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|"To be or not to be" ;UPenn Supplement Essay
3 - Didgeridoo hit the spot. College essays are not like English papers. We understand you have eloquent command of...
Undergraduatecollegehopeful9 - Dec 10, 2012 / DrS - Dec 10, 2012
|My low vision has made things more difficult: UCF Undergraduate Essay
Undergraduatelukelambert - Dec 9, 2012 / mannyalesh - Dec 10, 2012
|Why Colorado College Essay.. Hiking Mountains
3 - Thank you Jennyflower81! It's always good to have someone fluent in english proofreading our essays....
Undergraduatedipbrito - Dec 10, 2012 / dipbrito - Dec 10, 2012
|Northwestern Supplementary Essay; 'I love to talk'
NEW - The topic is: What are the unique qualities of Northwestern - and of the specific undergraduate school to which...
Undergraduatearyeknaani - Dec 10, 2012 / — -
|Activity Essay for Common App (personal essay); 'three 1-week work experience placements'
Undergraduatemileyanne - Dec 10, 2012 / mileyanne - Dec 10, 2012
|Common App essay - "Theater is my passion" - extracurricular activities
3 - macauleec Okay I revised it. Theater always seemed intriguing to me. I started off with the mindset...
UndergraduateB_Simba - Dec 10, 2012 / B_Simba - Dec 10, 2012
|Williams Supplement: Looking through a Window (arthroscopic imagery)
Undergraduateameliam13 - Nov 29, 2012 / collegehopeful9 - Dec 10, 2012
|Making dreams come true. What Intrigues you? NYU SUPPLEMENT
Undergraduatesalehrama10 - Dec 10, 2012 / collegehopeful9 - Dec 10, 2012
|I will bring all my culture and heritage to University of Colorado-CU Boulder prompt
NEW - Hello, This is my essay for U of Colorado-Boulder, please take a look and help me to adjust...
Undergraduatedet94 - Dec 10, 2012 / — -
|TOPIC : Discuss some issue of personal, local, national, or international concern
UndergraduatePrafull - Dec 10, 2012 / macauleec - Dec 10, 2012
|'Thought processes'- Stanford Essay on Intellectual Vitality
3 - I think you put too much focus on the Website...Give more details on your thinking process will be better....
UndergraduateSpencedawg - Nov 5, 2012 / cloris1225 - Dec 10, 2012
|HAPPY TO BE HERE. Common app essay; topic of my choice
Undergraduateneptmg - Dec 6, 2012 / azmain1234 - Dec 10, 2012
|@ AUBG, you don't need to choose only one major!; Global perspective (AUBG)
Undergraduateodata - Dec 9, 2012 / odata - Dec 10, 2012
|'Preeclampsia' - A personal narrative essay
Undergraduatehend nga - Nov 30, 2012 / hend nga - Dec 9, 2012
|My College Essay on Archery; All my hard works, for nothing?
9 - Hey guys thank you all so very much for the replies, especially Amadeco's reply very thoughtful and throughout. @Anally...
Undergraduatelinting2012 - Nov 4, 2012 / linting2012 - Dec 9, 2012
|Describe the world you come from; "My dream of shaping the world" - MIT Essay
3 - @arunesh Why thank you :) @yisha You're right, I'll just remove the last sentence out and revise it previous...
UndergraduateSilleth - Dec 9, 2012 / Silleth - Dec 9, 2012
|Papercraft and its influence on my life; extracurricular activities/ work experiences
8 - Phew!!! Pahan, I almost got scared for life. Thank you all very much though. I will close this thread...
Undergraduatelinting2012 - Dec 3, 2012 / linting2012 - Dec 9, 2012
|Seeing only the negative aspects of any situation can cause many problems
2 - How about this. Seeing the negative aspect of the thing can be good or bad. For example seeing...
Undergraduatebutezon24 - Dec 9, 2012 / linting2012 - Dec 9, 2012
|I need to hit harder. Move faster. Kick higher. Be greater; Common App
Undergraduateivyleague - Dec 8, 2012 / dumi - Dec 9, 2012
|What motivated me for applying to RICE UNIVERSITY; passion for history
UndergraduateEnigmaticguitar - Dec 8, 2012 / Enigmaticguitar - Dec 9, 2012
|NEED TO GET INTO MY DREAM SCHOOL; NYU SUPPLEMENT ESSAY. I am a film maker, a musician...
