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|Girls go to College to get more Knowledge, Boys go to Jupiter; Why Wellesley College?
2 - Hi I'm just a beginner, but I'd like to share my limited knowledge with others. aritasand18 I...
Undergraduatearitasand18 - Jan 14, 2013 / monaph - Jan 14, 2013
|"Love at First Sight" : Why Colorado College?
5 - Would anybody be willing to check the second draft? (Sorry for Triple-posting, if there's a rule against that.)...
UndergraduateFlargus - Jan 14, 2013 / Flargus - Jan 14, 2013
|Trust; Stanford Supplement - What Matters to You, and Why?
5 - This is my 2nd draft. Let me know if you have any more suggestions. I really would appreciate it....
Undergraduatemaranicoled - Jan 8, 2013 / maranicoled - Jan 14, 2013
|Program range/ exchange student experience; Why Reed ?
3 - I really liked the essay. It is intimate and it shows how ambitious you are about studying and how...
UndergraduateParahat95 - Jan 7, 2013 / gencounselor - Jan 14, 2013
|CHANGING SCHOOLS; U of Richmond/Stepping out of Comfort Zone
2 - Well... your prompt wants you to talk about an experience that you had to leave your comfort zone....
UndergraduateCrowcrow - Jan 14, 2013 / dumi - Jan 14, 2013
|City/ People/ Diversity/ Homeliness/ Unity/ Resources; Seattle U - GOOD MATCH?
Undergraduatehtn2013 - Jan 13, 2013 / dumi - Jan 14, 2013
|My younger sister; Villanova Community; Lesson & Experience
Undergraduatethaonguyen1901 - Jan 14, 2013 / dumi - Jan 14, 2013
|"IMAGINE" ; Smith College - A theme song that describes you best
5 - Thanks for your advice!! Ahhh.. About "topic of my choice", I think I expressed it in a wrong way...
UndergraduateVVCepheiA - Jan 13, 2013 / VVCepheiA - Jan 14, 2013
|I want a school where I can be myself; Why Reed?
Undergraduatejjjjulia - Jan 13, 2013 / dumi - Jan 14, 2013
|BREAKING POINT; Loyola Marymount Sup: Situation in which you used critical thinking
Undergraduatejenarevalo15 - Jan 11, 2013 / NicoleO - Jan 14, 2013
|I was born Mohammad Zaid; Essay on MYSELF
5 - Is there a prompt or anything to this? Because if there is, It's not Many of the thoughts don't...
UndergraduateXaid - Jan 13, 2013 / Flargus - Jan 14, 2013
|Let's save earth from pollution; UK universities personal statement
Undergraduateomeirx - Jan 14, 2013 / dumi - Jan 14, 2013
|LAWYER/ Committment to the HUMANITIES/ LOCATION; Seattle U- Good match?
Undergraduatejwfathal - Jan 14, 2013 / jwfathal - Jan 14, 2013
|History of Science Fiction; Colorado C- Intellectual Adventure
UndergraduateFlargus - Jan 14, 2013 / Flargus - Jan 14, 2013
|Gender equality/ community/ academic opportunities; Why Wellesley?
6 - The essay should be attached. My essay for Gates Millennium Scholarship is also due in 2 days. Please...
Undergraduateblanchedehors - Jan 14, 2013 / NicoleO - Jan 14, 2013
|Hall of fame by "The Script"; SMITH - Theme song that describes me
Undergraduatemmgay - Jan 14, 2013 / mmgay - Jan 14, 2013
|"Hello Class" Foreign exchange/ international student experience/ Activity essay
5 - ĺĽ˝ĺžïźVery well written. I agree that the "Fluent in Chinese and English" part doesn't fit right, and maybe...
Undergraduateelina855 - Dec 18, 2012 / Flargus - Jan 14, 2013
|Counting down the days for my BIRTHDAY; UVA / Favorite WORD
Undergraduatevaleriadavila01 - Dec 30, 2012 / dumi - Jan 14, 2013
|Education increases the ability of our mind; Virginia Tech PS/ QUOTATION
2 - Why do you repeat this statement in your answer? It consumes lots of words that you could have...
Undergraduatekels0091 - Jan 13, 2013 / dumi - Jan 13, 2013
|Small size/ Community/ Learning Opportunities/Safety/ Movies; Why Denison?
3 - Try and avoid repetition of ideas. Also you can combine a few ideas into one. For example, size+ family...
