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|Living 11 years as a competitive swimmer; Common app/ Extracurricular
3 - If your dad means listing ALL the extracurriculars you do, I disagree. Generally, people just focus in on one...
UndergraduateJessieph - Dec 27, 2012 / xamanda - Dec 27, 2012
|Singing and Dancing; Stanford Roommate Supplement
5 - Thank you so much! This was really, really helpful:) Sent off my Stanford application today, all I can do...
Undergraduategreenshoes02 - Dec 24, 2012 / greenshoes02 - Dec 27, 2012
|Prestige/ History/ Location/ Financial aid; UNIVERCITY OF CHICAGO/ Why?
4 - short and precise , good But like joah5454 said, what do you have that can benefit the college? a...
UndergraduateRosekareen - Dec 27, 2012 / kabal - Dec 27, 2012
|I had officially commissioned a merchandise graphic ; Common App
Undergraduatemhanna - Dec 26, 2012 / katev - Dec 27, 2012
|"Thailander" ; NYU sup/ What intrigues you?
3 - Thank you so much, I think I'm just going to discard this supplement. It was awkward and off topic....
Undergraduatemalaikaiyer - Dec 27, 2012 / malaikaiyer - Dec 27, 2012
|My personal statement for common app: Evaluating a significant experience /risk taken
2 - This is a really inspiring personal statement. It is well written and straight forward. Very Nice !!...
UndergraduateJhoanna22 - Dec 27, 2012 / lars - Dec 27, 2012
|I instantly fell in love with Columbia University: College Community" 1500 words
8 - This is a great answer to Columbia's question! I recently applied as well. I also wrote about some...
UndergraduateaLuckyStudent - Dec 16, 2012 / Chris1395 - Dec 27, 2012
|Neurosurgeon; Johns Hopkins Supp / What I intend to pursue
Undergraduatemorocco513 - Dec 27, 2012 / Hahahala - Dec 27, 2012
|Differences between American and Japanese culture; Yale Supp; More about me
2 - Your essay is great! Im not much of a grammar fanatic but it seems okay. To answer your worry...
UndergraduateTidal Wave - Dec 27, 2012 / qwerty_123 - Dec 27, 2012
|Wake Forest; God is not a loving God - argument for position you do not personally support
2 - The earthquake that hit Haiti is still affecting the people, who remain unable to function. Okay. You need...
Undergraduatehaneom94 - Dec 27, 2012 / sogoldman - Dec 27, 2012
|Humans at fault? / Cornell University Common App/Intrests &experiences on Major
Undergraduateqwerty_123 - Dec 27, 2012 / linting2012 - Dec 27, 2012
|Grandparents' house shaped my wild side; Stanford Supp_ What matters to me and why?
Undergraduateanaiscooler - Dec 26, 2012 / anaiscooler - Dec 27, 2012
|A Heartbeat Away/Liar Game /The Mentalist / Columbia Supp; short answers
4 - Anything you read in your class, like an story or like any passage from you text books would be...
UndergraduateHeavyMetal55 - Dec 23, 2012 / silly278 - Dec 27, 2012
|"We do not stay in one place": UPenn/All mankind is divided into three classes
Undergraduatenairbear68 - Dec 22, 2012 / meljendy - Dec 27, 2012
|She roared facts, defending her side; Stanford Supplement Intellectual Vitality!
Undergraduateanaiscooler - Dec 27, 2012 / anaiscooler - Dec 27, 2012
|Her name was Christel; Common APP-Person_significant influence
2 - One of my frequent days at Brookdale assistant living ended unexpectedly. Awkward, took me several readings to understand this...
UndergraduateKarla281995 - Dec 27, 2012 / alexzxz - Dec 27, 2012
|Diverse community/Financial benefits; BARNARD Supp; Influence by community/ HEOP Scol
2 - I reside in the diverse community of Brighton Beach where people know each other and greet each other daily...
Undergraduatekomalshaheen19 - Dec 27, 2012 / malaikaiyer - Dec 27, 2012
|I'm compassionate; UC Personal Statement for Common App
3 - I actually did the same thing, reusing my UC Personal Statement, but I just made a couple of tweaks...
Undergraduatelars - Dec 27, 2012 / cesaror123 - Dec 27, 2012
|Welcome a disable player as the captain; Columbia App; "ROYAL ROAD" & life experiences
3 - I think it's a good topic. It's easy to understand and I think it could reflect your growth as...
Undergraduatemirc_4 - Dec 27, 2012 / malaikaiyer - Dec 27, 2012
|Which is better:Studying in a Regular school or in an International School?
