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|A-S.T.A.R.-Y Weekend at a home within my home"; Tobin Hill/ UT-Personal interaction
3 - Thank you...
Undergraduatey2kendoll - Jan 10, 2013 / y2kendoll - Feb 11, 2013
|Breaking the glass ceiling amongst women in Engineering - UofT Engineering SPF
4 - You have nicely presented this... It speaks well about your character, background and will. However, other than the Nalalie...
Undergraduatemnou - Feb 10, 2013 / dumi - Feb 11, 2013
|"Difference is the essence"; U Washington/SeattleTransfer - Personal Statement
UndergraduateEvan9221 - Feb 7, 2013 / Evan9221 - Feb 10, 2013
|"From now on, I'll connect the dots my own way," says Calvin in the comic strip "
4 - Hello dear paraht . i have a filing that i have already read your essay :) just strange filling...
UndergraduateParahat95 - Jan 7, 2013 / serdarovez - Feb 10, 2013
|Sister diagnosed with EPILEPSY; U Richmond Transfer/ EXPERIENCE leaving comfort zone
4 - I expressed you my concern because I feel this is not exactly in line with what they expect. However,...
Undergraduatecpdphilippe - Feb 9, 2013 / dumi - Feb 10, 2013
|IMAGE OF MY TRIBE; Difference in community; What you learned from that experience?
2 - I represent a tribal community in Pakistan which had traditionally been regarded as aggressive and rude. During my Ordinary...
UndergraduateAryanK - Feb 10, 2013 / dumi - Feb 10, 2013
|Why waterloo; Why software engineering; Why CS
UndergraduateVVCepheiA - Feb 8, 2013 / dumi - Feb 10, 2013
|University of Texas Transfer application! Personal statement- Learning From my city
2 - This is beautifully presented. But if you are desperate in cutting down the word count, take a few things...
Undergraduatelexineeb - Feb 8, 2013 / dumi - Feb 9, 2013
|MAJOR Career Change - UW Tacoma Transfer Personal Statement
Undergraduatetheapocalypse - Feb 6, 2013 / dumi - Feb 9, 2013
|Explore my passion for science in depth; Transfer Essay
3 - the prompt is.. Please provide a statement (appr. 250-500 words) that addresses your reasons for transferring and the objectives...
Undergraduatejpsmyth - Feb 7, 2013 / jpsmyth - Feb 8, 2013
|The not so straight path - University of Washington - Transfer Personal Statement
UndergraduateRuckus - Feb 6, 2013 / dumi - Feb 8, 2013
|Reading Interests; Hackers and painters; Waterloo AIF
3 - Thanks you sooooooooo much! I have another (the last one T^T!!) essay which needs help too... Could you help...
UndergraduateVVCepheiA - Feb 8, 2013 / VVCepheiA - Feb 8, 2013
|ACCOUNTING/ STUDY @ WATERLOO AIF; Additional Information -My Self Description
4 - Generally it is a good prose :) However, you need to actually elaborate on how you study since your...
UndergraduateSupreme - Feb 6, 2013 / VVCepheiA - Feb 8, 2013
|WHY Software Engineering? Goals - Waterloo AIF
UndergraduateVVCepheiA - Feb 7, 2013 / dumi - Feb 8, 2013
|curiosity and passion ; Motivation and Leadership
3 - .... there are two things and hence you need the plural version. My suggestion; In fact it is...
Undergraduatelalala15 - Feb 3, 2013 / dumi - Feb 8, 2013
|I have learned to be optimistic and resolute
3 - It's good to have your prompt so that we can align our comments with that. Next time you make...
Undergraduateyussufosman - Feb 3, 2013 / dumi - Feb 8, 2013
|INFLUENCE OF MY PARENTS; U Central Florida- One faces the future with one's past
Undergraduatejellobello62 - Feb 3, 2013 / dumi - Feb 8, 2013
|I did not have a proper direction; Common App 250-500 word essay.
Undergraduatedavidhenning - Feb 7, 2013 / dumi - Feb 8, 2013
|I WAS BORN IN RIYADH; Story line of MY LIFE
Undergraduatelala 1991 - Feb 7, 2013 / SKhan - Feb 7, 2013
|DAD/ PEY Program; Chemical Eng-UToronto;INSPIRE/EXTRACURRICULAR
UndergraduatePinkers - Feb 2, 2013 / Pinkers - Feb 7, 2013
|Evaluation of SOP for MS in Computer Science
2 - ... "my career" sounds slight repetition. Well, I suggest; These words have always inspired me and guided me...
