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|Elite education for building a career in Engineering; Benefit from education at AUC?
3 - I have been challenged with the mission of finding the most appropriate university for my higher studies in...
UndergraduateJoey1919 - Feb 13, 2013 / dumi - Feb 14, 2013
|Everything is about Choices- COMMON APP/ Hardships
Undergraduatejorgearmando18 - Feb 4, 2013 / jorgearmando18 - Feb 13, 2013
|Integrating to Queens community/ Participating in DECA& QEC - My goals for Queens
4 - dumi hmm.. okay makes sense thanks! So something along the lines of the small class sizes, etc.?...
UndergraduateAndreiLyskov - Feb 12, 2013 / AndreiLyskov - Feb 13, 2013
|WANT TO EXCEL; U Washington Transfer-Personal Statement; Electrical Engineering Major
7 - I dont know how this looks like, but the questions are not really related to each other. So i...
Undergraduatectsay12 - Feb 11, 2013 / ctsay12 - Feb 13, 2013
|Patience, Persistence and perspiration ;SOP for Masters in Germany - LETTER OF INTENT
3 - Thanks a lot Dumi..!! Tat was really helpful..so how's other parts of ma sop...?? Thank again....
Undergraduatemanusimha - Feb 12, 2013 / manusimha - Feb 13, 2013
|IMPACT OF HOCKEY; UW seattle - PERSONAL STATEMENT
Undergraduatehockeystud911 - Feb 12, 2013 / hockeystud911 - Feb 13, 2013
|"If you work your butt off and stay dedicated, success will surely come" -BEST ADVICE
Undergraduateelissa2013 - Feb 12, 2013 / dumi - Feb 13, 2013
|I am choosing Japan to continue my further education/ Reasons to attend APU
2 - This is not badly written... But I wish if you presented it in a bit more creative manner. As...
Undergraduaterejinregine - Feb 13, 2013 / dumi - Feb 13, 2013
|Inspiration at the Hospital- University of Washington Transfer Personal Statement
4 - The cleanliness and the serenity along with the bustling and hustling of patients and family members and nurses were...
Undergraduatebrendaaa1329 - Feb 11, 2013 / linadu95 - Feb 13, 2013
|QLEAD delegate; Queen's Commerce Prog - Research/ right fit
2 - Growing up with a father who is a serious stock trader, sparked my curiosity about the world from...
Undergraduatemayfl0wer - Feb 13, 2013 / dumi - Feb 13, 2013
|Chartered Accountant - Schulich School-Business Admin
9 - I'd suggest you talk about some of the things that Schulich offers that other schools dont. (Maybe a co-op...
Undergraduatetheillest - Feb 1, 2013 / AndreiLyskov - Feb 12, 2013
|"Don't wait until someone says you are great" ; The Best Advice
4 - You should give some examples of how exactly you followed her advice. (E.g. people thought you were bad at...
UndergraduateHenryAmber - Feb 8, 2013 / AndreiLyskov - Feb 12, 2013
|Ohio state app; What I look forward for next 4 years thay may surprise others
6 - I think you should get an english teacher to proof read that, there are a lot of grammatical errors...
UndergraduateAndream1 - Feb 10, 2013 / AndreiLyskov - Feb 12, 2013
|A Mind for Nursing and Midwifery-UT Austin NURSING TRANSFER Statement of Purpose
Undergraduateinherbluehands - Feb 11, 2013 / inherbluehands - Feb 12, 2013
|Transfer Upenn supplement - Benjamin Franklin quote. Multi-dimensionality
Undergraduateeam2 - Feb 10, 2013 / dumi - Feb 11, 2013
|College Paper : Memoirs, personal narrative.
Undergraduateggplz - Feb 11, 2013 / android21 - Feb 11, 2013
|My best friend, The person who has inspired your life the most
3 - Its a good start. But tell us how she inspired you, what as a person made her inspiring? Give...
UndergraduateZeisha - Feb 11, 2013 / tiff_007 - Feb 11, 2013
|Out-of-State University ; Transfer- What excites me about GW Commnunity
Undergraduateyeseniapereyra - Feb 10, 2013 / dumi - Feb 11, 2013
|A-S.T.A.R.-Y Weekend at a home within my home"; Tobin Hill/ UT-Personal interaction
3 - Thank you...
Undergraduatey2kendoll - Jan 10, 2013 / y2kendoll - Feb 11, 2013
|Breaking the glass ceiling amongst women in Engineering - UofT Engineering SPF
4 - You have nicely presented this... It speaks well about your character, background and will. However, other than the Nalalie...
