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|the every-weekend movie show - UIUC prompt # 2
2 - Brilliant essay in general. Btw on the first line, it should be "Being a secretary meant ..."not means, because...
UndergraduateSimon0228 - Dec 12, 2012 / SadeAjayi - Dec 12, 2012
|I chose to destroy my best friend's life - ethical dilemma
4 - This is an incredible essay. It definitely shows colleges that you're capable of making the right decision rather than...
Undergraduatesarthakjain - Dec 12, 2012 / ivyleague - Dec 12, 2012
|I want to matriculate at Yale: Engineering Essay!
2 - your descriptive language is good, but the problem is you need to be more specific about why you want...
Undergraduatecocoalocox12x - Dec 9, 2012 / sarthakjain - Dec 12, 2012
|I'm lucky to follow my inclinations to learn things that interest me : UIUC Supp
Undergraduatesimon8437 - Dec 11, 2012 / simon8437 - Dec 12, 2012
|Common app essay: Indicate a person who has had a significant influence. True Friend
Undergraduatejohnlacoste - Dec 1, 2012 / reymiii - Dec 12, 2012
|I grew up in hospitals; Common App Essay/ topic of your choice
4 - Your essay is extremely similar to mine for my Common App. I also related a family member with a...
Undergraduatedanabug - Dec 9, 2012 / DrS - Dec 11, 2012
|NJIT application essay. How did you hear about njit and why are you applying
NEW - Please look over my essay, give any advice you feel will help, thank you in advance.:) The first...
UndergraduateAMF505 - Dec 11, 2012 / — -
|Academic interests/ What intrigues you?: NYU Supplements!
4 - In the second part: ^this isn't a complete sentence and therefore it is not grammatically correct. Secondly,...
Undergraduatenounouboo - Dec 9, 2012 / Albert - Dec 11, 2012
|Medical field was always my choice of career - NJIT App
4 - In the past year I introduced to New Jersey Institute of Technology from my close relative, a current NJIT...
UndergraduateQueenchatterbox - Dec 3, 2012 / Queenchatterbox - Dec 11, 2012
|Tae Kwon Do made me a better and stronger person; Haravard Essay
6 - I guess the long list of your achievements might work against you, but still it's up to you whether...
Undergraduatearunesh - Dec 9, 2012 / sukhomoon - Dec 11, 2012
|my cousin was wrongfully convicted of armed robbery; Statement of Intent
5 - @ dibianski: thanks for your corrections, but I have long submitted this essay. I would appreciate it if you...
Undergraduatejiva - Nov 30, 2012 / jiva - Dec 11, 2012
|Describe an unusual way in which you have fun. (Caltech Supplement)
Undergraduatemontysire - Dec 10, 2012 / qasderwdw - Dec 11, 2012
|The walk. Common app essay - I had a nightmare
Undergraduateneptmg - Dec 4, 2012 / azmain1234 - Dec 11, 2012
|"To stay where you are, keep running" - sop for MIS graduate admission
Undergraduateuntraceable_y - Dec 11, 2012 / nirajgupta05 - Dec 11, 2012
|I live in a predominately Italian and Asian neighborhood (Common app Essay)
2 - Change the "viewpoints" everywhere it is. You should explain more the thing you have learned ...
UndergraduateTheBar - Dec 9, 2012 / moon05 - Dec 11, 2012
|CU boulder essay; influential person - parents; My father has taught me lessons in life
5 - Try to get the points more straightly, instead of going round and round and avoid the sentence like "...
Undergraduatediegoarch - Dec 1, 2012 / Millin Gabani - Dec 11, 2012
|I replied, "No, but I learned a great deal": Columbia Supplement
Undergraduaterezwan3 - Nov 4, 2012 / mzontario - Dec 10, 2012
|Why is Reed college a good fit for you? Appl. essey - I don't want to be a typical person
4 - Great narrative! You used the word 'typical' twice within the first two sentences. Try to find another word....
Undergraduategcoffey72 - Dec 4, 2012 / mzontario - Dec 10, 2012
|"To be or not to be" ;UPenn Supplement Essay
3 - Didgeridoo hit the spot. College essays are not like English papers. We understand you have eloquent command of...
