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|Music and musical diversity; NYU "Academic Interests"
Undergraduateshreebaby - Jan 1, 2013 / mnunez1107 - Jan 1, 2013
|'passion for building' - Cornell Supplement, my interest in Engineering
3 - The college offers a masters in every field that interest me, particularly mechanical engineering, chemical engineering and computer science,...
Undergraduateluky0ne - Jan 1, 2013 / sjmzzz95 - Jan 1, 2013
|Guest lecture on nanotechnologies/ DUKE U; PRATT ENGINEERING
2 - ...
Undergraduatenoahremillard - Dec 31, 2012 / moon05 - Jan 1, 2013
|west meets south; Common app - Experience
Undergraduateellehcim - Jan 1, 2013 / ellehcim - Jan 1, 2013
|Practical Application of theory; UPENN/ ENGAGE ACADEMICALLY
UndergraduateALI988 - Jan 1, 2013 / ALI988 - Jan 1, 2013
|like old Alexander to America; HAMILTON/ WHY?
2 - I really like the poem, that's something really unique that admissions won't see from other students! I love it!...
Undergraduateamaterrapper - Dec 31, 2012 / hpdwnsn95 - Jan 1, 2013
|"Daddy, why do women have babies, but not men?" HUMAN BODY; Interests at NYU
6 - I would say cut out the chemistry paragraph and expand on the human body paragraph. Write about specific programs,...
Undergraduatetffnycheng - Jan 1, 2013 / shreebaby - Jan 1, 2013
|MYP/ IB program; NYU's global network provides..
2 - "As I grew, the music in me propagated further and I began to express and share my passion with...
Undergraduatekeykey3137 - Jan 1, 2013 / shreebaby - Jan 1, 2013
|I am conflicted, curious, whimsical, and quixotic dreamer; Columbia ; Why Major ?
5 - I think you sound pretty confident throughout, your tone I mean. And I think what CMB19932015 said would be...
Undergraduateemalw202 - Jan 1, 2013 / bi123 - Jan 1, 2013
|Social Work and Death - Common App
3 - elaborate on specifically what you learned from this experience. They'll read this essay maybe twice and many admission officers...
Undergraduateelina855 - Dec 31, 2012 / foejeeney - Jan 1, 2013
|Growing up Black and Majoring in Unafraid Barnard Application
3 - I think aside from a few grammatical mistakes, the second one is very good. However, the first one kind...
UndergraduateCMB19932015 - Jan 1, 2013 / emalw202 - Jan 1, 2013
|Love animals & interested in cosmetic animal testin ; William and Mary/ Type of person
2 - I think this is a great essay!! You've answered the prompt very well. Just one thing: I don't even...
Undergraduaterebecca_e - Dec 31, 2012 / bi123 - Jan 1, 2013
|Olympiad training : MIT significant challenge
2 - The lectures are hard, the tests are complicated, the friends are intimidating and the lab works were stressful because...
UndergraduateMein - Jan 1, 2013 / Aldo - Jan 1, 2013
|Rigorous yet enlightening curriculum ; UPenn / Engage academically
Undergraduatejrangel - Dec 31, 2012 / moon05 - Jan 1, 2013
|I have always enjoyed running alone; Common App/Extracurricular statement
Undergraduaterainneil - Dec 31, 2012 / moon05 - Jan 1, 2013
|There are a thousand ways of success. If we don't succeed in one way, we can just choose the other.
11 - You rephrased the reason before. It's a little stronger, but still, I, the nasty admissions officer, want to...
UndergraduateMein - Dec 26, 2012 / abenelazar - Jan 1, 2013
|All students at Reed share my passion; Why Reed?
Undergraduate4m4jordan4m4 - Dec 31, 2012 / moon05 - Jan 1, 2013
|Val- Kill / Gaining confidence & speaking skills/ My dad ;Barnard Sup
5 - "This has led me to believe that, as a society, we should be doing everything in our power to...
UndergraduateWisconsingirl94 - Dec 28, 2012 / CMB19932015 - Jan 1, 2013
|We have not found Waldo; U CHICAGO- Where's Waldo, really?
Undergraduatesmujeeb121 - Jan 1, 2013 / smujeeb121 - Jan 1, 2013
|It is the fountain I envision myself studying ; Columbia Supp/ Why?
Undergraduatesillybandz - Jan 1, 2013 / CMB19932015 - Jan 1, 2013
|I yearn to expand my education ; COMMON APP
UndergraduateReshmaA - Jan 1, 2013 / ReshmaA - Jan 1, 2013
|Interdisciplinary Liberal Arts foundation in Barnard's curriculum ; Why Barnard ?
