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|'The prestige of the name' - Duke Supplementary Engineering Essay
UndergraduateBella1123 - Oct 21, 2012 / Bella1123 - Oct 22, 2012
|'a bowl of Mămăligă' - world I come from, UC Essay 1/ Common App
NEW - Describe the world you come from - for example, your family, community or school - and tell us how...
UndergraduateAP Procrstnator - Oct 22, 2012 / — -
|'Spritful helping those in need' - How will your presence enrich our community?
3 - As a child, every kid looks up to their parents. They believe they are their superman, their rock; the...
Undergraduatekaaayrob - Oct 22, 2012 / kaaayrob - Oct 22, 2012
|'Pulling flags, yelling, and dodging' - Rutgers Diversity essay
NEW - *note* I have 4,217 characters with spaces and 3,441 without , I need to shorten it through corrections and...
UndergraduateIanwardell - Oct 22, 2012 / — -
|"The Velvet Curtain" - College Admission Essay (HELP)
Undergraduatemhk1294 - Oct 22, 2012 / mhk1294 - Oct 22, 2012
|Would it be a bad idea to use this topic for Common App Essay #1 or #5?
7 - Oh okay, cool, so should I still use topic number 1, which would be evaluate a significant event, ethical...
Undergraduatesf18 - Oct 21, 2012 / sf18 - Oct 22, 2012
|'working the sales floor' - an experience at work- Common App Short Answer
2 - As I was working the sales floor one day, an older gentleman entered the store. After greeting him, the...
Undergraduatelukezayac - Oct 22, 2012 / solawnjay - Oct 22, 2012
|'My father and perfect life' - UNIVERSITY OF FLORIDA- Meaningful event
NEW - [i][/i]Essay Topic: In the space provided, please write a concise narrative in which you describe a meaningful event, experience...
UndergraduateAlexandriaa23 - Oct 22, 2012 / — -
|Write about an Issue of Important --- Sex trafficking --- Texas prompt
2 - Your essay sounds great! Let me offer a few suggestions The only difference is society. Can you be...
Undergraduatetrnnma - Oct 21, 2012 / Jennyflower81 - Oct 22, 2012
|'Co-existed with Jewish people' - RUTGERS DIVERSITY APPLICATION ESSAY
UndergraduateOwnpudi - Oct 14, 2012 / solawnjay - Oct 22, 2012
|'Enrichment through community' - Common App Diversity
4 - I think you should revise your last sentence.. I hope that reading this essay has helped you see what...
UndergraduateNikhillRao - Oct 20, 2012 / tina56 - Oct 22, 2012
|'Easy adaptation and intellectuality' - Why Reed Essay
Undergraduatendp1995 - Oct 21, 2012 / Jennyflower81 - Oct 22, 2012
|'Unique academics and community service' - UC-Prompt 1 (Story to tell)
2 - Topic-wise, your essay has been done by many others. If I changed the name printed on your app, I...
Undergraduateafkbrb3 - Oct 21, 2012 / isabelbalitaUC - Oct 22, 2012
|One important sign of being psychological maturity is to be a responsible
NEW - Can anyone help me?? Thanks a lot!! The full title is :Do you agree or disagree with the following...
Undergraduatemisslittle6 - Oct 22, 2012 / — -
|Accounting and Finance, "The Language of Business" - personal statement
NEW - (Accounting and Finance) Accounting and Finance, "The Language of Business". This is what I was taught from an...
UndergraduateChanchii - Oct 22, 2012 / — -
|'Westport, a small colonial town' - this University of South Carolina Supplement
2 - One typo...From the rich and preppy to the goth and independent. Also charismatic is the correct spelling I believe....
UndergraduateGolfnut2013 - Sep 30, 2012 / musicmalay - Oct 22, 2012
|'Book knowledge / Robot car' - Common applications
UndergraduateLTC Lawrence - Oct 21, 2012 / LTC Lawrence - Oct 22, 2012
|Help editing my essay for Duke Supplement Engineering
4 - Okay two points: 1) Im a bit worried about how you introduce yourself in your first two sentences....
Undergraduateajdue - Oct 20, 2012 / Doom - Oct 22, 2012
|'Living live fighting one cause - animal protection' - college worthy?
4 - By being able to dedicate my life to one cause, it would be animal rights and protection. Not...
