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|This desire is perfectly attuned with the principles of the: Why UMichigan?
2 - I'm lousy on grammar as well, but I think yours look fine to me.. No obvious mistakes, anyways. Other...
UndergraduateDoom - Dec 13, 2012 / qasderwdw - Dec 13, 2012
|"Ideas come alive when you believe in them" B.S.E. essey
3 - Since, then my passion for engineering grew tremendously. From that time, my interest for engineering grew tremendously. ...
Undergraduateshaileshgupta94 - Dec 11, 2012 / inkhk - Dec 13, 2012
|Why Poly? / Area of interest / Polythinker / Inventor) - Poly Supplements
UndergraduateTheFgt - Dec 9, 2012 / mzontario - Dec 13, 2012
|NYU Supplement - "What Intrigues You?"Intricacies of Language and its transformations
3 - Western and Eastern should be capitalized, I believe. And I agree with sarthakjain - maybe try to remove...
Undergraduatejaxball - Dec 9, 2012 / mzontario - Dec 13, 2012
|I can accomplish my research interests in Physics and Astronomy ;Oberlin Supplement!
5 - so should the first para be like this: I want my college life to make a meaningful contribution...
Undergraduatemoon05 - Dec 11, 2012 / moon05 - Dec 13, 2012
|"Tao Kae Noi!" they called me; WORLD I CAME FROM ESSAY
4 - My curiosity towards trucks was generated due to the familiar sight of my dad working with them. ...
Undergraduatetpr2012 - Dec 12, 2012 / Pahan - Dec 13, 2012
|Diversity is not only race, ethnicity and gender / Colorado Boulder's Flagship 2030
2 - ... Good point. Most people believe that diversity is all about race, religion and gender. For...
Undergraduatedudanq - Dec 12, 2012 / Pahan - Dec 13, 2012
|I never felt so disappointed; My Yale Supplement Essay
3 - Thanks a lot....
UndergraduateEmeeAfua - Dec 8, 2012 / EmeeAfua - Dec 13, 2012
|Laugh A Little (The study of cultures). UGA ESSAY. "The History of Horseracing" example
Undergraduatesalehrama10 - Dec 12, 2012 / salehrama10 - Dec 13, 2012
|Creative short story for Literary Arts application!
NEW - Applying to a Literary Arts program -high school. Please review, and comments/suggestions are appreciated!! Thanks! DUSK Dusk....
UndergraduateNicky357 - Dec 13, 2012 / — -
|Common App - Extenuating Circumstances (Additional Info)
2 - Show, not tell. You make a sweeping statement that your GPA and SAT are inaccurate representations of your skill....
Undergraduatemilkmint - Dec 12, 2012 / Proran - Dec 12, 2012
|Experiences of a Russian American (WIP) // 3 short essays for MIT
UndergraduateProran - Dec 11, 2012 / Proran - Dec 12, 2012
|FIT ENTRANCE ESSAY-FASHION DESIGN MAJOR
Undergraduatenisly29 - Dec 12, 2012 / nisly29 - Dec 12, 2012
|What intrigues you ? New York University Essay - I need some inspiration
3 - Only you know the answer to that question. It could be pretty much anything (try to avoid people though)....
UndergraduateEmaLoli - Dec 12, 2012 / Didgeridoo - Dec 12, 2012
|Growing up in New York City, I have seen many news reports of murder and theft.
Undergraduatewriter4life - Dec 12, 2012 / ah_zafari - Dec 12, 2012
|"Why I Do Theater" - Yale Supplement
6 - This is very difficult to answer without further information. He could mean a number of things by lack of...
UndergraduateMichael48304 - Oct 25, 2010 / macauleec - Dec 12, 2012
|Coming from an Eastern Country - Transfer Admission Essay - Statement on Purpose
2 - Hello, Did you win the scholarship with this essay? This is not a statement of purpose at all....
Undergraduateellenk3112 - Dec 9, 2012 / admission2012 - Dec 12, 2012
|the every-weekend movie show - UIUC prompt # 2
2 - Brilliant essay in general. Btw on the first line, it should be "Being a secretary meant ..."not means, because...
UndergraduateSimon0228 - Dec 12, 2012 / SadeAjayi - Dec 12, 2012
|I chose to destroy my best friend's life - ethical dilemma
4 - This is an incredible essay. It definitely shows colleges that you're capable of making the right decision rather than...