3 - I agree it is also best to follow directions when writing the applications they have word limits because they...
Undergraduatejulianayinyan - Dec 31, 2012 / CMB19932015 - Jan 1, 2013
|Big cities have always excited me/ "Why NYU Campus"
Undergraduateshreebaby - Jan 1, 2013 / nayelojello - Jan 1, 2013
|Who will cry when i die?; I always ask this question
5 - Your grammar and writing was horrendous. I couldnt even read your essay so I had to read didgereedo's. Your...
Undergraduatemahmoudjendy - Dec 31, 2012 / ALI988 - Jan 1, 2013
|Opportunity of a lifetime/ simply no other place ; Why NYU?
5 - thanks...
Undergraduatepaola006 - Jan 1, 2013 / paola006 - Jan 1, 2013
|my friend Dylan/ Setnor School of Music/ communication skills/ local music; SYRACUSE SUPP
4 - If you haven't submitted it already then it might be of some help. If you have already submitted, then...
Undergraduatetahanw13 - Dec 31, 2012 / moon05 - Jan 1, 2013
|IDEAS and IBE programs - Why Lehigh?
Undergraduatehiguise - Dec 31, 2012 / moon05 - Jan 1, 2013
|I played with my Legos; Columbia Supp- Why Engineering?
Undergraduateklnb13 - Jan 1, 2013 / tffnycheng - Jan 1, 2013
|I will always be is a Rhode Islander; RICE - Unique Life Experiences
5 - Hey snibberbit sorry I didn't come here yesterday or I would have truly helped you. And by the way,...
Undergraduatesnibberbit - Dec 28, 2012 / moon05 - Jan 1, 2013
|Make something/ love my job/ tell my kids about my life; "Why want to go to college?"
3 - But I heard college love originality and risks. I've even heard of people swearing in their college essay and...
Undergraduateholmes01234 - Jan 1, 2013 / holmes01234 - Jan 1, 2013
|my own willpower ; PRINCETON / PERSON WHO HAD AN INFLUENCE
2 - I think there are still another mistake in the essay. Overall the essay is good enough( though a bit...
UndergraduateALI988 - Dec 31, 2012 / Mein - Jan 1, 2013
|Be on a golf course without golf clubs; COMMON APP
14 - I think you just need to do some editing on the part you mention about this different world you...
Undergraduatetffnycheng - Dec 31, 2012 / ALI988 - Jan 1, 2013
|Creating my own stream in this fast-paced world; Masters in Economics/ WHY NYU?
2 - A place of possibilities and diverse population constantly shuffling every single second. This sentence sounds very awkward for some...
Undergraduaterosieish - Dec 31, 2012 / plummzz_2436 - Jan 1, 2013
|The Diary of Anais Nin; H,Y,P Supplement
Undergraduaterew2402 - Dec 31, 2012 / rew2402 - Jan 1, 2013
|Our experiences define ourselves; Mercersburg Essay/ Myself at Mercersburg
7 - HarvardAccept... can u look at my essay here ..essayforum.com/undergraduate-essays-2/common-app-essay-47150/...
UndergraduateOhBeExGmoney - Dec 31, 2012 / mahmoudjendy - Jan 1, 2013
|Ethical arguments of our time/ Lehigh Sup - Values/priorities of my institution.
4 - That's the part that obstruct your statement about topics of study that you choose. If I take the...
Undergraduateabenelazar - Dec 31, 2012 / Mein - Jan 1, 2013
|Christianity, a part of my life; Common App - Person with significant influence
6 - This is a superb essay, your beginning and end are very strong. The essay clearly shows what you...
UndergraduateAmoebaMan - Dec 30, 2012 / qr1995 - Jan 1, 2013
|Major in Engineering + mix of Physics, math & dirty hands; UPenn/Engage academically
6 - any help ?...
Undergraduatemahmoudjendy - Dec 30, 2012 / mahmoudjendy - Jan 1, 2013
|Contribution to home country/ BEREA College APP; Educational Overview/ Plans
Undergraduateserdarovez - Dec 21, 2012 / Ariel421 - Jan 1, 2013
|Sports have been a major aspect throughout my life; Seattle U Sup
3 - .... You need to set up a better link between the first and the second lines; Irrespective of...