Undergraduateapoorva_reddy91 - Feb 7, 2013 / dumi - Feb 7, 2013
|Fuel behind Fire; Howard University transfer essay-Strengths, weaknesses & motivation
UndergraduateBlove27 - Feb 7, 2013 / dumi - Feb 7, 2013
|"We Sink to rise" University of Washington Transfer Personal Statement
NEW - Hawaii is a culture of its own. Most non-islanders consider Hawaii as a vacation destination where they can enjoy...
Undergraduateuser808 - Feb 7, 2013 / — -
|I am interested in people,new cultues & new things; Rutgers U- Vibrant community
UndergraduateAbidemi - Feb 1, 2013 / dumi - Feb 7, 2013
|My father suffered from strokes; Why nursing as my profession? Short /Long term goals
3 - I think you can write really well. I didn't come across any grammar or presentation error to highlight except...
Undergraduatefrancescaniu - Feb 1, 2013 / dumi - Feb 6, 2013
|ARCHITECTURE/ WHAT SPECIFIC ASPECTS OF SMITH C WILL BETTER MEET MY ACADEMIC GOALS
3 - Smith College offers the best solution for my enthusiasm for architecture and preference for studying in a women's...
Undergraduatedreamer13 - Jan 31, 2013 / dumi - Feb 6, 2013
|TRANSFERING REASONS & OBJECTIVES TO ACHIEVE; ENGINEERING
3 - Generally I recommend others to start with a positive note on your current college rather than a negative....
Undergraduateyeseniapereyra - Feb 6, 2013 / dumi - Feb 6, 2013
|Helping ethnic people and discovering new modern knowledge
3 - As a kid, I used to dream about winning a scholarship that would help me studying abroad, becoming...
Undergraduatebenvo - Jan 31, 2013 / dumi - Feb 6, 2013
|CHESS PLAYER; U MICH COMMON APP; Community I belong
Undergraduatewerdaje - Feb 1, 2013 / dumi - Feb 6, 2013
|ACCOUNTING,FINANCIAL MANAGEMENT; Personal Statement (MASTERS)
Undergraduateli guo - Feb 5, 2013 / dumi - Feb 6, 2013
|Drawing, Photography & Music; SAIC Personal Statement
Undergraduatekeana - Jan 31, 2013 / dumi - Feb 6, 2013
|Nurses make a difference every day!; Personal Statement (NURSING)
Undergraduatefazebra8 - Jan 31, 2013 / dumi - Feb 6, 2013
|Anyelo almonte - Bloomfield college self recommendation
3 - Thanks a lot...
Undergraduateanyelo70 - Feb 4, 2013 / anyelo70 - Feb 5, 2013
|"Who's that, hunky?" ; UPenn Wharton-EXTRACURRICULAR
3 - Hello, After reading all three of these short essays, I have absolutely no idea what you are talking...
Undergraduateandroid21 - Feb 4, 2013 / admission2012 - Feb 5, 2013
|"Warrior Princess"- KARATE ; Extracurricular activities
UndergraduateEpsilon - Feb 4, 2013 / dumi - Feb 5, 2013
|Global economic structure& fiancial system;GWU Transfer(WHY GWU?)Goals &determination
Undergraduatenair - Jan 31, 2013 / dumi - Feb 5, 2013
|My imagination ; COMMON APP - Extracurricular or Work experiences
5 - I and most of my friend come together, almost every month, and try to explore each character.Much like a...
Undergraduatekabal - Feb 4, 2013 / kabal - Feb 5, 2013
|U OF T engineering adimission essay; engineer is an appropriate profession for me
UndergraduateDAVIDHAN - Feb 1, 2013 / dumi - Feb 5, 2013
|Passion and Inspiration - Queens University Personal Statement of Experience
Undergraduatenataliemd - Feb 4, 2013 / dumi - Feb 5, 2013
|Photography, Psychology, Biology/ Personal relationships; Why Skidmore a good match?
5 - Well.... I suggest you to combine both these ideas and write one answer. That answer would carry more...
Undergraduatedanimeep - Feb 4, 2013 / dumi - Feb 5, 2013
|BACHELORS IN ECONOMICS; TRANSFER - University of Chicago
4 - A little wordy. I might start with a slice of life at your community college - like a question...
Undergraduatekabal - Jan 31, 2013 / abrownie - Feb 4, 2013
|curriculum-Economics, Neuropsychology& Chinese studies; Why Transfer?