7 - @Drs New York has long been known as the Melting Pot. The poster laid out a clear, compelling case...
Undergraduatesalehrama10 - Dec 8, 2012 / admission2012 - Dec 9, 2012
|Wellesley College supplement, why Wellesley? - Mona Lisa Smile
UndergraduateEssayLuoLoL - Dec 9, 2012 / EssayLuoLoL - Dec 9, 2012
|Amherst Supplement - Overcoming difficult hardships
UndergraduateDDDDISSSSSCO - Dec 5, 2012 / DrS - Dec 9, 2012
|India- is synonymous to cultural diversity; MIT Essay - background and identity
4 - yeah thanks...
Undergraduatearunesh - Dec 9, 2012 / arunesh - Dec 9, 2012
|UW Freshman Application Essay (Personal Statement): Girl meets world!
Undergraduatesylviayso - Nov 30, 2012 / eharvey03 - Dec 9, 2012
|How SCS-TV Has Influenced Me-University of Dayton Admissions Essay
2 - Hi Jen. Your experience with the student news station sounds interesting but I think the essay can be...
Undergraduatejen94 - Nov 27, 2012 / eharvey03 - Dec 9, 2012
|'Eating locally' - UC #2: Accomplishment, contribution (Locavorism)
3 - Hi Appstudent, To start off, you are a great writer. Your writing is clear and concise. Also you...
Undergraduateappstudent1 - Nov 27, 2012 / DDDDISSSSSCO - Dec 9, 2012
|The Perks of Being a Homeschooler (topic of your choice commonapp!)
6 - thanks so much, everyone! I wasn't trying to say that home schooling is a handicap, but how people...
Undergraduateivyleague - Dec 9, 2012 / ivyleague - Dec 9, 2012
|"Not Just Deep Thought"- Common App Personal Statement
9 - @ Anally. Your assumptions are very wrong. What I try to do here is just guide students on how...
UndergraduatePremed0 - Dec 4, 2012 / admission2012 - Dec 9, 2012
|"Nam is an enthusiastic and humorous guy" - Essay on Myself
UndergraduateNickTheRapper - Dec 1, 2012 / dumi - Dec 9, 2012
|I take pride in the insight I have gained from experiencing how other people live.
Undergraduatesimibug13 - Nov 30, 2012 / Pahan - Dec 9, 2012
|"Civic engagement is a cornerstone of the Duke experience"
UndergraduateEssayLuoLoL - Dec 5, 2012 / hashmnahz94 - Dec 9, 2012
|UW PERSONAL STATEMENT AND DIVERSITY ESSAY My stepmother was the main provider in my family
Undergraduatepfunk42 - Nov 28, 2012 / dumi - Dec 9, 2012
|I was two when my great-grandfather passed away from lung cancer; Challenge/ UBS
Undergraduatevanhero - Dec 9, 2012 / dumi - Dec 9, 2012
|"silly and awkward roles" UC PROMPT #2; personal quality, talent, etc. - important to you
Undergraduatechingchong - Nov 29, 2012 / dumi - Dec 9, 2012
|I learned that strength requires moving forward no matter what we are faced with
Undergraduateutah17 - Nov 29, 2012 / arunesh - Dec 9, 2012
|I stood up and led the exercise : UBC Broad Based Admission Questions for Commerce.
Undergraduatekeelee - Dec 9, 2012 / dumi - Dec 9, 2012
|Engineering is my passion ESSAY(myself); I am desperate to prove myself to the world
UndergraduateParkavin - Dec 9, 2012 / Pahan - Dec 9, 2012
|It's a form of storytelling; NYU SUPPLEMENT ESSAY
2 - It's a pretty good essay! though it would be nice if you can elaborate more on your future plan....
Undergraduatesalehrama10 - Dec 9, 2012 / jaxball - Dec 9, 2012
|Essey based on article; 'I remember my mother sitting in her chair reading aloud'
UndergraduateFarbodbarzakh - Dec 7, 2012 / ah_zafari - Dec 9, 2012
|Why Carnegie Mellon? (Communication Design)
Undergraduatemhanna - Nov 29, 2012 / dumi - Dec 9, 2012
|NYU Undergrad Supplement - What are your own academic interests? computer science
6 - Very solid. I liked reading it. I also agree that your introduction fits in context with what you have...