Undergraduatecollegehopeful9 - Dec 10, 2012 / DrS - Dec 10, 2012
|My low vision has made things more difficult: UCF Undergraduate Essay
Undergraduatelukelambert - Dec 9, 2012 / mannyalesh - Dec 10, 2012
|Why Colorado College Essay.. Hiking Mountains
3 - Thank you Jennyflower81! It's always good to have someone fluent in english proofreading our essays....
Undergraduatedipbrito - Dec 10, 2012 / dipbrito - Dec 10, 2012
|Northwestern Supplementary Essay; 'I love to talk'
NEW - The topic is: What are the unique qualities of Northwestern - and of the specific undergraduate school to which...
Undergraduatearyeknaani - Dec 10, 2012 / — -
|Activity Essay for Common App (personal essay); 'three 1-week work experience placements'
Undergraduatemileyanne - Dec 10, 2012 / mileyanne - Dec 10, 2012
|Common App essay - "Theater is my passion" - extracurricular activities
3 - macauleec Okay I revised it. Theater always seemed intriguing to me. I started off with the mindset...
UndergraduateB_Simba - Dec 10, 2012 / B_Simba - Dec 10, 2012
|Williams Supplement: Looking through a Window (arthroscopic imagery)
Undergraduateameliam13 - Nov 29, 2012 / collegehopeful9 - Dec 10, 2012
|Making dreams come true. What Intrigues you? NYU SUPPLEMENT
Undergraduatesalehrama10 - Dec 10, 2012 / collegehopeful9 - Dec 10, 2012
|I will bring all my culture and heritage to University of Colorado-CU Boulder prompt
NEW - Hello, This is my essay for U of Colorado-Boulder, please take a look and help me to adjust...
Undergraduatedet94 - Dec 10, 2012 / — -
|TOPIC : Discuss some issue of personal, local, national, or international concern
UndergraduatePrafull - Dec 10, 2012 / macauleec - Dec 10, 2012
|'Thought processes'- Stanford Essay on Intellectual Vitality
3 - I think you put too much focus on the Website...Give more details on your thinking process will be better....
UndergraduateSpencedawg - Nov 5, 2012 / cloris1225 - Dec 10, 2012
|HAPPY TO BE HERE. Common app essay; topic of my choice
Undergraduateneptmg - Dec 6, 2012 / azmain1234 - Dec 10, 2012
|@ AUBG, you don't need to choose only one major!; Global perspective (AUBG)
Undergraduateodata - Dec 9, 2012 / odata - Dec 10, 2012
|'Preeclampsia' - A personal narrative essay
Undergraduatehend nga - Nov 30, 2012 / hend nga - Dec 9, 2012
|My College Essay on Archery; All my hard works, for nothing?
9 - Hey guys thank you all so very much for the replies, especially Amadeco's reply very thoughtful and throughout. @Anally...
Undergraduatelinting2012 - Nov 4, 2012 / linting2012 - Dec 9, 2012
|Describe the world you come from; "My dream of shaping the world" - MIT Essay
3 - @arunesh Why thank you :) @yisha You're right, I'll just remove the last sentence out and revise it previous...
UndergraduateSilleth - Dec 9, 2012 / Silleth - Dec 9, 2012
|Papercraft and its influence on my life; extracurricular activities/ work experiences
8 - Phew!!! Pahan, I almost got scared for life. Thank you all very much though. I will close this thread...
Undergraduatelinting2012 - Dec 3, 2012 / linting2012 - Dec 9, 2012
|Seeing only the negative aspects of any situation can cause many problems
2 - How about this. Seeing the negative aspect of the thing can be good or bad. For example seeing...
Undergraduatebutezon24 - Dec 9, 2012 / linting2012 - Dec 9, 2012
|I need to hit harder. Move faster. Kick higher. Be greater; Common App
Undergraduateivyleague - Dec 8, 2012 / dumi - Dec 9, 2012
|What motivated me for applying to RICE UNIVERSITY; passion for history
UndergraduateEnigmaticguitar - Dec 8, 2012 / Enigmaticguitar - Dec 9, 2012
|NEED TO GET INTO MY DREAM SCHOOL; NYU SUPPLEMENT ESSAY. I am a film maker, a musician...
7 - @Drs New York has long been known as the Melting Pot. The poster laid out a clear, compelling case...