Undergraduatesarthakjain - Dec 12, 2012 / ivyleague - Dec 12, 2012
|I want to matriculate at Yale: Engineering Essay!
2 - your descriptive language is good, but the problem is you need to be more specific about why you want...
Undergraduatecocoalocox12x - Dec 9, 2012 / sarthakjain - Dec 12, 2012
|I'm lucky to follow my inclinations to learn things that interest me : UIUC Supp
Undergraduatesimon8437 - Dec 11, 2012 / simon8437 - Dec 12, 2012
|Common app essay: Indicate a person who has had a significant influence. True Friend
Undergraduatejohnlacoste - Dec 1, 2012 / reymiii - Dec 12, 2012
|I grew up in hospitals; Common App Essay/ topic of your choice
4 - Your essay is extremely similar to mine for my Common App. I also related a family member with a...
Undergraduatedanabug - Dec 9, 2012 / DrS - Dec 11, 2012
|NJIT application essay. How did you hear about njit and why are you applying
NEW - Please look over my essay, give any advice you feel will help, thank you in advance.:) The first...
UndergraduateAMF505 - Dec 11, 2012 / — -
|Academic interests/ What intrigues you?: NYU Supplements!
4 - In the second part: ^this isn't a complete sentence and therefore it is not grammatically correct. Secondly,...
Undergraduatenounouboo - Dec 9, 2012 / Albert - Dec 11, 2012
|Medical field was always my choice of career - NJIT App
4 - In the past year I introduced to New Jersey Institute of Technology from my close relative, a current NJIT...
UndergraduateQueenchatterbox - Dec 3, 2012 / Queenchatterbox - Dec 11, 2012
|Tae Kwon Do made me a better and stronger person; Haravard Essay
6 - I guess the long list of your achievements might work against you, but still it's up to you whether...
Undergraduatearunesh - Dec 9, 2012 / sukhomoon - Dec 11, 2012
|my cousin was wrongfully convicted of armed robbery; Statement of Intent
5 - @ dibianski: thanks for your corrections, but I have long submitted this essay. I would appreciate it if you...
Undergraduatejiva - Nov 30, 2012 / jiva - Dec 11, 2012
|Describe an unusual way in which you have fun. (Caltech Supplement)
Undergraduatemontysire - Dec 10, 2012 / qasderwdw - Dec 11, 2012
|The walk. Common app essay - I had a nightmare
Undergraduateneptmg - Dec 4, 2012 / azmain1234 - Dec 11, 2012
|"To stay where you are, keep running" - sop for MIS graduate admission
Undergraduateuntraceable_y - Dec 11, 2012 / nirajgupta05 - Dec 11, 2012
|I live in a predominately Italian and Asian neighborhood (Common app Essay)
2 - Change the "viewpoints" everywhere it is. You should explain more the thing you have learned ...
UndergraduateTheBar - Dec 9, 2012 / moon05 - Dec 11, 2012
|CU boulder essay; influential person - parents; My father has taught me lessons in life
5 - Try to get the points more straightly, instead of going round and round and avoid the sentence like "...
Undergraduatediegoarch - Dec 1, 2012 / Millin Gabani - Dec 11, 2012
|I replied, "No, but I learned a great deal": Columbia Supplement
Undergraduaterezwan3 - Nov 4, 2012 / mzontario - Dec 10, 2012
|Why is Reed college a good fit for you? Appl. essey - I don't want to be a typical person
4 - Great narrative! You used the word 'typical' twice within the first two sentences. Try to find another word....
Undergraduategcoffey72 - Dec 4, 2012 / mzontario - Dec 10, 2012
|"To be or not to be" ;UPenn Supplement Essay
3 - Didgeridoo hit the spot. College essays are not like English papers. We understand you have eloquent command of...
Undergraduatecollegehopeful9 - Dec 10, 2012 / DrS - Dec 10, 2012
|My low vision has made things more difficult: UCF Undergraduate Essay
Undergraduatelukelambert - Dec 9, 2012 / mannyalesh - Dec 10, 2012
|Why Colorado College Essay.. Hiking Mountains
3 - Thank you Jennyflower81! It's always good to have someone fluent in english proofreading our essays....
Undergraduatedipbrito - Dec 10, 2012 / dipbrito - Dec 10, 2012
|Northwestern Supplementary Essay; 'I love to talk'
NEW - The topic is: What are the unique qualities of Northwestern - and of the specific undergraduate school to which...
