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|''Kaley'' , being dark in complexion - Personal Statement for Bucknell
Undergraduaterocky432 - Dec 19, 2012 / MHKHRY - Dec 20, 2012
|Producing props for drama! Common App- Extracurricular activities
UndergraduateShoko0229 - Dec 19, 2012 / Shoko0229 - Dec 20, 2012
|'Ever Better'--Rochester/ "Meliora "experience from your life
UndergraduateCynthia2200 - Dec 17, 2012 / Cynthia2200 - Dec 20, 2012
|Ranked 8th in the world...: UMich Supp/ Why UMich?
4 - Hi. I think your essay is good. You clearly show that you have made some research about the university....
Undergraduatedavidjaychoi - Dec 19, 2012 / weeyizhi - Dec 20, 2012
|Passion for travel; Yale Supp/ Something you'd like to say more
15 - At fourteen, I decided to do an exchange year in Germany. I didn't speak any German, but I went...
Undergraduatebrazilian01 - Dec 19, 2012 / weeyizhi - Dec 20, 2012
|That was the day of the grand Egyptian revolution / Common App: National Concern
9 - The previous two comments really said what I wanted to say. Especially with an event like this I can...
UndergraduateJoey191 - Dec 18, 2012 / enigma33 - Dec 20, 2012
|UNC Supplement-Design your own course prompt. "journey into mystery"
NEW - If you could design and teach your own course, what topic would you cover? What texts, assignments, projects, field...
Undergraduatelehrling12 - Dec 19, 2012 / — -
|Common app essay about influential fictional character. "Don't forget the hyphen"
Undergraduatelehrling12 - Dec 19, 2012 / lehrling12 - Dec 19, 2012
|My aunt would help choose the course for me; NYU/ Academic interests?
UndergraduateMHKHRY - Dec 19, 2012 / MHKHRY - Dec 19, 2012
|Singing; Common App/ Extracurricular Activity
UndergraduateFYCHCICI - Dec 19, 2012 / xxxrays - Dec 19, 2012
|my love and dedication for music; UMich Supplemental Essay 1 Community
Undergraduatedavidjaychoi - Dec 19, 2012 / xxxrays - Dec 19, 2012
|admission essay: raise student achievement
2 - How would you deal with students who arent motivates to study? Would you move on with your lesson plan...
UndergraduateAbby5 - Dec 17, 2012 / davidjaychoi - Dec 19, 2012
|'Joy is your business' - Bard Supplement Essay -True Joy
3 - The essay starts out great, but then gets vague. You need to elaborate more on your friendship with her...
Undergraduatemeoh0707 - Dec 18, 2012 / brazilian01 - Dec 19, 2012
|When I was in Hong Kong, I was a princess! / COMMON APP ESSAY
11 - Yes, I did. Again, due to the sensitive nature of the essay, the metaphor gave it a heartwarming touch....
Undergraduatechristies - Dec 18, 2012 / brazilian01 - Dec 19, 2012
|Supplement Essay on the Development on My Interest on Computer Science
Undergraduatecoollog - Dec 15, 2012 / coollog - Dec 19, 2012
|Critique my Yale supplement response for 2013 application.
5 - Loved it. It gives a great sense of who you are and what you like, answering perfectly the question....
Undergraduatedharmajblackman - Nov 18, 2012 / brazilian01 - Dec 19, 2012
|"Bullying" ; MIT World Prompt/ world you come from
Undergraduatelinting2012 - Dec 15, 2012 / linting2012 - Dec 19, 2012
|I have lived in Israel for most of my life/ Stanford (commonapp) -future roommate
Undergraduatebutnikbee - Dec 19, 2012 / butnikbee - Dec 19, 2012
|NYU SUPP- WHY NYU? It's the most convenient location/ friendly faces
Undergraduatebubblegum101 - Dec 19, 2012 / bubblegum101 - Dec 19, 2012
|Nutrient deficiency disease ; Ivy League/Common App (national concern)
NEW - This is a common application(commonapp.org) essay. I am applying to several Ivy League schools and top-tier schools so I...