Undergraduatejaxball - Dec 8, 2012 / DrS - Dec 9, 2012
|The day you were born was the best day of my life: Common App
7 - I have a few more questions. Can I exceed the 500 word limit? If so, how much? Lastly, should...
Undergraduateazmain1234 - Dec 8, 2012 / azmain1234 - Dec 9, 2012
|Born in Guangzhou ; Personal Statement - College Application
Undergraduateloopedd - Nov 29, 2012 / Pahan - Dec 8, 2012
|FREEDOM : Dangerous Driving, the issue of importance to me
Undergraduatekorib - Dec 8, 2012 / dumi - Dec 8, 2012
|'we all will be the greatest'-significant experience
Undergraduatebrightlights208 - Dec 2, 2012 / dumi - Dec 8, 2012
|Duke engineering essay; 'I come from an artistically inclined family'
5 - Your essay reads more like marketing material from duke rather than an essay from an applicant for admissions...especially this...
Undergraduategrateful1 - Dec 7, 2012 / admission2012 - Dec 8, 2012
|Macarons and baking; Topic of your choice/Common Application
Undergraduatekatev - Dec 8, 2012 / Didgeridoo - Dec 8, 2012
|The bitter notes were made honeyed again; Yale Common Ap
6 - Maybe too flowery? The entire piano itself was a dark mahogany, with the grain showing prominently int eh...
Undergraduatemercedes1923 - Dec 7, 2012 / katev - Dec 8, 2012
|I'm just a little on the messy side; Stanford Roommate
4 - Dear Roomie, You're probably looking at me right now and thinking, "This girl is adopted. There's no way she's...
Undergraduateanaiscooler - Dec 8, 2012 / katev - Dec 8, 2012
|Kid Cudi's song comes to mind ; Music is the Influence
2 - Wow, I'm not sure to where you are submitting this essay, but if it's for college I would say...
Undergraduateann_marie - Dec 1, 2012 / katev - Dec 8, 2012
|My family and I moved in the middle of my junior year:Education Interruption
2 - It's important that you talk about how you fought to get back to better grades and relationships and...
Undergraduatesanjudodley - Dec 8, 2012 / Didgeridoo - Dec 8, 2012
|UIUC essay: Past circumstances and choice of major; My enthusiasm about mathematics
2 - I actually don't see any problems with this! It's engaging without being too cliched, and I could really get...
UndergraduateLilian95 - Dec 2, 2012 / Didgeridoo - Dec 8, 2012
|New York City / Playground and classroom / NYU campuses - supplement questions
2 - I think if you just check the "No Additional Campuses" boxes on the supplements, you don't have to write...
UndergraduateiChevy - Dec 2, 2012 / Didgeridoo - Dec 8, 2012
|"Home Is Where the Grillpocalypse Is" ; why Uchicago essay
2 - I have no idea what a grillpocalypse is. How did that phrase immediately make you want to attend...
Undergraduatesarthakjain - Dec 8, 2012 / Didgeridoo - Dec 8, 2012
|UC personal satement - "Out, everything out." The words swarmed through my innocent head
Undergraduategurlib24 - Nov 28, 2012 / sarthakjain - Dec 8, 2012
|Life is full of ups and downs; issues of personal, local, international concern
4 - Ways you could improve this: 1. Take out the whole beginning until the part below. It is vague...
Undergraduateeng_geek - Dec 8, 2012 / Didgeridoo - Dec 8, 2012
|I envision myself to be a one of the cornellians ; cocornell engineering essay
9 - many , many many thanks for your revision . atleast now i can feel assurance in submitting this essay...
Undergraduatesarthakjain - Dec 3, 2012 / sarthakjain - Dec 8, 2012
|'Google, Microsoft and Apple' - UC - Describe the world you come from
4 - Computers have made my life easier and more convenient. ... OR... Computers have made many lives easier and...
Undergraduateryanefendy - Nov 29, 2012 / Pahan - Dec 8, 2012
|An Achievement/Risk and how you learned from it; CommonApp Essay
UndergraduateAyeshaRaees - Dec 8, 2012 / Pahan - Dec 8, 2012
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