Undergraduatemnou - Feb 10, 2013 / dumi - Feb 11, 2013
|"Difference is the essence"; U Washington/SeattleTransfer - Personal Statement
UndergraduateEvan9221 - Feb 7, 2013 / Evan9221 - Feb 10, 2013
|"From now on, I'll connect the dots my own way," says Calvin in the comic strip "
4 - Hello dear paraht . i have a filing that i have already read your essay :) just strange filling...
UndergraduateParahat95 - Jan 7, 2013 / serdarovez - Feb 10, 2013
|Sister diagnosed with EPILEPSY; U Richmond Transfer/ EXPERIENCE leaving comfort zone
4 - I expressed you my concern because I feel this is not exactly in line with what they expect. However,...
Undergraduatecpdphilippe - Feb 9, 2013 / dumi - Feb 10, 2013
|IMAGE OF MY TRIBE; Difference in community; What you learned from that experience?
2 - I represent a tribal community in Pakistan which had traditionally been regarded as aggressive and rude. During my Ordinary...
UndergraduateAryanK - Feb 10, 2013 / dumi - Feb 10, 2013
|Why waterloo; Why software engineering; Why CS
UndergraduateVVCepheiA - Feb 8, 2013 / dumi - Feb 10, 2013
|University of Texas Transfer application! Personal statement- Learning From my city
2 - This is beautifully presented. But if you are desperate in cutting down the word count, take a few things...
Undergraduatelexineeb - Feb 8, 2013 / dumi - Feb 9, 2013
|MAJOR Career Change - UW Tacoma Transfer Personal Statement
Undergraduatetheapocalypse - Feb 6, 2013 / dumi - Feb 9, 2013
|Explore my passion for science in depth; Transfer Essay
3 - the prompt is.. Please provide a statement (appr. 250-500 words) that addresses your reasons for transferring and the objectives...
Undergraduatejpsmyth - Feb 7, 2013 / jpsmyth - Feb 8, 2013
|The not so straight path - University of Washington - Transfer Personal Statement
UndergraduateRuckus - Feb 6, 2013 / dumi - Feb 8, 2013
|Reading Interests; Hackers and painters; Waterloo AIF
3 - Thanks you sooooooooo much! I have another (the last one T^T!!) essay which needs help too... Could you help...
UndergraduateVVCepheiA - Feb 8, 2013 / VVCepheiA - Feb 8, 2013
|ACCOUNTING/ STUDY @ WATERLOO AIF; Additional Information -My Self Description
4 - Generally it is a good prose :) However, you need to actually elaborate on how you study since your...
UndergraduateSupreme - Feb 6, 2013 / VVCepheiA - Feb 8, 2013
|WHY Software Engineering? Goals - Waterloo AIF
UndergraduateVVCepheiA - Feb 7, 2013 / dumi - Feb 8, 2013
|curiosity and passion ; Motivation and Leadership
3 - .... there are two things and hence you need the plural version. My suggestion; In fact it is...
Undergraduatelalala15 - Feb 3, 2013 / dumi - Feb 8, 2013
|I have learned to be optimistic and resolute
3 - It's good to have your prompt so that we can align our comments with that. Next time you make...
Undergraduateyussufosman - Feb 3, 2013 / dumi - Feb 8, 2013
|INFLUENCE OF MY PARENTS; U Central Florida- One faces the future with one's past
Undergraduatejellobello62 - Feb 3, 2013 / dumi - Feb 8, 2013
|I did not have a proper direction; Common App 250-500 word essay.
Undergraduatedavidhenning - Feb 7, 2013 / dumi - Feb 8, 2013
|I WAS BORN IN RIYADH; Story line of MY LIFE
Undergraduatelala 1991 - Feb 7, 2013 / SKhan - Feb 7, 2013
|DAD/ PEY Program; Chemical Eng-UToronto;INSPIRE/EXTRACURRICULAR
UndergraduatePinkers - Feb 2, 2013 / Pinkers - Feb 7, 2013
|Evaluation of SOP for MS in Computer Science
2 - ... "my career" sounds slight repetition. Well, I suggest; These words have always inspired me and guided me...
