Qualities Of A Good Student
A good student
s is important because today's students are tomorrow's leaders
--> my suggestion: The vital role of high distinction students in he future of our society would become more obvious by reminding the statement that "today's students are tomorrow's leaders"
AH ardworking students is aare the students who focus inon their studies and ask their teachers if they docould not understand a topic or a concept
Do not blame other people and admit our mistakes .
--> didn't get why you added this statement!!! I think you need a transition to connect this sentence to what you were talking about in the previous sentence
Remember , do not break the rules otherwise you will be punished by
--> I think you need to revise this sentence. You need to show that obeying rules is a useful behavior and you want to follow the rules because of their advantages not because you r afraid of punishment :)))I think you need to give a clear difinition of a good student. How can a good student influence the society in the future, as you said "today's students are tomorrow's leaders".
hOPE THIS HELPS,