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|BACHELORS IN ECONOMICS; TRANSFER - University of Chicago
4 - A little wordy. I might start with a slice of life at your community college - like a question...
Undergraduatekabal - Jan 31, 2013 / abrownie - Feb 4, 2013
|curriculum-Economics, Neuropsychology& Chinese studies; Why Transfer?
4 - This is a really good essay. but i think you can be specific in identifying what facilities you hope...
Undergraduatelauman112233 - Feb 3, 2013 / kabal - Feb 4, 2013
|Sinking Deep into the labyrinths of my mind lays an itch- WHY Uchicago?
4 - Thank You for replying, I have sent one essay specifically talking about learning and how the interest developed, This...
Undergraduatemanjot - Feb 3, 2013 / manjot - Feb 4, 2013
|TRAVEL to the USA; Umass Lowell & Umass Amherst -EXTRACURRICULAR/ WORK EXP
9 - Okay, I could do that. Should there anything else to be done to make the essay better in your...
UndergraduateEpsilon - Feb 1, 2013 / Epsilon - Feb 4, 2013
|I desire to become a leader; Brown U- Interest in Transfering
5 - I think its a pretty good essay but try to elaborate more about brown's open curriculum and what make...
Undergraduateksyar2001 - Jan 28, 2013 / lauman112233 - Feb 4, 2013
|I swim out into the ocean often/ This is store is my home; UPENN Extracircular essays
Undergraduateandroid21 - Feb 3, 2013 / android21 - Feb 4, 2013
|biochemistry and biotchnology motivation letter for Erasmus Mundus, Medastar Program
Undergraduatemoodalo - Jan 30, 2013 / dumi - Feb 4, 2013
|Essay - Thoughts on thesis? - essay for Shakespeare (UAS) class
10 - The character Lago should be in Italics with capital L Iago is a master manipulator whose cunning strength...
Undergraduatestoya - Feb 1, 2013 / manjot - Feb 4, 2013
|Studying with foreign students; My exchange student planner
3 - At first, I was fascinated by the new experiences in foreign countries. However, later I realized it offers...
UndergraduateIcebird - Feb 3, 2013 / dumi - Feb 4, 2013
|Family of mech engineers/Teaching in UofT; UToronto- Physics Teacher
NEW - What skills have you developed through your extra-curricular experiences that will support your future success as both a student...
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|Foxconn factory; UMICH- Extracurricular/Work Experience
Undergraduatelauman112233 - Jan 31, 2013 / android21 - Feb 2, 2013
|I am proud to say that I have good study habits - UW Madison
2 - To many people, grades are very important. I would be one of the people who agree that the grades...
Undergraduatexoxo4 - Feb 1, 2013 / Didgeridoo - Feb 2, 2013
|'I move. I change. I create.' - UPenn Ben Franklin essay
4 - I agree with Epsilon; I would definitely elaborate on what things you do that support you labeling yourself a...
Undergraduatekrj0718 - Feb 2, 2013 / Didgeridoo - Feb 2, 2013
|What is regret? ; significant experience, achievement, ethical delima
3 - Reading the first paragraph, I didn't feel like it was the most amazing essay ever, but your writing is...
Undergraduatetiff_007 - Feb 1, 2013 / Epsilon - Feb 2, 2013
|BORN IN BRAZIL; U Mich 250 words "Cultural Salad"
Undergraduatelps55 - Feb 1, 2013 / shad81 - Feb 2, 2013
|Comprehending Math; recent academic challenge
6 - Thank you so much, I don't mind constructive criticism, besides I really needed help to fix this essay! I'll...
Undergraduatejanajackson - Jan 28, 2013 / janajackson - Feb 2, 2013
|BAND/ NATIONAL HONOR SOCIETY; How I can contribute diversity
5 - Expand more on your 'variety in interested and relationships'. I get what you were aiming for but try to...
UndergraduateJames125 - Jan 31, 2013 / tiff_007 - Feb 1, 2013
|U Mich "Not love at first sight" 500 word essay
2 - I really enjoyed it! I'm also studying Communications. Don't really know where else you can improve. Well written and...
Undergraduatelps55 - Feb 1, 2013 / tiff_007 - Feb 1, 2013
|WOMEN WHO DESIRE TO SET PRECEDENTS, CHANGE HISTORY & SUCCEED; U Michigan ; COMMUNITY
Undergraduatehkk24 - Jan 22, 2013 / iprocrastinate - Feb 1, 2013
|My home, My community (Michigan Essay)
4 - I agree with dumi! Also, this sentence seems to me like it needs to be reorganized but dont know...
Undergraduatesanket_c - Jan 31, 2013 / werdaje - Feb 1, 2013
|Fashion is much more than what meets the eye; Fashion Institute of Technology
3 - What makes you a perfect candidate for FIT? Why are you interested in the major you are applying to?...