Undergraduateapoorva_reddy91 - Feb 7, 2013 / dumi - Feb 7, 2013
|Fuel behind Fire; Howard University transfer essay-Strengths, weaknesses & motivation
UndergraduateBlove27 - Feb 7, 2013 / dumi - Feb 7, 2013
|"We Sink to rise" University of Washington Transfer Personal Statement
NEW - Hawaii is a culture of its own. Most non-islanders consider Hawaii as a vacation destination where they can enjoy...
Undergraduateuser808 - Feb 7, 2013 / — -
|I am interested in people,new cultues & new things; Rutgers U- Vibrant community
UndergraduateAbidemi - Feb 1, 2013 / dumi - Feb 7, 2013
|My father suffered from strokes; Why nursing as my profession? Short /Long term goals
3 - I think you can write really well. I didn't come across any grammar or presentation error to highlight except...
Undergraduatefrancescaniu - Feb 1, 2013 / dumi - Feb 6, 2013
|ARCHITECTURE/ WHAT SPECIFIC ASPECTS OF SMITH C WILL BETTER MEET MY ACADEMIC GOALS
3 - Smith College offers the best solution for my enthusiasm for architecture and preference for studying in a women's...
Undergraduatedreamer13 - Jan 31, 2013 / dumi - Feb 6, 2013
|TRANSFERING REASONS & OBJECTIVES TO ACHIEVE; ENGINEERING
3 - Generally I recommend others to start with a positive note on your current college rather than a negative....
Undergraduateyeseniapereyra - Feb 6, 2013 / dumi - Feb 6, 2013
|Helping ethnic people and discovering new modern knowledge
3 - As a kid, I used to dream about winning a scholarship that would help me studying abroad, becoming...
Undergraduatebenvo - Jan 31, 2013 / dumi - Feb 6, 2013
|CHESS PLAYER; U MICH COMMON APP; Community I belong
Undergraduatewerdaje - Feb 1, 2013 / dumi - Feb 6, 2013
|ACCOUNTING,FINANCIAL MANAGEMENT; Personal Statement (MASTERS)
Undergraduateli guo - Feb 5, 2013 / dumi - Feb 6, 2013
|Drawing, Photography & Music; SAIC Personal Statement
Undergraduatekeana - Jan 31, 2013 / dumi - Feb 6, 2013
|Nurses make a difference every day!; Personal Statement (NURSING)
Undergraduatefazebra8 - Jan 31, 2013 / dumi - Feb 6, 2013
|Anyelo almonte - Bloomfield college self recommendation
3 - Thanks a lot...
Undergraduateanyelo70 - Feb 4, 2013 / anyelo70 - Feb 5, 2013
|"Who's that, hunky?" ; UPenn Wharton-EXTRACURRICULAR
3 - Hello, After reading all three of these short essays, I have absolutely no idea what you are talking...
Undergraduateandroid21 - Feb 4, 2013 / admission2012 - Feb 5, 2013
|"Warrior Princess"- KARATE ; Extracurricular activities
UndergraduateEpsilon - Feb 4, 2013 / dumi - Feb 5, 2013
|Global economic structure& fiancial system;GWU Transfer(WHY GWU?)Goals &determination
Undergraduatenair - Jan 31, 2013 / dumi - Feb 5, 2013
|My imagination ; COMMON APP - Extracurricular or Work experiences
5 - I and most of my friend come together, almost every month, and try to explore each character.Much like a...
Undergraduatekabal - Feb 4, 2013 / kabal - Feb 5, 2013
|U OF T engineering adimission essay; engineer is an appropriate profession for me
UndergraduateDAVIDHAN - Feb 1, 2013 / dumi - Feb 5, 2013
|Passion and Inspiration - Queens University Personal Statement of Experience
Undergraduatenataliemd - Feb 4, 2013 / dumi - Feb 5, 2013
|Photography, Psychology, Biology/ Personal relationships; Why Skidmore a good match?
5 - Well.... I suggest you to combine both these ideas and write one answer. That answer would carry more...
Undergraduatedanimeep - Feb 4, 2013 / dumi - Feb 5, 2013
|BACHELORS IN ECONOMICS; TRANSFER - University of Chicago
4 - A little wordy. I might start with a slice of life at your community college - like a question...
Undergraduatekabal - Jan 31, 2013 / abrownie - Feb 4, 2013
|curriculum-Economics, Neuropsychology& Chinese studies; Why Transfer?
4 - This is a really good essay. but i think you can be specific in identifying what facilities you hope...
Undergraduatelauman112233 - Feb 3, 2013 / kabal - Feb 4, 2013
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