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|Huyen Anh, as I called her / Commonapp essay - Influential person
3 - You're right, I really don't want to exceed the word limit, but clearly I don't know how to reduce...
Undergraduatell931110 - Dec 19, 2012 / ll931110 - Dec 19, 2012
|I am not exactly sure about what I wish to study ; NYU supp/ Academic interests
3 - As I am not exactly sure unsure about what I wish to study later on, some people might translate...
Undergraduateawakemysoul - Dec 19, 2012 / ceandrews95 - Dec 19, 2012
|NYU supplement "What intrigues you?"- street art
2 - actually going into a museum or an art gallery, which fascinates me very much. - i am not sure...
Undergraduateawakemysoul - Dec 19, 2012 / zdv - Dec 19, 2012
|Gym gave me a new found confidence; Common App/ Topic of your choice
UndergraduateGenieo - Dec 19, 2012 / enigma33 - Dec 19, 2012
|How to prevent another Crisis in the World (College of Arts and Sciences)
2 - My heart was set on Medicine and I believed I was going to bearenowned Doctor when I was older...
UndergraduateGenieo - Dec 19, 2012 / Pahan - Dec 19, 2012
|I want to change this world; Illinois ESSAY PROMPT#1:
Undergraduatevadalis - Dec 15, 2012 / vadalis - Dec 19, 2012
|My army stint as a specialist; SMU Admission/ Achievement Essay
Undergraduateomarnasri - Dec 19, 2012 / dumi - Dec 19, 2012
|I indulge in every piece of the performance; NYU Supp/ What intrigues you?
3 - "Being a devoted* music fan" "when you watch a performer perform" sounds a little redundant, maybe try when you...
UndergraduateBelievefm - Dec 16, 2012 / awakemysoul - Dec 19, 2012
|Reed College Supplement? "I know I'm not unique."
UndergraduateNyxness - Dec 16, 2012 / AryanK - Dec 19, 2012
|Speaking up my mind ; Supplement for the University of Richmond
Undergraduatehuyhoang95 - Dec 17, 2012 / huyhoang95 - Dec 19, 2012
|Art acts as a medium of escape for me/ Common App - Extracurricular
3 - Thanks yara your I appreciate your help. I would appreciate more correction if anyone feels so....
UndergraduateMillin Gabani - Dec 18, 2012 / Millin Gabani - Dec 18, 2012
|Good academics / Independent person / Honor Society / Real Word (Syracuse)
UndergraduateStephR - Dec 15, 2012 / rocky432 - Dec 18, 2012
|America was different from the country I came from;personal/social/family challenge
UndergraduateMoira - Dec 14, 2012 / Moira - Dec 18, 2012
|Needed to do more with my life - Exploring interests at NYU
Undergraduatechithon - Dec 17, 2012 / mzontario - Dec 18, 2012
|'Frank Ocean's Bad Religion' - My fav song. Essay for UChicago
Undergraduatediabatem - Dec 18, 2012 / Jennyflower81 - Dec 18, 2012
|Rice Supplemental Essay -- Perspectives as a student of eight different schools
2 - This essay was well-written. I only noticed a few grammatical errors and you may want to include your initial...
UndergraduateEnigmaticguitar - Dec 14, 2012 / diabatem - Dec 18, 2012
|I was rejected for College Chearleading Team; Common app/Significant experience
NEW - Evaluate a significant experience, achievement, risk you have taken, or ethical dilemma you have faced and its impact on...
UndergraduateCvins - Dec 18, 2012 / — -
|Walking in the coldness of the winter/ Common App
UndergraduateFYCHCICI - Dec 18, 2012 / diabatem - Dec 18, 2012
|I find the English people very fascinating; People you'd like to know/ GRINNELL SUPP
2 - I mostly find myself being pulled, as an observer, into the world of the characters. This sentence sounds a...
UndergraduateRechy - Dec 18, 2012 / Jennyflower81 - Dec 18, 2012
|From Ukraine to Ghana; Richmond University Supplement
5 - Thank you :)...