Undergraduatesalehrama10 - Dec 8, 2012 / admission2012 - Dec 9, 2012
|Wellesley College supplement, why Wellesley? - Mona Lisa Smile
UndergraduateEssayLuoLoL - Dec 9, 2012 / EssayLuoLoL - Dec 9, 2012
|Amherst Supplement - Overcoming difficult hardships
UndergraduateDDDDISSSSSCO - Dec 5, 2012 / DrS - Dec 9, 2012
|India- is synonymous to cultural diversity; MIT Essay - background and identity
4 - yeah thanks...
Undergraduatearunesh - Dec 9, 2012 / arunesh - Dec 9, 2012
|UW Freshman Application Essay (Personal Statement): Girl meets world!
Undergraduatesylviayso - Nov 30, 2012 / eharvey03 - Dec 9, 2012
|How SCS-TV Has Influenced Me-University of Dayton Admissions Essay
2 - Hi Jen. Your experience with the student news station sounds interesting but I think the essay can be...
Undergraduatejen94 - Nov 27, 2012 / eharvey03 - Dec 9, 2012
|'Eating locally' - UC #2: Accomplishment, contribution (Locavorism)
3 - Hi Appstudent, To start off, you are a great writer. Your writing is clear and concise. Also you...
Undergraduateappstudent1 - Nov 27, 2012 / DDDDISSSSSCO - Dec 9, 2012
|The Perks of Being a Homeschooler (topic of your choice commonapp!)
6 - thanks so much, everyone! I wasn't trying to say that home schooling is a handicap, but how people...
Undergraduateivyleague - Dec 9, 2012 / ivyleague - Dec 9, 2012
|"Not Just Deep Thought"- Common App Personal Statement
9 - @ Anally. Your assumptions are very wrong. What I try to do here is just guide students on how...
UndergraduatePremed0 - Dec 4, 2012 / admission2012 - Dec 9, 2012
|"Nam is an enthusiastic and humorous guy" - Essay on Myself
UndergraduateNickTheRapper - Dec 1, 2012 / dumi - Dec 9, 2012
|I take pride in the insight I have gained from experiencing how other people live.
Undergraduatesimibug13 - Nov 30, 2012 / Pahan - Dec 9, 2012
|"Civic engagement is a cornerstone of the Duke experience"
UndergraduateEssayLuoLoL - Dec 5, 2012 / hashmnahz94 - Dec 9, 2012
|UW PERSONAL STATEMENT AND DIVERSITY ESSAY My stepmother was the main provider in my family
Undergraduatepfunk42 - Nov 28, 2012 / dumi - Dec 9, 2012
|I was two when my great-grandfather passed away from lung cancer; Challenge/ UBS
Undergraduatevanhero - Dec 9, 2012 / dumi - Dec 9, 2012
|"silly and awkward roles" UC PROMPT #2; personal quality, talent, etc. - important to you
Undergraduatechingchong - Nov 29, 2012 / dumi - Dec 9, 2012
|I learned that strength requires moving forward no matter what we are faced with
Undergraduateutah17 - Nov 29, 2012 / arunesh - Dec 9, 2012
|I stood up and led the exercise : UBC Broad Based Admission Questions for Commerce.
Undergraduatekeelee - Dec 9, 2012 / dumi - Dec 9, 2012
|Engineering is my passion ESSAY(myself); I am desperate to prove myself to the world
UndergraduateParkavin - Dec 9, 2012 / Pahan - Dec 9, 2012
|It's a form of storytelling; NYU SUPPLEMENT ESSAY
2 - It's a pretty good essay! though it would be nice if you can elaborate more on your future plan....
Undergraduatesalehrama10 - Dec 9, 2012 / jaxball - Dec 9, 2012
|Essey based on article; 'I remember my mother sitting in her chair reading aloud'
UndergraduateFarbodbarzakh - Dec 7, 2012 / ah_zafari - Dec 9, 2012
|Why Carnegie Mellon? (Communication Design)
Undergraduatemhanna - Nov 29, 2012 / dumi - Dec 9, 2012
|NYU Undergrad Supplement - What are your own academic interests? computer science
6 - Very solid. I liked reading it. I also agree that your introduction fits in context with what you have...
Undergraduatejaxball - Dec 8, 2012 / DrS - Dec 9, 2012
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