UndergraduateWilliamWambua - Dec 19, 2012 / — -
|Stanford Essay: letter to roommate, I like health and coffee
Undergraduatepotterygenius94 - Dec 17, 2012 / imanali14 - Dec 19, 2012
|Knowledge of Languages is precious; Common App Essay
2 - for the common app you basically upload you document so i'm pretty sure they can't check on your word...
Undergraduaterbyoussef - Dec 19, 2012 / nairbear68 - Dec 19, 2012
|Rock music; the freedom to be yourself/ COLUMBIA App/ Meaningful cutural event
4 - Back in the 80s, rock music was said to represent freedom of expression; the freedom to be yourself. ...
Undergraduatethespoonguy - Dec 18, 2012 / Doom - Dec 19, 2012
|I have aspired to work in the field of aeronautics; Supplementary Essay.
3 - Thank you for your response. I really appreciate it, I am working on a second copy right now. ...
Undergraduatedbscl - Dec 15, 2012 / dbscl - Dec 19, 2012
|Broadening Horizons; Liberal arts/ Skills and competencies
5 - AryanK It's a well written essay. you have aptly described the benefits of a liberal art education. That's...
UndergraduateAryanK - Dec 18, 2012 / ssaxena - Dec 19, 2012
|'academic endeavors' - Northwestern provides a wide assortment of programs
8 - Yes, its good. here you have came up with reasons for applying and also discussed the specific features and...
Undergraduatediabatem - Dec 18, 2012 / AryanK - Dec 19, 2012
|My consciousness was shaken in 2005 October ; Different world
6 - Thanks a lot for your critique and time. Your remarks are helpful. I ll work on it and improve...
UndergraduateAryanK - Dec 17, 2012 / AryanK - Dec 19, 2012
|Huyen Anh, as I called her / Commonapp essay - Influential person
3 - You're right, I really don't want to exceed the word limit, but clearly I don't know how to reduce...
Undergraduatell931110 - Dec 19, 2012 / ll931110 - Dec 19, 2012
|I am not exactly sure about what I wish to study ; NYU supp/ Academic interests
3 - As I am not exactly sure unsure about what I wish to study later on, some people might translate...
Undergraduateawakemysoul - Dec 19, 2012 / ceandrews95 - Dec 19, 2012
|NYU supplement "What intrigues you?"- street art
2 - actually going into a museum or an art gallery, which fascinates me very much. - i am not sure...
Undergraduateawakemysoul - Dec 19, 2012 / zdv - Dec 19, 2012
|Gym gave me a new found confidence; Common App/ Topic of your choice
UndergraduateGenieo - Dec 19, 2012 / enigma33 - Dec 19, 2012
|How to prevent another Crisis in the World (College of Arts and Sciences)
2 - My heart was set on Medicine and I believed I was going to bearenowned Doctor when I was older...
UndergraduateGenieo - Dec 19, 2012 / Pahan - Dec 19, 2012
|I want to change this world; Illinois ESSAY PROMPT#1:
Undergraduatevadalis - Dec 15, 2012 / vadalis - Dec 19, 2012
|My army stint as a specialist; SMU Admission/ Achievement Essay
Undergraduateomarnasri - Dec 19, 2012 / dumi - Dec 19, 2012
|I indulge in every piece of the performance; NYU Supp/ What intrigues you?
3 - "Being a devoted* music fan" "when you watch a performer perform" sounds a little redundant, maybe try when you...
UndergraduateBelievefm - Dec 16, 2012 / awakemysoul - Dec 19, 2012
|Reed College Supplement? "I know I'm not unique."
UndergraduateNyxness - Dec 16, 2012 / AryanK - Dec 19, 2012
|Speaking up my mind ; Supplement for the University of Richmond
Undergraduatehuyhoang95 - Dec 17, 2012 / huyhoang95 - Dec 19, 2012
|Art acts as a medium of escape for me/ Common App - Extracurricular
3 - Thanks yara your I appreciate your help. I would appreciate more correction if anyone feels so....