Undergraduatearyeknaani - Dec 10, 2012 / — -
|Activity Essay for Common App (personal essay); 'three 1-week work experience placements'
Undergraduatemileyanne - Dec 10, 2012 / mileyanne - Dec 10, 2012
|Common App essay - "Theater is my passion" - extracurricular activities
3 - macauleec Okay I revised it. Theater always seemed intriguing to me. I started off with the mindset...
UndergraduateB_Simba - Dec 10, 2012 / B_Simba - Dec 10, 2012
|Williams Supplement: Looking through a Window (arthroscopic imagery)
Undergraduateameliam13 - Nov 29, 2012 / collegehopeful9 - Dec 10, 2012
|Making dreams come true. What Intrigues you? NYU SUPPLEMENT
Undergraduatesalehrama10 - Dec 10, 2012 / collegehopeful9 - Dec 10, 2012
|I will bring all my culture and heritage to University of Colorado-CU Boulder prompt
NEW - Hello, This is my essay for U of Colorado-Boulder, please take a look and help me to adjust...
Undergraduatedet94 - Dec 10, 2012 / — -
|TOPIC : Discuss some issue of personal, local, national, or international concern
UndergraduatePrafull - Dec 10, 2012 / macauleec - Dec 10, 2012
|'Thought processes'- Stanford Essay on Intellectual Vitality
3 - I think you put too much focus on the Website...Give more details on your thinking process will be better....
UndergraduateSpencedawg - Nov 5, 2012 / cloris1225 - Dec 10, 2012
|HAPPY TO BE HERE. Common app essay; topic of my choice
Undergraduateneptmg - Dec 6, 2012 / azmain1234 - Dec 10, 2012
|@ AUBG, you don't need to choose only one major!; Global perspective (AUBG)
Undergraduateodata - Dec 9, 2012 / odata - Dec 10, 2012
|'Preeclampsia' - A personal narrative essay
Undergraduatehend nga - Nov 30, 2012 / hend nga - Dec 9, 2012
|My College Essay on Archery; All my hard works, for nothing?
9 - Hey guys thank you all so very much for the replies, especially Amadeco's reply very thoughtful and throughout. @Anally...
Undergraduatelinting2012 - Nov 4, 2012 / linting2012 - Dec 9, 2012
|Describe the world you come from; "My dream of shaping the world" - MIT Essay
3 - @arunesh Why thank you :) @yisha You're right, I'll just remove the last sentence out and revise it previous...
UndergraduateSilleth - Dec 9, 2012 / Silleth - Dec 9, 2012
|Papercraft and its influence on my life; extracurricular activities/ work experiences
8 - Phew!!! Pahan, I almost got scared for life. Thank you all very much though. I will close this thread...
Undergraduatelinting2012 - Dec 3, 2012 / linting2012 - Dec 9, 2012
|Seeing only the negative aspects of any situation can cause many problems
2 - How about this. Seeing the negative aspect of the thing can be good or bad. For example seeing...
Undergraduatebutezon24 - Dec 9, 2012 / linting2012 - Dec 9, 2012
|I need to hit harder. Move faster. Kick higher. Be greater; Common App
Undergraduateivyleague - Dec 8, 2012 / dumi - Dec 9, 2012
|What motivated me for applying to RICE UNIVERSITY; passion for history
UndergraduateEnigmaticguitar - Dec 8, 2012 / Enigmaticguitar - Dec 9, 2012
|NEED TO GET INTO MY DREAM SCHOOL; NYU SUPPLEMENT ESSAY. I am a film maker, a musician...
7 - @Drs New York has long been known as the Melting Pot. The poster laid out a clear, compelling case...
Undergraduatesalehrama10 - Dec 8, 2012 / admission2012 - Dec 9, 2012
|Wellesley College supplement, why Wellesley? - Mona Lisa Smile
UndergraduateEssayLuoLoL - Dec 9, 2012 / EssayLuoLoL - Dec 9, 2012
|Amherst Supplement - Overcoming difficult hardships
UndergraduateDDDDISSSSSCO - Dec 5, 2012 / DrS - Dec 9, 2012
|India- is synonymous to cultural diversity; MIT Essay - background and identity
4 - yeah thanks...
Undergraduatearunesh - Dec 9, 2012 / arunesh - Dec 9, 2012
|UW Freshman Application Essay (Personal Statement): Girl meets world!
Undergraduatesylviayso - Nov 30, 2012 / eharvey03 - Dec 9, 2012
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