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|I know we'll get along; Stanford - Roommate
7 - It wasn't meant to be religious, I basically wanted to say take everything with a grain of salt. But...
Undergraduate503dannyk - Dec 30, 2012 / 503dannyk - Dec 31, 2012
|Internship at G.Architect; Common APP Extracurricular activity
3 - I think I like what you're getting at, but you didn't actually elaborate on your extracurricular besides telling us...
Undergraduateayu0006 - Dec 31, 2012 / kellyjanemartin - Dec 31, 2012
|Lover of Electronics/Age of Empires ; Common App
2 - the first sentence is a bit awkward. the first part of your essay when talking about technology although its...
Undergraduatesekusmore - Dec 31, 2012 / pinacolada762 - Dec 31, 2012
|2 weeks in Quito & Ecuador/Cosmos, by Carl Sagan; Princeton's;Summer/Favorite Quote
NEW - Princeton wants to know what I've done the last two summers in about 2500 characters (this one is 2,864...
UndergraduateIdealprism - Dec 31, 2012 / — -
|Footprints on the Sand, and a Tree; Lehigh/ Unique aspect of Leigh
4 - thanks, your corrections helped a lot! I made them and my essay looks better :) though i feel that...
Undergraduatektminnieheartsa - Dec 31, 2012 / ktminnieheartsa - Dec 31, 2012
|SYRACUSE SHORT ANSWER SUPPLEMENT QUESTIONS, check grammar and what not
2 - i hope i can help you with grammar and whatnot I must admit that there is no miraculous story...
Undergraduatebraiser101 - Dec 31, 2012 / 0livegreen - Dec 31, 2012
|Girls/ Night Walks/ Candy/ Scatter minded; Stanford Roommate
7 - Thanks for quick responses. I am going to take out the sex joke portion, but keep the note that...
Undergraduatersr1919 - Dec 31, 2012 / rsr1919 - Dec 31, 2012
|Bryn Mawr: What will I gain?
3 - I love first paragraph but in the second sentence maybe say "at that age..." because using eight years old...
Undergraduatehobak135 - Dec 31, 2012 / noahremillard - Dec 31, 2012
|It's mine; Common App/ The creator of Pokemon & his influence
Undergraduatevallh6018 - Dec 29, 2012 / vallh6018 - Dec 31, 2012
|"Why do we bother keep a dog?"; Stanford / What matters to you & why?
3 - It definitely answers the question of "What matters to you, and why?". add in "seem" between does...
Undergraduatesandytoes5 - Dec 31, 2012 / rsr1919 - Dec 31, 2012
|'Made in China. ' - Cultural Background
Undergraduateluky0ne - Dec 31, 2012 / Rosekareen - Dec 31, 2012
|I want to be a part of Science and Engineering; Why Harvey Mudd?
2 - It seemed strange at the end, because you are right it was a bit impersonal, for you to suddenly...
Undergraduatenoahremillard - Dec 31, 2012 / hobak135 - Dec 31, 2012
|Helping students to become successful in life; Lehigh / values and priorities
Undergraduatehiguise - Dec 31, 2012 / higuise - Dec 31, 2012
|Interest in working in the UN and Peace Corps/ NYU; Academic Interests
3 - since you exceed the amt of characters,maybe you could leave out the beginning. just jump right into the social...
Undergraduatejfloyd1879 - Dec 31, 2012 / ticklelisaelmo - Dec 31, 2012
|A meaningful name, a reminder of my identity/ Personal background/experience
Undergraduatemannam - Dec 30, 2012 / mannam - Dec 31, 2012
|Vastness of the COSMOS; NYU / What Intrigues You?
Undergraduatekc2vwx95 - Dec 31, 2012 / luky0ne - Dec 31, 2012
|Urban setting/opportunity for women/ education/ challenging ; Barnard/Good Match?
4 - Elaborate more on things that set Barnard apart from NYU, otherwise it may seem that you mostly wish to...
Undergraduateticklelisaelmo - Dec 30, 2012 / jfloyd1879 - Dec 31, 2012
|Housing, Location, and Academics; Why Rice?
