Winning Noble Prize. It is what I'm going to achieve in my life.

Chevening leadership and influence question

Chevening is looking for individuals who will be future leader or influencers in their home countries .Explain how you meet this requirement. using clear example of your own leadership and influencing skills to support your answer. (100-500 words)

Winning Noble Prize. YES that's my answer to everyone asked me what I want to do in my life!. Because it's the most prestige and the highest honor that a scientist can receive. And tarig (my husband) just laughed. "Actions speak louder than words," he said. And that was enough to recharge and motivated me.

Do you know many of the prizewinners were Microbiologists lucky me and I chose tuberculosis to its serious role of death in Sudan.
So, I volunteered in local Awareness campaign in Elshaab Teaching Hospital for patients of TB and their families. Also volunteered to work in the WHO Tuberculosis National Survey Program, in the National Reference Laboratory in Khartoum we analyzed thousand of sputum samples collected from all state of Sudan.

Engaging with education field also give me chance to develop leadership and decision making skills, I solve the problem of missing and dyeing of bacterial strains stocks by maintain good storage conditions.

I guidance my students and colleges to be more confident and take part in health awareness in their communities in infection control and prevention,
We prepare in corporation with our college an open health day on Abu Seed Avenue.
Supporting my husband in establishing a taxi application services called MISHWAR as the first kind of online services in Sudan. Created a Facebook page calls Halo Rolls Shop selling Cinnamon Rolls and Pizza Rolls by ordering online (I love baking).

My first leadership role was in elementary school I was the first of the class which allowed me to joying the campus of talented students held by government, I was the supervisor of a unit of 16 girls. Moreover been a Mather of two under 4 years old drives me to be effective and multitasks hardworking all day long with focusing in my career, volunteering and taking care of my home.

Chevening administrator I am enthusiastic, determined and passionate with advocate personality and if you give me this opportunity I can lead the world.

Hala, this is definitely not a leadership and influencing essay. Neither is it a personal statement. In fact, I do not know what it is that you wrote here. The only thing I am sure of is that you cannot use this as a leadership and influencing essay. There is nothing in the essay that shows a seriousness on your part regarding your application for the scholarship. It sounds like you are taking it easy and you don't care whether you get the scholarship or not because you did not take care to properly represent the prompt in your presentation. This is almost written like a joke. Which is what you wrote at the beginning and which is what the reviewer will remember when he discards your application. Delete this essay from your files. This is useless and will not apply to any Chevening prompt.

Write a new essay that opens with you clearly establishing your place of leadership in one of your many work places. It would be best if you choose to discuss a leadership and influencing skill that is related to the masters degree course you are applying for. Relate an event that shows command responsibility, delegation ability, and influencing skills in terms of you needing to create order from chaos in the workplace. That will be more of an appropriate response to the essay. I repeat, do not use this current essay because it does not accomplish anything that the prompt requires as relevant information towards your application. More importantly, do not try to convince the reviewer that your childhood leadership ability is the kind of ability that the Chevening program is looking for because it isn't. The prompt requires profession related leadership and influencing abilities alone. So that means, current work experience.

Thank you can i delete this from essayforum.com and write other one?!

I think you need to start restructuring this essay