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|TRAFFIC JAMS & RULES - UNC Chapel Hill /Solving Problems
Undergraduatenguyensybach - Jan 1, 2013 / nguyensybach - Jan 2, 2013
|'Mother's relocation to Georgia' - Common Application Personal Statement
2 - Struggling to accept every school I applied to rejected me, I chose to fabricate a story where limited financial...
Undergraduatemarkray1193 - Jan 1, 2013 / mayfl0wer - Jan 2, 2013
|Real life examples; What do you like most about yourself
2 - i think you should write about all three of them about your ambitions and how u going to achieve...
UndergraduateHahahala - Jan 1, 2013 / serdarovez - Jan 2, 2013
|'memorizing the music during vacation' - SHORT RESPONSE FOR COLLEGE APP
UndergraduateiRainiex - Jan 1, 2013 / mayfl0wer - Jan 2, 2013
|"You are walking down the street.." - Pomona Essay Supplement
4 - Laccone94 Mayflower and jack i will check yours out now :) and mayflower How can I make it flow...
UndergraduateLaccone94 - Jan 2, 2013 / Laccone94 - Jan 2, 2013
|'unstable situation in my country' - Brown: If you could do anything without failing
Undergraduatewaterlilly995 - Jan 2, 2013 / mayfl0wer - Jan 2, 2013
|Swim Team is like a Cult - University of Michigan
Undergraduategmichski - Jan 1, 2013 / mayfl0wer - Jan 2, 2013
|Android apps / Computers / OS / PolyThinker - Polytechnic Institute of NY University
4 - We are publishing our own apps for Android (iOS and Windows Phone are planned as well) and create websites....
UndergraduateMyMichael - Dec 25, 2012 / mayfl0wer - Jan 2, 2013
|How my twin influenced me - personal statement
7 - During my first week at COSMOS... During icebreakers... - Try to vary your vocabulary a bit. Don't use "during"...
Undergraduatesogoldman - Dec 23, 2012 / Kitsumi - Jan 2, 2013
|Liberal environment - the most appealing feature of Columbia
Undergraduatemayfl0wer - Dec 30, 2012 / jakk1994 - Jan 2, 2013
|My testing scores and achievements - why Uchicago?
6 - In all honesty, because I have recently received permission from my parents to apply to American universities, I could...
Undergraduatechewbaccablack - Jan 2, 2013 / mayfl0wer - Jan 2, 2013
|'Relationships with my enemies' - U Chicago Supp
5 - I can already imagine that our similarities would repulse the faint hearted and force us apart like two positive...
Undergraduatestrwrsfn0013 - Jan 2, 2013 / mayfl0wer - Jan 2, 2013
|'Skiing forward' - Williams College Essay: Transfer Applicant
5 - I thought it might be a little different than most essays they will read- I aimed to convey that...
UndergraduateTransferApps - Jan 1, 2013 / TransferApps - Jan 2, 2013
|'Representing a lot of countries' - Boston University Supplement Essay
2 - Hey sorry for the delay! After the first line you could have told that now you are finally taking...
Undergraduateczerep3 - Jan 1, 2013 / moon05 - Jan 2, 2013
|'Being a gymnast' - COMMON APP ESSAY
2 - it just doesn't sound correct, try I was in the sport or something else. You could add another...
Undergraduatealbee8d - Jan 1, 2013 / moon05 - Jan 2, 2013
|I'm on right track; A New Goal - A&M Transfer / SOP
2 - It really tells about how you changed. But, I think you should reflect more on your future than your...
UndergraduateJordanPierce67 - Dec 31, 2012 / painglintun - Jan 2, 2013
|Yangon, bustling city; Common App/ U illinois/ Past circumstances & Experiences
Undergraduatepainglintun - Dec 28, 2012 / painglintun - Jan 2, 2013
|"Army Brat" & Adaptability; Villanova/ Lesson I'd love to share
Undergraduatenoneil - Jan 1, 2013 / moon05 - Jan 2, 2013
|'I am sorry ma'am' - Doctor COMMON APP ESSAY
3 - You don't necessarily need a title. Even some counselors suggest not using titles for your Common App. HOpe...
Undergraduateqr1995 - Jan 1, 2013 / chewbaccablack - Jan 2, 2013
|Mononucleosis & my Soccer practicing; UChicago/Sontag's SILENCE
5 - This is the essay i wrote and yours kinda similar to my to totally different event. Nice job. The...