Undergraduatefwan17 - Dec 18, 2012 / fwan17 - Dec 18, 2012
|Part time job at Softmedia Systems; common app (work experience)
2 - Hi, I've read your essay carefully and I think your experience is great! But there's couple things I think...
Undergraduatearunesh12 - Dec 18, 2012 / FYCHCICI - Dec 18, 2012
|"Broken Bow" MIT Challenge Prompt -
Undergraduatelinting2012 - Dec 15, 2012 / yara - Dec 18, 2012
|I wasn't ready for the commitment of a 4-year university;UIC/ reasons for transfer
2 - My personal opinion is they would find this to be a short answer. Perhaps, you could go a little...
Undergraduatefoxyh - Dec 15, 2012 / nair - Dec 18, 2012
|Students' success in University study
UndergraduateMymy141 - Dec 16, 2012 / Mymy141 - Dec 18, 2012
|Mr. Wong, my music teacher: Person who had a significant influence/Common App
Undergraduateceandrews95 - Dec 17, 2012 / Pahan - Dec 18, 2012
|'Don't panic. You can do this.' I said to myself ; Common App
4 - Thank you so much for the comments! The prompt is: Evaluate a signiï-cant experience, achievement, risk you have...
Undergraduatesmy1510 - Dec 17, 2012 / smy1510 - Dec 18, 2012
|I come from a multicultural household / Describe your world
Undergraduatechrissyc729 - Oct 28, 2012 / dumi - Dec 17, 2012
|I would be delighted to call myself as an Emory Eagle; EMORY SUPP
UndergraduateAmazingEK - Dec 16, 2012 / putnam7 - Dec 17, 2012
|NYU SUPPLEMENT - What Intrigues You - Art of War Sun Tzu
Undergraduatechithon - Dec 17, 2012 / macauleec - Dec 17, 2012
|I didn't want to judge a school by its rankings online - Why Emory?
Undergraduateputnam7 - Dec 17, 2012 / AmazingEK - Dec 17, 2012
|My flight alone - Common App prompt
UndergraduateSilleth - Dec 17, 2012 / Silleth - Dec 17, 2012
|NYU Supplement - Why NYU? / What Intrigues You? "Ayn Rand's book"
2 - Your first sentence has a striking grammar error. You have a dangling modifier "Living in Queens, Manhattan..." ...
UndergraduateMichele2495 - Dec 17, 2012 / DrS - Dec 17, 2012
|UChic Supplement Essay about the archnemesis. IS IT OUT OF TOPIC OR TOO RISKY?
Undergraduateazmain1234 - Dec 16, 2012 / mcig - Dec 17, 2012
|From dad / Woman in history / Unafraid / Community - BARNARD
Undergraduateskhan0924 - Dec 15, 2012 / skhan0924 - Dec 17, 2012
|Gradually, I found my true love: NUCLEAR SCIENCE; MIT
5 - thank you...
Undergraduatearunesh12 - Dec 16, 2012 / arunesh12 - Dec 17, 2012
|I will get to explore my talents and passion for culture and media; NYU
UndergraduateBelievefm - Dec 16, 2012 / chithon - Dec 17, 2012
|With me, the period of revising for master of law examination is the most stressful
6 - Jennyflower81, I have noticed your comments are quite helpful. Could you please review my essay as well. essayforum.com/undergraduate-essays-2/cornell-computer-engineering-und...
Undergraduatethanhhuyen - Dec 3, 2012 / garggaurav1995 - Dec 17, 2012
|We live in a changing world/ Why Business Administration ? (250-300 words)
UndergraduateKarimKMG - Dec 15, 2012 / putnam7 - Dec 17, 2012
|Career goals, efforts, and diversity
4 - Thank you guys for all your suggestions, so I am just planning on skipping the first paragraph. What do...
Undergraduatesg120 - Dec 17, 2012 / sg120 - Dec 17, 2012
|Pharmacy is not a career field I became interested in by watching television ; PS
2 - Sounds good!...
Undergraduatecesarlil - Dec 9, 2012 / essayhelp66 - Dec 17, 2012
|UC Prompt 1 Chess' influence on my life
5 - try just 'experienced' instead you use the word chess too many times. replace it with passion...