Undergraduatenicolecunn - Jan 31, 2013 / nicolecunn - Feb 1, 2013
|Working for TSN as a broadcaster; Ryerson U - RTA School of Media Personal Essay
Undergraduatedynagen - Jan 30, 2013 / dumi - Feb 1, 2013
|MOVING TO AMERICA/ Words of Wisdom - AUTOBIOGRAPY
2 - I am also working on the the same essay topic! I am not experience but 15( numbers) " fifteen"...
Undergraduateveexx3 - Jan 31, 2013 / Mysaratoga87 - Jan 31, 2013
|Horseback community; Extra-Curricular
Undergraduatetiff_007 - Jan 31, 2013 / tiff_007 - Jan 31, 2013
|Drabble; EXTRACURRICULAR/ WORK EXPERIENCE
2 - A few minor changes I likeenjoy writing drabble; it is morebecause of how challenging it is ....
Undergraduaterbtrinh - Jan 30, 2013 / tiff_007 - Jan 31, 2013
|Taking care of baby sister/Volunteer SFU;UBC ADMISSIONS - EXPERIENCE/ FIVE ACTIVITIES
2 - Over time, I have learned everything there was toabout tending to a baby. BeingBecause I was the eldest, I...
Undergraduatej011095 - Jan 31, 2013 / Jennyflower81 - Jan 31, 2013
|University of Wisconsin International Undergrad Statements.
3 - Thank you very much! I've always been very bad with punctuation. If your'e sure that these aren't the...
UndergraduateOmarZz - Jan 31, 2013 / OmarZz - Jan 31, 2013
|"The Rut"; Common App Transfer Essay
2 - Fantastic job! I have a few suggestions to change your wording. Gracie is mildly autistic; meaning life is...
Undergraduatekimha3496 - Jan 31, 2013 / Jennyflower81 - Jan 31, 2013
|Pass the NCLEX / Board certified; Personal statement for nursing school
4 - Should I just erase the school part about "after many years of frustration in school and workplace?" Should I...
Undergraduatealiuod - Jan 30, 2013 / aliuod - Jan 31, 2013
|Clever peers/Asking Questions/ USC and SHSS ; JACOB UNI
NEW - I will submit these supplements in no more than 5 hours so it's URGENT and any help WILL BE...
UndergraduateVVCepheiA - Jan 31, 2013 / — -
|First Prize in National Olympiad in Informatics; Lafayette supp- Why not?
UndergraduateVVCepheiA - Jan 15, 2013 / VVCepheiA - Jan 31, 2013
|Small liberal arts school/ Chllenge mentally&academically; Why hobart and williams?
6 - Be more specific! For instance, you can write about a specific program or couse that capture you! And the...
Undergraduatenayelojello - Dec 31, 2012 / VVCepheiA - Jan 31, 2013
|To be an exception; UMichigan - Community
2 - .. "renowned" is generally used with a positive note(The quality of being widely honored and acclaimed) and therefore...
Undergraduatehtn2013 - Jan 30, 2013 / dumi - Jan 31, 2013
|Cuturally diversified India; Umich - Communities
Undergraduatesmellybuns - Jan 30, 2013 / smellybuns - Jan 31, 2013
|Strong commitment ,Research;U Michigan-School of Nursing/Unique qualities
Undergraduatehtn2013 - Jan 31, 2013 / dumi - Jan 31, 2013
|Debate Team; Common App Short Answer (extracurricular)
4 - I wanted to emphasis on how the experience of debate team has improved me on other activities. In this...
Undergraduateyvette0704 - Jan 30, 2013 / yvette0704 - Jan 31, 2013
|Umich Transfer Essay, Community Essay Prompt (ADHD is beautiful)
Undergraduateaprilmelody93 - Jan 30, 2013 / admission2012 - Jan 30, 2013
|Leap of faith to Rice University - What motivated you to apply to Rice University?
4 - One more try!! :) thanks for everyone's time! What motivated you to apply to Rice University? Please be...
Undergraduateyeseniapereyra - Jan 25, 2013 / yeseniapereyra - Jan 30, 2013
|Explored Nepal; ST. LAWRENCE SUPP - how I spent summer
Undergraduatehoneypuff - Jan 30, 2013 / honeypuff - Jan 30, 2013
|Relationship with my Dad; U Texas- exceptional hardships, challenges, opportunities
NEW - There may be personal information that you want considered as part of your admissions application. Write an essay describing...
UndergraduateAniece - Jan 30, 2013 / — -
|"BEST" ; Personal Statement for Fashion Business Management (Master Degree)
NEW - Hey! Need your help. I'm applying for the Fashion Business Management (MA) and I want to get your tips...