Undergraduatetaylornicholson - Oct 21, 2012 / krissytintin - Oct 22, 2012
|College essay (hardships of coming to U.S and how I overcame then)
Undergraduategraby95 - Oct 21, 2012 / hninaung - Oct 22, 2012
|'8 hrs of hiking / Chicago City Hall' - transfer essay
Undergraduateborto12 - Oct 21, 2012 / Abby5 - Oct 21, 2012
|Help reviewing my main Common App essay
3 - Here is my updated version: Evaluate a significant experience, achievement, risk you have taken, or ethical dilemma you...
Undergraduateajdue - Oct 21, 2012 / ajdue - Oct 21, 2012
|Harvard Supplement - Letter to Your Roommate
2 - Wow this essay is very well written! I like your chances for getting into Harvard. Couple things I have...
Undergraduatethepegmeister - Oct 21, 2012 / ajdue - Oct 21, 2012
|What should we do to manage our relationships? The importance of Communication.
Undergraduatenlpcgnt - Sep 29, 2012 / lilgreen98 - Oct 21, 2012
|'The Underground Home' - Michigan Essay Critique
3 - I agree that your essay is interesting but it does not answer the prompt. It seems closer to answering...
UndergraduateDoctorAn12 - Oct 19, 2012 / jsnelson - Oct 21, 2012
|'the death of my grandmother when i was twelve' - Common App significant event
3 - You should try and elaborate a bit on the "How did your grandmothers death made you stronger" part. ...
UndergraduateTFleet13 - Oct 10, 2012 / Lemonsnout - Oct 21, 2012
|'Sobering Comedy': What matters to you and why
2 - This essay is really good. The anecdote at the beginning with the joke at the end it a perfect...
UndergraduateDoom - Oct 21, 2012 / ajdue - Oct 21, 2012
|UVA Supplement- Secretly Like Ghost Adventures.
Undergraduatemcgreeky - Oct 16, 2012 / mcgreeky - Oct 21, 2012
|'My grades and class rank > ACT scores' - Yale essay
UndergraduateMemona - Oct 20, 2012 / Memona - Oct 21, 2012
|'not gone to Stern' - NYU Admission
Undergraduatenair - Oct 21, 2012 / NikhillRao - Oct 21, 2012
|'Do not let your guard down' - meaningful event and how it will make you a better UF
3 - Hi iliketoshop, Firstly i am very sorry about your father. I know it is very hard to go through...
Undergraduateiliketoshop - Oct 21, 2012 / Memona - Oct 21, 2012
|'the good times of my life' - Purdue admission
2 - I was going through my early childhood photos yesterday that was placed on the floor before me. My childhood...
Undergraduatenair - Oct 21, 2012 / Jennyflower81 - Oct 21, 2012
|'Playing flute and guitar' - CommonApp short answer essay
7 - One little hint to decrease the characters is to delete the space before each sentence,that would cause red line...
Undergraduatezaclizitong - Oct 14, 2012 / LTC Lawrence - Oct 21, 2012
|"Let's get going now" - UF experience, risk, event
3 - "Let's get going now", said my mom, as I stood outside my house,staring at the bright moon. I...
Undergraduateloreal - Oct 21, 2012 / Jennyflower81 - Oct 21, 2012
|'Gaining and exchanging knowledge' - U penn supplement essay
Undergraduatesas94 - Oct 21, 2012 / memercedes - Oct 21, 2012
|'volunteering in Africa and engineering' - most appealing about Columbia and why?
5 - Good job! As ramenbowl95 says, it really shows "your hunger for the school". Even better, you as a person...
Undergraduatekanyeki - Oct 20, 2012 / memercedes - Oct 21, 2012
|'My new life after immigrating to the USA' - University of Chicago Supplement
Undergraduatehudashahid1 - Oct 20, 2012 / memercedes - Oct 21, 2012
|'being a foreigner is a constant burden' - Feedback on Harvard
3 - " I couldn't decide whether or not this life-changing experience was something that I should look forward to, or...
Undergraduatedobiboome - Oct 10, 2012 / memercedes - Oct 21, 2012
|Common App Transfer Essay for Hampshire College
2 - I really loved your essay and I feel that you've written perfectly fine! But instead of the transition, I...
Undergraduateeastcoast315 - Sep 29, 2012 / nair - Oct 21, 2012
|Describe a meaningful experience: University of Florida Essay
Undergraduateksolem - Oct 20, 2012 / ajdue - Oct 20, 2012
|"Black Powers" -- Main Essay for Dartmouth
5 - HI memercedes, To be honest with you when i read your essay i just thought myself i really really...