UndergraduateDoom - Nov 26, 2012 / thespoonguy - Dec 17, 2012
|I'm writing an essay to show unique qualities to myself. How to make it interesting?
Undergraduatennpurnama - Sep 12, 2011 / dumi - Dec 17, 2012
|I would aspire to become a physician; Johns Hopkins Supp
2 - Great essay! And if you add little bit more about your personality rather than facts of about yourself,...
Undergraduaterbyoussef - Dec 16, 2012 / AmazingEK - Dec 17, 2012
|Shifting to a different city? Commonapp / Signicant experience
Undergraduaterew2402 - Dec 16, 2012 / DDDDISSSSSCO - Dec 17, 2012
|Common App Essay Prompt 1, Building a Raft
Undergraduatelulwut - Dec 14, 2012 / lulwut - Dec 16, 2012
|"the mind is key. Control the mind, control the body" : Yale Supplement
Undergraduatealexb - Dec 13, 2012 / thespoonguy - Dec 16, 2012
|Williams Supplement Window Essay- Any suggestions? ROUGH DRAFT
3 - I like the essay and vivid description. My suggestion would be to elaborate on why it is significant to...
UndergraduateGirlNextDoor - Dec 15, 2012 / alexb - Dec 16, 2012
|stanford roommate essay- debating and the outdoors
6 - I would cut down on the opening few sentences talking about what you expect college life to be like....
Undergraduatethespoonguy - Dec 14, 2012 / alexb - Dec 16, 2012
|William and Mary Supplement Essay- Why I Don't Believe In Punching Pillows
UndergraduateSpringSkies - Dec 15, 2012 / linting2012 - Dec 16, 2012
|"You are not a starter", said my tennis coach. ; Princeton Supplement
Undergraduaterezwan3 - Dec 16, 2012 / rezwan3 - Dec 16, 2012
|'The unity of music' - What matters to you and why? Stanford
Undergraduatenairbear68 - Dec 15, 2012 / xpmichy - Dec 16, 2012
|The opportunities that Cornell provides to students are phenomenal ; Cornell Eng
2 - Success! All our hard work had finally paid off as we now knew that the State Tournament trophy was...
Undergraduatejonesguy14 - Dec 15, 2012 / diebysenioritis - Dec 16, 2012
|Harvard commonapp supplement essays- about use of education
8 - i think it's really coherent and flows well. Good job! just remove that "PROGRAMMING - 11 char word" thing...
Undergraduateshaigupta94 - Dec 12, 2012 / college134nj - Dec 16, 2012
|Stanford Supplement(s): 1- It's our duty to be intellectual 2- Roommate letter
4 - the 2nd one really brings out ur quirky side... makes anyone wanna be ur roommate. very interesting - especially...
Undergraduatesahir13 - Dec 15, 2012 / college134nj - Dec 16, 2012
|'Just fix the world' -Brown: What would I do if I could do something without failing?
7 - And it doesn't have to be really sophisticated. A simple thing such as hunting could reveal a lot about...
Undergraduatekealasophia - Nov 23, 2012 / rezwan3 - Dec 16, 2012
|Common App Essay - What gets me out of bed in the morning
Undergraduatesophiawebster - Dec 16, 2012 / college134nj - Dec 16, 2012
|So here I am - I am ready to be a Carl: WHY CARLETON ?
Undergraduateinkhk - Dec 14, 2012 / rew2402 - Dec 16, 2012
|Being a devote Justin Bieber fan! NYU supplement
8 - Ok. Thanks everyone for the advice. Ill cut him out of it. And what kind of criticisms should I...
UndergraduateBelievefm - Dec 13, 2012 / Believefm - Dec 16, 2012
|"A man cannot be too careful in the choice of his enemies" ; University of Chicago
6 - A question to ALL: Can I write a fiction piece on this prompt? I was planning on talking about...
Undergraduatetimeywimey - Dec 9, 2012 / azmain1234 - Dec 16, 2012
|My common app essay about my life - The Journey with two Omers
2 - overall the idea is good, but grammar needs a little bit of tweaking. your description of two omers is...
Undergraduateputnam7 - Dec 15, 2012 / sarthakjain - Dec 16, 2012
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