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Total International Schorlarship Application


Stefanovic 1 / 1  
May 10, 2019   #1

Chance for many young Nigerians



The Total International Scholarship has been known to give hope to many young Nigerians over the years. The exposure provided by the scholarship has increased the technical know-how and expertise of Nigerians in the Oil and Gas Industry. The Scholarship will go a long way to set me firmly on set goals.

Having taken time doing my homework on your organization, there is a convincing impression that what you have is an organization built on core professionalism and brilliant project execution, a reputation that has grown over the years with boundless prospects as to how much better it can get over the coming years, a trajectory that would require the addition of qualified personnel's to consolidate and galvanize the existent team and organization as a whole.

The chance to offer more insight into my qualifications and abilities would be most welcome.
Thank you for your consideration; I look forward to speaking with you soon.
Maria - / 1,098 389  
May 10, 2019   #2
@Stefanovic
Are you working within a specific word count?

There are lot of unexplained utterances in your essay that can be better phrased through providing thorough detail on the account of your application. For instance, you can discuss more about how specifically the scholarship has given benefits to the oil and gas industries. Do they hold collaborative projects that encourage enhanced research for the topic at hand? Moreover, you could have also tackled how the prospects of the organization has affected its outlook. Discuss how the qualifications for its members are accummulated - and how this can impact the overall flow of the essay.

If you can add more details to your essay that are both personal and professional, then merging these descriptions would reap the most benefits for your application. Discuss extensively your personal experiences that have made you passionate for your program, making you a great candidate for the scholarship. Discuss about the professional accomplishments you've had that have made you qualified for the program.

Best of luck!


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