Undergraduatememercedes - Sep 30, 2012 / Memona - Oct 20, 2012
|'inclined towards psychology and helping others' - UMICHIGAN
2 - Hi Ramenbowl95, My suggestion will be to make this personal. I think you may focus more on how...
Undergraduateramenbowl95 - Oct 19, 2012 / memercedes - Oct 20, 2012
|'Bible study and fun activities' - Elaborate on an extracirricular activity.
UndergraduateOVODiana - Oct 14, 2012 / OVODiana - Oct 20, 2012
|'Now I am an open-minded individual' - Diversity Common App Essay
4 - Thank you very much! That's all very helpful. Idirkx, I am going to take all your corrections into account....
Undergraduatedcf0831 - Oct 18, 2012 / dcf0831 - Oct 20, 2012
|college essay for duquesne university; 'unique quality is something very strong'
2 - A unique quality in regards to a person, is something very strong. A unique quality is an aspect to...
Undergraduategxnoside - Oct 20, 2012 / Jennyflower81 - Oct 20, 2012
|The Bough that bears most bend most
2 - Life must be ordained on there principle of moderation. As there is a famous saying "Excess of everything is...
Undergraduatesalmanhabib - Oct 19, 2012 / Jennyflower81 - Oct 20, 2012
|"Hey, don't Play Play!" - What matters to me and why (stanford)
3 - I thought this essay was good, very humorous. Many parts were vague and left me confused though. What sort...
UndergraduateDoom - Oct 18, 2012 / nikapika - Oct 20, 2012
|SPORTS/ PROGRAMS; UMD/ Parts that up to the sum of me
UndergraduateTyphaze - Oct 20, 2012 / kanyeki - Oct 20, 2012
|'community in the South East of London' - describe the world you come from
2 - Coming from a community in the South East of London, there's never a day that would pass by without...
Undergraduateastarh32 - Oct 19, 2012 / Jennyflower81 - Oct 20, 2012
|briefly elaborate on one of your extracurricular activities or work experience.helpp!
NEW - I have always been interested in assisting others and working in a medical environment so at the end of...
UndergraduateSandra301 - Oct 20, 2012 / — -
|'Not stressing my grades, but coordinating my steps' - UIUC essay #2
3 - The essay seems good to me. The transitions from the paragraphs and the way you started the essay was...
Undergraduatesteveandimrad - Oct 9, 2012 / AMB994 - Oct 20, 2012
|Michigan supplement essay; "People often tell me that I act calm"
2 - From then on, it was a painfully slow process of returning to a comfortable and stable lifestyle . multiple...
Undergraduateyiwei95 - Oct 19, 2012 / neera94 - Oct 19, 2012
|my family community- U Mich Supplement
Undergraduateraquelgindi - Oct 6, 2012 / allms - Oct 19, 2012
|'Imperfect, but inspiring' - Common App Essay
3 - A big part of this essay is showing yourself. I don't see that until the last paragraph. The essay...
UndergraduateGuest - Oct 7, 2012 / timobxsci - Oct 19, 2012
|'Samson's journey' - Transfer Essay
Undergraduatecpdphilippe - Oct 2, 2012 / fleurebelle95 - Oct 19, 2012
|'Deep passion for helping other people out' - Essay for The University Michigan
2 - You could go a little more indepth about why you chose that major, where you believe it will take...
Undergraduatesoccer11 - Oct 19, 2012 / timobxsci - Oct 19, 2012
|'Taking charge of whatever I do to realize my potential' - UCF admission
2 - 1. I felt that the first few sentences of you first response was too typical.. I want some surprises...
Undergraduatemaggers777 - Sep 26, 2012 / timobxsci - Oct 19, 2012
|'Academics not difficult to me' - FSU Admission Freshman Essay Topic
2 - This is a great essay! You thoroughly covered all the aspects of why learning was your top priority in...
UndergraduateJazzy13 - Oct 19, 2012 / DoctorAn12 - Oct 19, 2012
|'The lifter and yell' - I need Common App Critique
3 - Thank you so much for your feedback! I really appreciate that you were honest in your critique. I see...
UndergraduateDoctorAn12 - Oct 18, 2012 / DoctorAn12 - Oct 19, 2012
|'journey of discovery' - Personal Essay (Early App)
Undergraduatetpezz2013 - Oct 19, 2012 / iLuHWz - Oct 19, 2012
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