UndergraduateMillin Gabani - Dec 18, 2012 / Millin Gabani - Dec 18, 2012
|Good academics / Independent person / Honor Society / Real Word (Syracuse)
UndergraduateStephR - Dec 15, 2012 / rocky432 - Dec 18, 2012
|America was different from the country I came from;personal/social/family challenge
UndergraduateMoira - Dec 14, 2012 / Moira - Dec 18, 2012
|Needed to do more with my life - Exploring interests at NYU
Undergraduatechithon - Dec 17, 2012 / mzontario - Dec 18, 2012
|'Frank Ocean's Bad Religion' - My fav song. Essay for UChicago
Undergraduatediabatem - Dec 18, 2012 / Jennyflower81 - Dec 18, 2012
|Rice Supplemental Essay -- Perspectives as a student of eight different schools
2 - This essay was well-written. I only noticed a few grammatical errors and you may want to include your initial...
UndergraduateEnigmaticguitar - Dec 14, 2012 / diabatem - Dec 18, 2012
|I was rejected for College Chearleading Team; Common app/Significant experience
NEW - Evaluate a significant experience, achievement, risk you have taken, or ethical dilemma you have faced and its impact on...
UndergraduateCvins - Dec 18, 2012 / — -
|Walking in the coldness of the winter/ Common App
UndergraduateFYCHCICI - Dec 18, 2012 / diabatem - Dec 18, 2012
|I find the English people very fascinating; People you'd like to know/ GRINNELL SUPP
2 - I mostly find myself being pulled, as an observer, into the world of the characters. This sentence sounds a...
UndergraduateRechy - Dec 18, 2012 / Jennyflower81 - Dec 18, 2012
|From Ukraine to Ghana; Richmond University Supplement
5 - Thank you :)...
Undergraduatefwan17 - Dec 18, 2012 / fwan17 - Dec 18, 2012
|Part time job at Softmedia Systems; common app (work experience)
2 - Hi, I've read your essay carefully and I think your experience is great! But there's couple things I think...
Undergraduatearunesh12 - Dec 18, 2012 / FYCHCICI - Dec 18, 2012
|"Broken Bow" MIT Challenge Prompt -
Undergraduatelinting2012 - Dec 15, 2012 / yara - Dec 18, 2012
|I wasn't ready for the commitment of a 4-year university;UIC/ reasons for transfer
2 - My personal opinion is they would find this to be a short answer. Perhaps, you could go a little...
Undergraduatefoxyh - Dec 15, 2012 / nair - Dec 18, 2012
|Students' success in University study
UndergraduateMymy141 - Dec 16, 2012 / Mymy141 - Dec 18, 2012
|Mr. Wong, my music teacher: Person who had a significant influence/Common App
Undergraduateceandrews95 - Dec 17, 2012 / Pahan - Dec 18, 2012
|'Don't panic. You can do this.' I said to myself ; Common App
4 - Thank you so much for the comments! The prompt is: Evaluate a signiï-cant experience, achievement, risk you have...
Undergraduatesmy1510 - Dec 17, 2012 / smy1510 - Dec 18, 2012
|I come from a multicultural household / Describe your world
Undergraduatechrissyc729 - Oct 28, 2012 / dumi - Dec 17, 2012
|I would be delighted to call myself as an Emory Eagle; EMORY SUPP
UndergraduateAmazingEK - Dec 16, 2012 / putnam7 - Dec 17, 2012
|NYU SUPPLEMENT - What Intrigues You - Art of War Sun Tzu
Undergraduatechithon - Dec 17, 2012 / macauleec - Dec 17, 2012
|I didn't want to judge a school by its rankings online - Why Emory?
Undergraduateputnam7 - Dec 17, 2012 / AmazingEK - Dec 17, 2012
|My flight alone - Common App prompt
UndergraduateSilleth - Dec 17, 2012 / Silleth - Dec 17, 2012
|NYU Supplement - Why NYU? / What Intrigues You? "Ayn Rand's book"
2 - Your first sentence has a striking grammar error. You have a dangling modifier "Living in Queens, Manhattan..." ...
UndergraduateMichele2495 - Dec 17, 2012 / DrS - Dec 17, 2012
|UChic Supplement Essay about the archnemesis. IS IT OUT OF TOPIC OR TOO RISKY?
Undergraduateazmain1234 - Dec 16, 2012 / mcig - Dec 17, 2012
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