Undergraduatekatev - Jan 13, 2013 / dumi - Jan 13, 2013
|Real Human Being; USF Nursing- Carry out University mission
Undergraduatekeleigh24 - Jan 12, 2013 / etrane7 - Jan 13, 2013
|I am a Sponge - USC (Motto - "Let whoever earns the palm bear it")
UndergraduateLollifroll - Jan 10, 2013 / dumi - Jan 13, 2013
|My Guitar; Common App-"extracurricular activities or work"
Undergraduatejenarevalo15 - Jan 11, 2013 / lexyliu1209 - Jan 13, 2013
|Bridge hanging between Western and Eastern culture; Why Brandeis?
Undergraduatekarentu0315 - Jan 11, 2013 / karentu0315 - Jan 13, 2013
|"You can't play Basketball" ; UNFAIR EXPERIENCE IN LIFE
6 - Ok thanks for your comments. I think im just going change the entire essay because it Im having too...
Undergraduatexphyllisx - Jan 13, 2013 / xphyllisx - Jan 13, 2013
|Member of Tiger Woods Learning Center; Gates Millennium: Community Involvement
UndergraduateRez03 - Jan 13, 2013 / xphyllisx - Jan 13, 2013
|Track and Field; Extracurricular Common App Portion.
Undergraduatenicolettec18 - Jan 12, 2013 / jenarevalo15 - Jan 13, 2013
|Anti-Bullying Club; George Mason and Virginia Tech
5 - Thanks for looking at my essay! You have a solid idea of what happened..but try to say HOW it...
Undergraduatekarmalove - Jan 12, 2013 / valeriadavila01 - Jan 13, 2013
|Freedom/Research/Open-minded student body; WHY Brown? (Transfer-Science Major)
NEW - I messed around in high school and did poorly, now I am at a mediocre institution with a 3.8,...
Undergraduatejpsmyth - Jan 13, 2013 / — -
|Engineering is a macrocosm of innovation and development; USC APP
2 - I think you could do without the "practically everything in today's society is at least indirectly benefited from engineering"....
UndergraduateJMitchell159 - Jan 10, 2013 / jpsmyth - Jan 13, 2013
|Striving to gain KNOWLEDGE ; Mac Health Science - Meaning of "Well Educated"?
Undergraduatechivdapavda - Jan 13, 2013 / Kitsumi - Jan 13, 2013
|Divorce, the seven letter word; Sophie Davis - Major domestic problem
Undergraduatekomalshaheen19 - Jan 12, 2013 / komalshaheen19 - Jan 13, 2013
|Exchange student Experience/ Location/ Student Voluntary activities: Why CC/ attend?
5 - I am little worried about the fact that I would fall into the category of 80percent people talking only...
UndergraduateMisuleCZE - Jan 13, 2013 / MisuleCZE - Jan 13, 2013
|Taste of Victory; COMMON APP- Personal Essay
6 - I would also avoid using eventually three times in the same paragraph - that kind of strikes my eye......
Undergraduateaazev1995 - Jan 13, 2013 / MisuleCZE - Jan 13, 2013
|"But why not?"; Lafayette supplement - Why not?MOMENT
3 - I think the topic would sound more interesting if you introduced the purpose of the test you were taking...
Undergraduateintlstudent94 - Jan 13, 2013 / Jennyflower81 - Jan 13, 2013
|Dedication/Good Communication; Haverford Honor Code/ CONDITIONS-academic&non academic
Undergraduatedana1127 - Jan 13, 2013 / dana1127 - Jan 13, 2013
|Why Swarthmore? - my interpretation of the topic based on different personas
3 - I am just curious as to if Swarthmore will relate this essay to my Common App essays. The hospital...
UndergraduateOkGo7 - Jan 13, 2013 / OkGo7 - Jan 13, 2013
|breathtaking landscape/ Diversity/ Easy transition/ Hokie/ Clubs; Why Virginia Tech?
Undergraduatekarmalove - Jan 13, 2013 / Didgeridoo - Jan 13, 2013
|Canadian idol; VT Common App -Best day of my life?
6 - Honestly, I liked your essay! I think it stands out uniquely and you wrote what YOU thought was YOUR...
Undergraduatevaleriadavila01 - Jan 12, 2013 / karmalove - Jan 13, 2013
|Want to advance my knowledge; Motivation letter - Computer sciences faculty in Norway
Undergraduatesofiagvaladze - Jan 11, 2013 / dumi - Jan 13, 2013
|Business & Social networks; PS-UMN Carlson (Management)
2 - Honestly speaking~~ it seems to me that you already got a solid essay~~~I don't see the reason why you...