5 - Thank you very much "natangesh" ^^ Don't worry about your criticism. Your comment will make me a better on...
UndergraduateSalikron - Dec 26, 2012 / Salikron - Dec 27, 2012
|New York never sleeps; NYU Supp/ Why NYU
7 - i really like your description about new york :)..but i would prefer writing more about NYU itselft rather than...
Undergraduatecarolynxpark - Dec 24, 2012 / komalshaheen19 - Dec 27, 2012
|Writing/ Ambition,leadership&consideration/ Math; Short answers
3 - For the second one you mentioned the root of your ambition but you didn't really give definite examples of...
UndergraduateHahahala - Dec 26, 2012 / morocco513 - Dec 27, 2012
|Art for Little Hearts/ Common App on ECA
UndergraduateAssAche - Dec 27, 2012 / alexh983 - Dec 27, 2012
|I was a shy boy with no English knowledge; MIT short essay- Finding myself
Undergraduateluky0ne - Dec 27, 2012 / gdiazdeleon - Dec 27, 2012
|Personal Statement- "the founding of a new university in Africa"
2 - Overall I thought it was a pretty good statement. Narrative is clear and easy to follow, and overall it...
Undergraduateatowns95 - Dec 26, 2012 / rocko - Dec 27, 2012
|One of my most favourite face; COMMON APP;the world I come from
4 - ......
Undergraduatemaazasher - Dec 27, 2012 / maazasher - Dec 27, 2012
|I'm an average suburban Caucasian girl; COMMON APP; DIVERSITY ESSAY.
2 - really good written, nice essay. It shows your passion and personality. But some parts are a little bit...
Undergraduatesam0503 - Dec 27, 2012 / serdarovez - Dec 27, 2012
|Admin Officer/ Neuroscience/ courses/ Sudan/Something you are Proud about/Brown Supp
Undergraduatemgabir - Dec 26, 2012 / mzontario - Dec 27, 2012
|"Determination"; Stanford Supp_ what matters to you and why ?
2 - I think forehead is supposed to be forward lol. Doing so is of such relevance is awkward maybe you...
UndergraduateMiaB - Dec 26, 2012 / nogbutor17 - Dec 27, 2012
|UC offers me the best of both worlds; UChicago Supp/ How UC satisfies you?
2 - The first essay seems like you're trying too hard to say what UChicago does and has, but you don't...
UndergraduateChris1395 - Dec 27, 2012 / haneom94 - Dec 27, 2012
|Competitive World; MIT essay _ Describe the world you come from
UndergraduateMiaB - Dec 26, 2012 / painglintun - Dec 27, 2012
|Majoring in Unafraid- Barnard Sup 2012
6 - Your revised version ig pretty good. I think ...' thretened to crumble my motivation and determination' is what you...
Undergraduatesunnybunny - Dec 25, 2012 / black and white - Dec 27, 2012
|"Well, look at us"; Harvard Supplement_Letter to Roommate
2 - OK, here's what I would change. one of the most renowned schools in the world Don't get me wrong,...
Undergraduatehaneom94 - Dec 27, 2012 / fwan17 - Dec 27, 2012
|Charity work in Nicaragua; Princeton Supp/ Event or Experience
Undergraduatebigpapi - Dec 26, 2012 / bigpapi - Dec 27, 2012
|highest quality of education; U Chicago/ How UChicago satisfy you?
Undergraduateleed6893 - Dec 26, 2012 / haneom94 - Dec 27, 2012
|BU has diverse students body ; BU suppl_ why BU is a good fit ?
Undergraduateearth - Dec 26, 2012 / earth - Dec 27, 2012
|'The Secret' by Rhonda Byrne; Princeton - Quote
3 - Dear salikron , The secret works. You must watch the movie or read the book which one you prefer....
UndergraduateMillin Gabani - Dec 27, 2012 / Millin Gabani - Dec 27, 2012
|My childhood was filled with palying with dirt; Yale Supp; Say More about you
6 - Quite a lot of grammar mistakes. Use commas more frequently to separate your ideas in a sentence, too. Finally,...
UndergraduateAna123 - Dec 26, 2012 / bymyside4948 - Dec 27, 2012
|About Movie "Forrest Gump"; NYU Supplement What intrigues you?
7 - ĺ"ĺ"! è-è-ĺ› It's great to see other Taiwanese in here , Good luck with your application!...