Undergraduateaudrjuo - Jan 30, 2013 / — -
|I CAN RELY ON MOM; PERSONAL STATEMENT - person with Significant influence
NEW - Essay Topic - Indicate a person who has had a significant influence on you, and describe that influence. ...
Undergraduatetomcruisin444 - Jan 30, 2013 / — -
|Cultural Diversity; WISCONSIN MADISON- Something unnoticed
NEW - TOPIC: Consider something in your life you think goes unnoticed and write about why it's important to you. ...
Undergraduateandy02px2013 - Jan 30, 2013 / — -
|Medicine/ volunteer/ Visual Art ; UW-MADISON - Academic/Extracurricular/ Research
Undergraduatepqahpikachu - Jan 25, 2013 / pqahpikachu - Jan 30, 2013
|University of Toronto SAF - Questions - Management - Accounting Co-op.
7 - My love for mathematics has enhanced my ability to thoroughly analyze and solve problems. It has also taught me...
Undergraduateskg94 - Jan 29, 2013 / skg94 - Jan 30, 2013
|"My passion on Urban Planning" UIUC TRANSFER - Academic & Professional Goals
4 - Hello, This is a good essay. Your travels lend credibility to your assertions. However, there is one major...
Undergraduateivannayuan - Jan 28, 2013 / admission2012 - Jan 29, 2013
|Global Business at University of Southern California; Transfer essay to USC 2013
3 - Hello, As you might expect, USC is one of the most popular schools for transfer students. As such,...
Undergraduaterbtrinh - Jan 29, 2013 / admission2012 - Jan 29, 2013
|my world made my dream to be a nurse; Empire State College; why, your goals, strenghts
UndergraduateMysaratoga87 - Jan 28, 2013 / Mysaratoga87 - Jan 29, 2013
|Bachelor's in health science/ Cancer patients; REASONS FOR TRANSFER/OBJECTIVES [USC
4 - My suggestions and corrections are in (). Overall it is good, but you should review your grammer regarding comma's...
Undergraduateelizd04671 - Jan 28, 2013 / courtney24601 - Jan 29, 2013
|I wanted to be the one who strives; Statement of Purpose for UT
Undergraduatebarefootmougli - Jan 28, 2013 / Dr Seus - Jan 29, 2013
2 - Their lips curled into a smile, one that i could not find the words to describe. The beauty of...
UndergraduateAliyev - Jan 29, 2013 / Dr Seus - Jan 29, 2013
|Astana's competition ; UBC - How I responded to a significant challenge
3 - Thank you for response.Here is the corrected one Sometimes in your life appear chances which you cannot miss....
UndergraduateAliyev - Jan 27, 2013 / Aliyev - Jan 29, 2013
|"Green Uniform"; Ubc -experience made you to rethink your perspectives
3 - In my essay I am trying to say that after I experienced how people earn money,I understood that I...
UndergraduateAliyev - Jan 28, 2013 / Aliyev - Jan 29, 2013
|WHAT ARE HUMANS IF NOT FAMILIAR STRANGERS ON THIS EARTH. transfer essay..
2 - When you say "family" it generally refers to your immediate family and excludes your extended families. ...
Undergraduatetriox99 - Jan 29, 2013 / dumi - Jan 29, 2013
|TEACHING BY TWELVE; Given the resources, what will you seek to better understand?
3 - Thank you! The prompt is: Taking into consideration all aspects of the University of Georgia and resources available,...
Undergraduateamandaco - Jan 28, 2013 / amandaco - Jan 29, 2013
|Came to Vancouver - GROUP WORK/ PROGRAMMING LANGUAGE; UBC SUPP
2 - chanllege is a small presentation.--> challenge --> typing mistake study at China North University , I helped traffic...
Undergraduatewinnietran219 - Jan 28, 2013 / devabe2005 - Jan 29, 2013
|Successful entrepreneur in a business career; Exceptional talents - NUS admission
5 - Please help me to look through the essay as I have to submit it online by this month. Thanks....
Undergraduatepingyap - Jan 28, 2013 / pingyap - Jan 29, 2013
|UOFM Ann Arbor Community Essay OF THE SELF MOTIVATED, KNOWLEDGE THIRSTY INDIVIDUALS
3 - Oh, I didn't even think of that! Thanks for pointing it out! This is great advice, and I think...
Undergraduateshaonislam - Jan 28, 2013 / shaonislam - Jan 28, 2013
|Significant Experience; Racism, Diversity, Acceptance -UofM Common App
4 - elizd04671 Correction on my own comment, sorry ... Instead, "I never thought my situation would end up the...
Undergraduateshaonislam - Jan 28, 2013 / elizd04671 - Jan 28, 2013
|Describe academic interests; 'When the people I love are happy, I am happy'
Undergraduateelizd04671 - Jan 28, 2013 / elizd04671 - Jan 28, 2013
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