Undergraduategiallolover23 - Dec 31, 2012 / dumi - Jan 1, 2013
|Petroleum-based country/ Freedom of Choice; Indicated Areas/ Brown Curriculum
3 - The first essay is concise and too the point, I think its wonderful. Like the other person said, towards...
UndergraduateDabbagh - Dec 31, 2012 / smujeeb121 - Jan 1, 2013
|The Spider Playbook; Why Weiss School of Natural Sciences?
2 - It was his favorite book for years and years only until he discovered the Hardy Boys series. ...
Undergraduateaqualad - Dec 31, 2012 / dumi - Jan 1, 2013
|Determination to provide my family - Common app
5 - Although touchy essays are risky, they can be moving and inspirational; they make an impact. however your essay's construction...
Undergraduatedqmonster - Dec 31, 2012 / strwrsfn0013 - Jan 1, 2013
|Beautiful campus, diversity of the student body, and the reputation; Why Syracuse U?
3 - Thanks !...
Undergraduatewheres_am - Dec 30, 2012 / wheres_am - Jan 1, 2013
|My mother had breast cancer/ COMMON APP
11 - .... I'm going to suggest a different way of telling this idea; After seeing my mother's battle with...
Undergraduateticklelisaelmo - Dec 31, 2012 / dumi - Jan 1, 2013
|My love for a life of hustle and bustle; Boston U: Why BU?
Undergraduatejhakyung195 - Dec 31, 2012 / dumi - Jan 1, 2013
|Truth be told; Stanford/ Future Roommate
UndergraduateStroodle - Dec 31, 2012 / dumi - Jan 1, 2013
|"Emancipating potential", directly answers my desire/ Bates Sup /Mission statement
6 - Thanks for checking out my BU essay. Sorry for the late reply, I was really busy with my science...
Undergraduateserdarovez - Dec 30, 2012 / Ariel421 - Jan 1, 2013
|'Dad, Life, and its Offerings of Value Experiences' -COMMON APP-PERSON OF INFLUENCE
5 - If you studied psychology a bit, perhaps you can explain specific ways in which these two connect. Perhaps you...
Undergraduateredrobinson - Dec 31, 2012 / hughj - Dec 31, 2012
|Versatility in the field of communications; Engaging academically at UPenn
3 - Growing up, I often traveled with my family to different parts of America and China where I had...
Undergraduateyuzec95 - Dec 31, 2012 / dumi - Dec 31, 2012
|I was immovable, but now I am movable; U Penn/ Ben Franklin
2 - If you are going to incorporate the idea of the carrot, you have to begin from the immovable stage....
Undergraduategposcidonio - Dec 31, 2012 / HarvardAccept - Dec 31, 2012
|Minority Hill Tribe is One of My Homes/ CALVIN COLLEGE; Christian learning environment
7 - No. I meant that maybe you can say that your cultural diversity can help other students to open themselves...
Undergraduateqasderwdw - Dec 31, 2012 / linting2012 - Dec 31, 2012
|U PENN supp- ALL ELEMENTS UNITE!
2 - You're a very talented writer, and I can tell you're a logical kind of guy. However, I fail to...
Undergraduatedqmonster - Dec 31, 2012 / emalw202 - Dec 31, 2012
|Computer game/ Common App; Significant Experience
Undergraduateamaterrapper - Dec 30, 2012 / amaterrapper - Dec 31, 2012
|The book, "The Hot Zone"; NYU & COLUMBIA; What intrigues/ significance to you?
10 - its a bit too wordy and it only basically describes the book instead of really relating how it influenced...
Undergraduatebigchau - Dec 31, 2012 / dqmonster - Dec 31, 2012
|Don Quixote; Columbia - Meaningful Book
8 - Your essay is excellent. I love Don Quixote and I think you really showed how it was meaningful to...
UndergraduateEmiEvi - Dec 30, 2012 / emalw202 - Dec 31, 2012
|Mousetrap car - STANFORD UNIVERSITY - INTELLECTUAL VITALITY
UndergraduateReshmaA - Dec 31, 2012 / ReshmaA - Dec 31, 2012
|I'm a foodie of a close-knit community; Brown Sup/ Community
Undergraduatebr2pi5 - Dec 31, 2012 / keroro - Dec 31, 2012
|The House of The Spirits - Columbia Book Supplement
Undergraduateemalw202 - Dec 31, 2012 / aks1 - Dec 31, 2012
|CONTROL OVER BEHAVIOUR; Stanford Intellectual Vitality
Undergraduateaboveblues - Dec 31, 2012 / aboveblues - Dec 31, 2012
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