Undergraduatekevinll - Dec 10, 2012 / hanksze - Dec 27, 2012
|I saw it as well.; PS;Princeton/Yale/Harvard Supp;Mountain climbing experience
3 - Thank you! I always feel there's something wrong here but I couldn't tell clearly, Thanx for pointing out! ...
UndergraduateJinyi - Dec 26, 2012 / Jinyi - Dec 27, 2012
|"Dune"; Princeton supp- favorite quotation
4 - i loved you beginning and the content. perhaps it needs a stronger ending. otherwise, the essay is good enough...
Undergraduatednx2000 - Dec 26, 2012 / rew2402 - Dec 27, 2012
|Tennis is my precious partner; Common App/ Extracurricular activity
NEW - This short essay is for Common Application of 2013 register.The question is "Please briefly elaborate on one of your...
UndergraduateMoet - Dec 27, 2012 / — -
|Save the World; Bowdoin Supp/Intellectual engagement/Common Good/Connection to place
Undergraduatebymyside4948 - Dec 26, 2012 / bymyside4948 - Dec 27, 2012
|Page 217 of diary ;U Penn; Why penn?
6 - change to : ..."thinking about the difficulty of allocating funds for projects in corporations" Good...
Undergraduatesarthakjain - Dec 26, 2012 / sunnybunny - Dec 27, 2012
|Be Born Every day; COMMON APP/ Person who had Significant Influence
Undergraduatesj1912 - Dec 26, 2012 / sj1912 - Dec 27, 2012
|"We make a life by what we give"- RUTGERS /What you take & give to Rutgers community
Undergraduateblack and white - Dec 24, 2012 / sarthakjain - Dec 27, 2012
|common app education interruption
3 - It is mostly because I think I can move on as I already earned required credits for the graduation...
Undergraduateleed6893 - Dec 26, 2012 / leed6893 - Dec 27, 2012
|Cool Running ; Columbia sup
UndergraduateEmeeShie7 - Dec 26, 2012 / katev - Dec 27, 2012
|I am a barbarian! ; BARD Supp/ Short commentary
3 - Thank you for being so honest.I really appreciate it...Seems like I need to write on the other topic....
Undergraduateimpatient101 - Dec 26, 2012 / impatient101 - Dec 27, 2012
|I love to dream/ to visualize, conceive & to create; Stanford App/ What matters&Why?
Undergraduatecollegemaster - Dec 26, 2012 / mzontario - Dec 27, 2012
|"Linsanity" completely took over the nation; I pretended not to like Jeremy Lin
2 - I wouldn't change the topic! I'm having a hard time coming up with something and this is very good...
Undergraduateachen187 - Dec 26, 2012 / katev - Dec 27, 2012
|Minor in economics; Duke - Why Duke Arts and Science?
Undergraduatemzontario - Dec 26, 2012 / katev - Dec 27, 2012
|My past connections to places; Bowdoin / Interests and experiences
4 - I corrected some grammar mistakes and added things to the paragraph. New Version: The past three years of...
Undergraduatelm24601 - Dec 26, 2012 / lm24601 - Dec 27, 2012
|"I won't speak much at first"; Stanford Essay-Future Roommate
2 - Awkward sentence. Don't think that merits a semicolon and your use of "revolutions" seems out of place ...
Undergraduatehannahdowdy - Dec 26, 2012 / katev - Dec 27, 2012
|The Game of Life / Common App topic # 1
Undergraduateyycho0426 - Dec 26, 2012 / yycho0426 - Dec 27, 2012
|My uncle calls me "Theoretik"; MIT App // Cultural Background // Pragmatic fami
3 - My uncle calls the "Theoretik," meaning dreamer. Despite his academic success, the Soviets denied him (an opportunity to learn,...
UndergraduateProran - Dec 26, 2012 / katev - Dec 27, 2012
|My MODEL CONTEST -- NYU App
UndergraduateChloemoon - Dec 25, 2012 / Chloemoon - Dec 27, 2012
|Life- A medley of happiness & sorrow;Bard college Sup;Short response-"True joy..."
2 - You must not blame others for the hard times in your life...The admissions staff doesn't expect this from...
Undergraduateayushhar4270194 - Dec 25, 2012 / shailendra redd - Dec 27, 2012
|Diversity/ YALE SUPP; Why Yale?/Short takers
Undergraduateswagswag - Dec 26, 2012 / katev - Dec 27, 2012
|Mec Eng/Renewable energy resources; Carnegie Mellon University / Department/Program?
2 - I look forward to studying in Carnegie Melon, to make a change that could hoping that one day I...
Undergraduatepainglintun - Dec 26, 2012 / UrgentHelp392 - Dec 26, 2012
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