would work in a broader aspect . The aim was to help every needy and poor people not only students and thanks to god making me able be successful in my aim somehow . The organization name is HELPERS SCOUT with seven to eight persons working with me , helping me and assisting me to help others .
I think I have taken a good initiative and with strong back support and love with passion I will be able to help every single needy person in my area.