Undergraduatesnibberbit - Dec 31, 2012 / 4m4jordan4m4 - Dec 31, 2012
|Straight/ Culture/ late night/ leader; Stanford/ "Letter to your Roommate"
UndergraduateIfesi - Dec 31, 2012 / Ifesi - Dec 31, 2012
|I became third in my state/ Poor roads; Colombia; Achievement/Past experiences
3 - well thanks i really do appreciate. i do have to restructure the whole essay now..i have seen my flaws......
UndergraduateUdensi - Dec 30, 2012 / Udensi - Dec 31, 2012
|Dual Enrollment; Emory // Unique qualities
3 - I liked it alot. My only concern is maybe getting into more specific details concerning the school, some of...
Undergraduatethkid - Dec 31, 2012 / hereiam - Dec 31, 2012
|I volunteered at a daycare center/ SYRACUSE SUP/ Experience
Undergraduatenayelojello - Dec 29, 2012 / nayelojello - Dec 31, 2012
|[Fashion Show on Standby] Common App Personal Statement
Undergraduatebabycakes - Dec 31, 2012 / babycakes - Dec 31, 2012
|Perfect Score- (talent, quality) UC PROMPT 2
Undergraduatemontse93 - Nov 23, 2010 / danica2995 - Dec 31, 2012
|My Family was in huge debt; Common App
2 - Which prompt did you choose? I find it weird that you never replied to your peers' cajoling because...
UndergraduateBikash2013 - Dec 31, 2012 / higuise - Dec 31, 2012
|Brown choice - Why are you going to college/ your perspective changed/ question about you
UndergraduateTheoAAA - Dec 31, 2012 / hobak135 - Dec 31, 2012
|'Friend's T-shirt' - How did you find out about Brown?
6 - I am embarrassed to say I Googled "Colleges with the happiest students," and the same name kept popping up...
Undergraduatebr2pi5 - Dec 31, 2012 / HarvardAccept - Dec 31, 2012
|DONUT & Protecting people; Common App/ EXPERIENCE
9 - This is wonderful! I really got a sense of how your childhood has shaped you into who you are....
Undergraduatejlee30410 - Dec 31, 2012 / tffnycheng - Dec 31, 2012
|My existence is all I can be sure of; Stanford Intellectual Idea
UndergraduateTolkien1892 - Dec 31, 2012 / Tolkien1892 - Dec 31, 2012
|We can never judge the lives of others; Common App
4 - anyone else?...
Undergraduaterainbow17 - Dec 31, 2012 / rainbow17 - Dec 31, 2012
|Loving one's country; CLEP/ PATRIOTISM ESSAY
Undergraduateggml - Dec 31, 2012 / — -
|Experience at CHaD medical center; BC Sup/ Service of others
UndergraduateHockey4 - Dec 31, 2012 / Hockey4 - Dec 31, 2012
|Working in surgical units as a volunteer; Common App Essay- Experience
Undergraduaterainforest3321 - Dec 31, 2012 / mohitsinghal95 - Dec 31, 2012
|Small campus/ Rosa Parks; BARNARD/ Why apply?/ Woman in history
4 - When I did my college research project junior year, I stumbled upon Barnard College. I discovered this all women...
Undergraduatevvega395 - Dec 31, 2012 / CollegeApp - Dec 31, 2012
|Program/Track team& coaches/ Myself; Syracuse - Why apply?/ Dream Person
3 - Honestly, thank you so much!! Every little bit helps. God bless you. And there is no word limit!...
Undergraduatelexiclavet - Dec 31, 2012 / lexiclavet - Dec 31, 2012
|"DREAM"; CommonApp/ Personal Statement
3 - Oh I was under the impression they wouldn't allow me to write 'it's' and 'they're' etc. Yes when I...
UndergraduateWonderlandPlan - Dec 31, 2012 / WonderlandPlan - Dec 31, 2012
|Further my education in the sciences; NYU SUPPLEMENT/Academic Plans
Undergraduateticklelisaelmo - Dec 30, 2012 / jfloyd1879 - Dec 31, 2012
|People to People Student Ambassador program; Creative work
Undergraduatemltrip - Dec 30, 2012 / mltrip - Dec 31, 2012
|MIT EECS provides tools and resources; MIT admission short essay/ Department
Undergraduateduquevan - Dec 27, 2012 / mohitsinghal95 - Dec 31, 2012
|Calm melting pot of culture and intellectualism / "Why Boston?"