Undergraduateffan11 - Jan 11, 2013 / lexyliu1209 - Jan 13, 2013
|CROSS CULTURAL EXPERIENCE; Brandeis International Business School(Int Econ&Finance)
NEW - I am applying for Brandeis International Business School, program of international Economics and Finance. Here is one essay of...
Undergraduateptlove4ever - Jan 13, 2013 / — -
|How Doctor Who influenced me; COMMON APP/ Character in fiction
NEW - so i really really need help with my essay. Can you please looks over my essay for the common...
Undergraduatecaitmarie - Jan 12, 2013 / — -
|Greek mythology ; COMMON APP - What fascinates me!
UndergraduateIskander - Jan 11, 2013 / y2kendoll - Jan 12, 2013
|CULTURAL HISTORY; Denison - Personal experience with diversity
Undergraduatekatev - Jan 12, 2013 / katev - Jan 12, 2013
|Rummaging through Photos and falling sky; World I come from
2 - The first essay does a good job at detailing your background, but it does not discuss your dreams and...
Undergraduatesephyleader - Jan 12, 2013 / Th25cc - Jan 12, 2013
|I was chosen as the leader of my team; COMMON APP - Challenging moment
Undergraduatemakeit2013 - Jan 12, 2013 / Didgeridoo - Jan 12, 2013
|College experience and becoming an Eagle; Emory Transfer Student
Undergraduatenicolettec18 - Jan 12, 2013 / — -
|'Peer Advocate' - (Applying to Emory and UM as a Transfer Student)
5 - I go to University of Miami and I think that one thing this school really appreciates is diversity and...
UndergraduateAshley3291 - Jan 1, 2013 / nicolettec18 - Jan 12, 2013
|Combining ability to design and build structures; Ryerson U- Why Architctual science?
2 - I think you need to write less about your education, which they will already know about looking at your...
Undergraduatealvinoswim - Jan 12, 2013 / Didgeridoo - Jan 12, 2013
|Milestone for our company; Business Management and Marketing- UK Personal Statement
5 - Colin Powell once said: "There are no secrets to success. It is the result of preparation, hard work and...
Undergraduateveronica100 - Jan 8, 2013 / veronica100 - Jan 12, 2013
|Religion, the watchful protector along the path; Harvard/ Topic of Choice
21 - Well, I was just being honest with what I felt. Instead of asking others to comment your essay and...
Undergraduatedwangus - Jan 8, 2013 / Ariel421 - Jan 12, 2013
|Guilt; Union College - What frightens you?
3 - Thanks for your reply, it helps! Actually, "a very strong sense of ethics" is part of what I want...
UndergraduateVVCepheiA - Jan 11, 2013 / VVCepheiA - Jan 12, 2013
|Carleton community/ Rich education/ Access to professors; WHY CARLETON?
3 - Indeed, I should be more specific. I was very broad. Thank you for that input, I will work on...
Undergraduatespongiee - Jan 11, 2013 / spongiee - Jan 11, 2013
|Public speaking/ California; Moment of success/ Neighborhood
3 - Unfortunately, the universe has a funny habit of conspiring against the desires of most people....
UndergraduateAquile - Jan 11, 2013 / thestarfus - Jan 11, 2013
|Irrational exuberance in metropolis; UW-MADISON - Something went unnoticed
2 - I got that you are a very observant, conscientious, and compassionate person. I would like some more past and...
Undergraduatehtg100 - Jan 11, 2013 / Didgeridoo - Jan 11, 2013
|Biofuel Research Program/ Metro Magic Lacrosse;Common App- Summer Activity(2 options)
3 - I like the second one better because it shows the passion you have for lacrosse. I think that the...
Undergraduatejmg - Jan 10, 2013 / jenarevalo15 - Jan 11, 2013
|Cultural barriers/ Forming friendships; LOYOLA MARYMOUNT/ Critical Thinking
4 - We're doing the same prompt! :) While your story is definitely captivating and is sure to grab the reader's...
Undergraduatecarolynxpark - Jan 4, 2013 / jenarevalo15 - Jan 11, 2013
|Ambition to learn and ability to adapt and persevere - How I enrich CU community
3 - thanks!!...
UndergraduateAlizej17 - Jan 11, 2013 / Alizej17 - Jan 11, 2013
|"I aspire to become a pediatric nurse"UCLA Nursing Statement of Purpose
3 - Yeah, i figured. It's only halfway done, so I haven't gotten to most of the questions yet. Thanks for...
Undergraduatesdelicana - Jan 11, 2013 / sdelicana - Jan 11, 2013
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