Undergraduateshmegg - Jan 1, 2013 / kabal - Jan 2, 2013
|Beutiful, but misinterpreted Quote; Furman Essay/QUOTE
Undergraduatehpdwnsn95 - Jan 1, 2013 / moon05 - Jan 2, 2013
|Being a Wallflower-Not an Option at HMC! ; Why Harvey Mudd, HMC curriculm/ community?
2 - "I wanted to go into biomedical engineering and I was going to love it. But after learning about Mudd,...
Undergraduatelalenaskye - Jan 2, 2013 / chewbaccablack - Jan 2, 2013
|The white banner; Common app short answer
5 - I agree with VVCepheiA. My college counselor warned me before that try to avoid something common like community service...
UndergraduateBighall - Dec 30, 2012 / rachely - Jan 2, 2013
|"You are an Asian disgrace."; Common Application Personal Statement
Undergraduateyumm33333 - Jan 2, 2013 / strwrsfn0013 - Jan 2, 2013
|Be Informed; Pomona Supplement - What I say to my community
4 - Many people neither understand nor wish to comprehend the issues they face. Strong point; good! ...
Undergraduate503dannyk - Dec 30, 2012 / dumi - Jan 2, 2013
|VOICING MY OPINION; Stanford / "What matters to you is the question. I
3 - Well written, check for typos though. My dad's opinions maters the world to me. Could be better said...
Undergraduatejs65438 - Jan 2, 2013 / jakk1994 - Jan 2, 2013
|Like jellybean, Mac contains has a unique flavor; Why mac?
Undergraduaterew2402 - Dec 31, 2012 / paigeevaa - Jan 2, 2013
|UNC Chapel Hill Comfort Food Essay - Corn
Undergraduatesnibberbit - Dec 31, 2012 / bigforkviking - Jan 2, 2013
|Project Lead the Way program; Harvey-Mudd / Own Background
3 - From there, my interest developed during my junior year when I learned about each of the distinct engineering disciplines...
Undergraduatecesaror123 - Dec 31, 2012 / jakk1994 - Jan 1, 2013
|Its Spirit. community,subject options/ NORTHWESTERN Sup;Unique qualities?
10 - I think your essay shows a lot of passion and enthusiasm! However, I am worried that the tone may...
Undergraduatebi123 - Dec 25, 2012 / emalw202 - Jan 1, 2013
|Diversity and Involvement/ Northwestern; Uniqueness
UndergraduateLollifroll - Jan 1, 2013 / Lollifroll - Jan 1, 2013
|Power of experience; Common App/ Significant experience
UndergraduateVVCepheiA - Jan 1, 2013 / VVCepheiA - Jan 1, 2013
|Explaining my gap years; does this make sense?
Undergraduatebr2pi5 - Jan 1, 2013 / br2pi5 - Jan 1, 2013
|Unwilling to Willing; UPenn (Immovable, Movable, Moving)
Undergraduatecvinson - Jan 1, 2013 / klnb13 - Jan 1, 2013
|''Meet the Northern Flicker'' ; Pomona College/ Walking down the street
UndergraduateBirdiee - Dec 31, 2012 / Birdiee - Jan 1, 2013
|Studying Abroad/ U Rice - Unique Perspective
2 - This is a nice essay! You might want to check for run-on sentences though, like this one: Prepared with...
Undergraduateelina855 - Jan 1, 2013 / Kitsumi - Jan 1, 2013
|Worthless; Stupid; Failure, these words shackled every aspect of my life
5 - In diving myself into these activities I have discovered my worth, intelligence and success. I still struggle with the...
UndergraduateChelseaSmart13 - Dec 31, 2012 / Kitsumi - Jan 1, 2013
|Self-expression/American lifestyle/culturally diversified/Acting ; Stanford roommate
UndergraduateSaagar - Jan 1, 2013 / Birdiee - Jan 1, 2013
|"Step Up 3D" / "Human Behavior" / "Harry Potter" - NYU Supplements
16 - That is true, but I'm saying I identify with Draco as we are both Slytherins. We're not alike personality-wise....
Undergraduateholashelly - Jan 1, 2013 / holashelly - Jan 1, 2013
|People idealize their goals; So where is Waldo, really? - UChicago
4 - I liked it...but I worry that admissions might be iffy...because you didn't really answer the question...idk it's a very...