Undergraduatejfloyd1879 - Dec 31, 2012 / snibberbit - Dec 31, 2012
|ARTIST/ COOKING/ Conversations on MYSTERIES; Harvard's / Future Roommate
2 - I know you're trying to make yourself seem quirky and fun but I feel like the first sentence is...
UndergraduateIdealprism - Dec 31, 2012 / jlee30410 - Dec 31, 2012
|Sudden inspiration; MIT/ What attributte of your personality are you most proud of?
Undergraduateduquevan - Dec 31, 2012 / duquevan - Dec 31, 2012
|Enthusiastic Artist; New Rice ; How you contribute to life at Rice?
2 - English didn't matter, so long as I made the grade. When I first started taking French, I was frustrated...
Undergraduatearguanoid - Dec 30, 2012 / redrobinson - Dec 31, 2012
|"Stand up for what I believe"- Lehigh Supplements.
2 - Your story is very interesting. I fixed just grammar, and did my best to not change any of the...
Undergraduateksm1872 - Dec 30, 2012 / c_lignelli - Dec 31, 2012
|'An Unexpected Journey and Winning the Green Card' Common Application
Undergraduatebr2pi5 - Dec 26, 2012 / br2pi5 - Dec 31, 2012
|"Seven Sisters" intrigued me; Barnard / Good Match
Undergraduatewhitezebra - Dec 31, 2012 / whitezebra - Dec 31, 2012
|TUTORING has been a significant part of my life; Extracurricular Activity
Undergraduatearguanoid - Dec 31, 2012 / snibberbit - Dec 31, 2012
|Sultan Ahmed Mosque; NYU supp/ What intrigues you?
4 - Very good paragraph. I was about to question you on how you discovered that your heritage was precious...
Undergraduatenounouboo - Dec 26, 2012 / vvega395 - Dec 31, 2012
|I wanted them to be moved; UPenn Supp- Ben Franklin!
Undergraduatesillybandz - Dec 31, 2012 / CTHIMENYOR - Dec 31, 2012
|My entire family; Common App/ Person influenced
Undergraduateaarkebauer - Dec 31, 2012 / headshot0313 - Dec 31, 2012
|Travel - new perspective - Rice University
4 - This is an admissions essay, right? Your experiences and references to people are really strong, but maybe it would...
Undergraduatesogoldman - Dec 30, 2012 / c_lignelli - Dec 31, 2012
|LANGUAGES/ English, Spanish & Chinese; NYU/ What intrigues you?
Undergraduatevalfernandez94 - Dec 31, 2012 / valfernandez94 - Dec 31, 2012
|"My Battle Against Obesity" - 'something in your life goes unnoticed/ why it's important'; MADISON
2 - Pretty amazing essay. Historical references are a nice touch, and the entire thing flows very well. Only thing that...
Undergraduatediff - Dec 30, 2012 / arguanoid - Dec 31, 2012
|Teen Court; Common App Extracurricular
Undergraduateding377 - Dec 29, 2012 / ding377 - Dec 31, 2012
|I retained a keen passion for photography; NYU - Global network/What intrigues you
Undergraduatemcyyx3 - Dec 31, 2012 / ticklelisaelmo - Dec 31, 2012
|Diverse city & culture/ unique atmosphere; NYU sup/ Why NYU?
3 - The ending should be changed because right now it does not do a good job at closing your response....
UndergraduateIvonneA95 - Dec 29, 2012 / valfernandez94 - Dec 31, 2012
|Stanford Essays- Intellectual vitality + Roommate note
4 - i just read the room mate essay and it was gooood :) although i dont particularly like the numbered...
UndergraduateGAS1995 - Dec 30, 2012 / rew2402 - Dec 31, 2012
|INTERNET; NYU Supplement; What intrigues you?
4 - I really like how you included your own experience into your response. It shows that you are really passionate...
Undergraduatedssauber - Dec 30, 2012 / valfernandez94 - Dec 31, 2012
|Education system in the US; Brown Sup; Academic environment
Undergraduatebr2pi5 - Dec 30, 2012 / br2pi5 - Dec 31, 2012
|"Tesla?"; It was my mistake.; UVa Supp/
Undergraduatelulwut - Dec 31, 2012 / lulwut - Dec 31, 2012
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