4 - This is a really good essay. but i think you can be specific in identifying what facilities you hope...
Undergraduatelauman112233 - Feb 3, 2013 / kabal - Feb 4, 2013
|Sinking Deep into the labyrinths of my mind lays an itch- WHY Uchicago?
4 - Thank You for replying, I have sent one essay specifically talking about learning and how the interest developed, This...
Undergraduatemanjot - Feb 3, 2013 / manjot - Feb 4, 2013
|TRAVEL to the USA; Umass Lowell & Umass Amherst -EXTRACURRICULAR/ WORK EXP
9 - Okay, I could do that. Should there anything else to be done to make the essay better in your...
UndergraduateEpsilon - Feb 1, 2013 / Epsilon - Feb 4, 2013
|I desire to become a leader; Brown U- Interest in Transfering
5 - I think its a pretty good essay but try to elaborate more about brown's open curriculum and what make...
Undergraduateksyar2001 - Jan 28, 2013 / lauman112233 - Feb 4, 2013
|I swim out into the ocean often/ This is store is my home; UPENN Extracircular essays
Undergraduateandroid21 - Feb 3, 2013 / android21 - Feb 4, 2013
|biochemistry and biotchnology motivation letter for Erasmus Mundus, Medastar Program
Undergraduatemoodalo - Jan 30, 2013 / dumi - Feb 4, 2013
|Essay - Thoughts on thesis? - essay for Shakespeare (UAS) class
10 - The character Lago should be in Italics with capital L Iago is a master manipulator whose cunning strength...
Undergraduatestoya - Feb 1, 2013 / manjot - Feb 4, 2013
|Studying with foreign students; My exchange student planner
3 - At first, I was fascinated by the new experiences in foreign countries. However, later I realized it offers...
UndergraduateIcebird - Feb 3, 2013 / dumi - Feb 4, 2013
|Family of mech engineers/Teaching in UofT; UToronto- Physics Teacher
NEW - What skills have you developed through your extra-curricular experiences that will support your future success as both a student...
UndergraduateTengo - Feb 3, 2013 / — -
|Foxconn factory; UMICH- Extracurricular/Work Experience
Undergraduatelauman112233 - Jan 31, 2013 / android21 - Feb 2, 2013
|I am proud to say that I have good study habits - UW Madison
2 - To many people, grades are very important. I would be one of the people who agree that the grades...
Undergraduatexoxo4 - Feb 1, 2013 / Didgeridoo - Feb 2, 2013
|'I move. I change. I create.' - UPenn Ben Franklin essay
4 - I agree with Epsilon; I would definitely elaborate on what things you do that support you labeling yourself a...
Undergraduatekrj0718 - Feb 2, 2013 / Didgeridoo - Feb 2, 2013
|What is regret? ; significant experience, achievement, ethical delima
3 - Reading the first paragraph, I didn't feel like it was the most amazing essay ever, but your writing is...
Undergraduatetiff_007 - Feb 1, 2013 / Epsilon - Feb 2, 2013
|BORN IN BRAZIL; U Mich 250 words "Cultural Salad"
Undergraduatelps55 - Feb 1, 2013 / shad81 - Feb 2, 2013
|Comprehending Math; recent academic challenge
6 - Thank you so much, I don't mind constructive criticism, besides I really needed help to fix this essay! I'll...
Undergraduatejanajackson - Jan 28, 2013 / janajackson - Feb 2, 2013
|BAND/ NATIONAL HONOR SOCIETY; How I can contribute diversity
5 - Expand more on your 'variety in interested and relationships'. I get what you were aiming for but try to...
UndergraduateJames125 - Jan 31, 2013 / tiff_007 - Feb 1, 2013
|U Mich "Not love at first sight" 500 word essay
2 - I really enjoyed it! I'm also studying Communications. Don't really know where else you can improve. Well written and...
Undergraduatelps55 - Feb 1, 2013 / tiff_007 - Feb 1, 2013
|WOMEN WHO DESIRE TO SET PRECEDENTS, CHANGE HISTORY & SUCCEED; U Michigan ; COMMUNITY
Undergraduatehkk24 - Jan 22, 2013 / iprocrastinate - Feb 1, 2013
|My home, My community (Michigan Essay)
4 - I agree with dumi! Also, this sentence seems to me like it needs to be reorganized but dont know...
Undergraduatesanket_c - Jan 31, 2013 / werdaje - Feb 1, 2013
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