Undergraduatechewbacca - Jan 1, 2013 / Birdiee - Jan 1, 2013
|Central American immigrants and American Dream - Columbia Supp. 2
Undergraduatestrwrsfn0013 - Jan 1, 2013 / strwrsfn0013 - Jan 1, 2013
|Abheek Raja, meaning fearless was born in Delhi; UChicago/ PAST for PRESENT
UndergraduateJojolocomoco - Jan 1, 2013 / Jojolocomoco - Jan 1, 2013
|i am immovable and movable - upenn supplement
Undergraduatedadzeasa - Jan 1, 2013 / holashelly - Jan 1, 2013
|'Jessica' - a moment when your perspective changed; BROWN U
8 - How did you find it?? wow. at least you know now it's real and I wasn't lying. HarvardAccept!...
Undergraduatebr2pi5 - Dec 30, 2012 / br2pi5 - Jan 1, 2013
|Memories; Stanford - What Matters to you most and why?
Undergraduatehereiam - Dec 30, 2012 / college134nj - Jan 1, 2013
|Columbia Sup. 2! Essay for an essay?
Undergraduatekris10 - Jan 1, 2013 / kris10 - Jan 1, 2013
|Knitting; Common App / extracurricular & work experience
4 - "ARGH" I cried in frustration. Another stitch had slipped for the fourth time. On that row alone too! As...
UndergraduateBC123132 - Jan 1, 2013 / kris10 - Jan 1, 2013
|"The Age of Harmony"; Olin C / front page headline
3 - The "has" seemed unnecessary and removing them will save you words :). Other than that j813wong mentioned...
Undergraduatea608863a - Jan 1, 2013 / luky0ne - Jan 1, 2013
|WHAT INTRIGUES YOU? NYU SUPP.; Math, sports, economics, science and literature
3 - Interesting response! It shows your uniqueness and ability to stand out. You might want to be more specific in...
UndergraduateNero - Jan 1, 2013 / holashelly - Jan 1, 2013
|Personal statement emphasizing your accomplishments, educational and career goals
2 - Ever since I was small I have had a passion for technology, especially computers. Every day I was fascinated...
UndergraduateBlu3 - Dec 31, 2012 / aceq - Jan 1, 2013
|'Capital of the World with potential interships' - WHY NYU ?
8 - You need to make your response pertinent to your own life. This says nothing about you. Consider relating it...
Undergraduateabulkhair37 - Dec 30, 2012 / holashelly - Jan 1, 2013
|Science Club; STANFORD SUP- INTELLECTUAL VITALITY.
2 - "was not just to study but also TO help". Yes, intellectual and knowledge are redundant... just say one of...
Undergraduateomergoktug - Dec 30, 2012 / college134nj - Jan 1, 2013
|'.. enough of an artist' - Stanford- What matters to you and why?
Undergraduateomergoktug - Jan 1, 2013 / college134nj - Jan 1, 2013
|My father gifted me a computer; Cornell/My ideas and interests
Undergraduateomergoktug - Dec 30, 2012 / luky0ne - Jan 1, 2013
|Math & Science/ unmatched oppotunities: Why want to study engineering at Duke?
Undergraduatelolcollege45 - Jan 1, 2013 / omergoktug - Jan 1, 2013
|Financial constraints/Self studying/ Volunteering ; Common App/GAP YEAR
Undergraduatebr2pi5 - Jan 1, 2013 / br2pi5 - Jan 1, 2013
|Lafayette merges education and ambitions; Why am I interested in Lafayette
UndergraduateGeorge1012 - Dec 31, 2012 / omergoktug - Jan 1, 2013
|Career path/ Freedom/ Flexibility; UPENN ; Engage academically
5 - thank you so much, your comments were really really helpful! i appreciate you taking this much time so much!!...
Undergraduatewhitezebra - Dec 31, 2012 / whitezebra - Jan 1, 2013
|Volunteered at Sunrise Senior Living - Common App; Extracurricular
2 - I don't really understand the last sentence. And yes it is very abrupt. I'm lost at Michelle being a...
Undergraduatebrightlights208 - Jan 1, 2013 / sillybandz - Jan 1, 2013
|Purple/environmental club/Professor Vadim Backman ; Unique qualities of Northwestern
3 - I think you failed to answer crucial parts from the prompt. You had me attention in the first paragraph...
Undergraduatesillybandz - Jan 1, 2013 / xphyllisx - Jan 1, 2013
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