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|In the nation's service and in the service of all nations...Princeton Essay
Undergraduateanelson8 - Oct 2, 2012 / kamranmangi41 - Oct 24, 2012
|'An image of American life' - COMMON APP main
UndergraduateLaura_twilight - Oct 23, 2012 / Laura_twilight - Oct 24, 2012
|'many aspects to me' - Morgan state univeristy essay
Undergraduatenky99913 - Oct 24, 2012 / nky99913 - Oct 24, 2012
|'I remained silent when the train doors slid open..' - UCHICAGO SUPPLEMENT
4 - 'It was a moment that was truly beautiful' should be rephrased as 'The moment was truly beautiful' or 'It...
Undergraduateramenbowl95 - Oct 20, 2012 / himanshusahay - Oct 24, 2012
|"We need more pies!" - University of Michigan Supplement #1
Undergraduatesgupta654 - Oct 24, 2012 / himanshusahay - Oct 24, 2012
|'significance of my walk' - Yale Supplement Essay
2 - Its a really good topic :-) I suggest you focus more on the meaning. The essay doesn't essentially reveal...
Undergraduatehimanshusahay - Oct 23, 2012 / Jayashree95 - Oct 24, 2012
|Northwestern Personal Statement- wrote about tour and interest in econ.
4 - Its a good essay, but I think you should include more than just your tour of the campus, maybe...
UndergraduateSpicyCurryMan - Oct 7, 2012 / himanshusahay - Oct 24, 2012
|"a diverse community" umich supplement #1
4 - Good essay. look for synonyms to some words in a thesaurus for a better style, but overall good flow....
Undergraduateayushb - Oct 24, 2012 / himanshusahay - Oct 24, 2012
|'Passion with a cause' - Common App Essay: personal experience
UndergraduateJayashree95 - Oct 24, 2012 / himanshusahay - Oct 24, 2012
|'the value/characteristics of your generation' - grammar in my essay?
4 - The amount of Money is essential for a good standard of living. When someone decreases income, it means...
UndergraduateKhuyenhoang - Oct 24, 2012 / nky99913 - Oct 24, 2012
|U of Illinois essay! "past experiences" - for civil engg. Lego.
Undergraduateayushb - Oct 16, 2012 / Jayashree95 - Oct 24, 2012
|'Anxious to start taking classes after moving to USA' - COLLEGE ESSAY
Undergraduateloreal - Oct 23, 2012 / kamranmangi41 - Oct 24, 2012
|'From unstable childhood to self-motivation and independence' Common App and UMD
Undergraduateaveetle18 - Oct 23, 2012 / aveetle18 - Oct 23, 2012
|'donation to an orphanage in Cambodia' - an extracirricular activity
4 - You say "But what was more important was the fulfillment I gained from donating". This could be something you...
Undergraduatekoreanincambo - Oct 23, 2012 / rahuljoban - Oct 23, 2012
|"Elaborate on extracurrilar actitivies" essay; I became aware of poverty at 7
Undergraduatetata888 - Oct 19, 2012 / kgwatsup - Oct 23, 2012
|'Tennis career' - 1000 Character Extracurricular Short Response
3 - Yeah, great essay! It really shows your commitment to the sport, which will show the officials that you are...
Undergraduatesgupta654 - Oct 20, 2012 / kgwatsup - Oct 23, 2012
|'Testament of my personal growth' - COMMON APP ESSAY
Undergraduatetugsalex - Oct 23, 2012 / tugsalex - Oct 23, 2012
|'harsh workout every morning' - Common App to Binghamton early action.
5 - Thank you guys! You make a good point...i read it over and realized i didn't have a true touch...
Undergraduateteddygrahams - Oct 21, 2012 / teddygrahams - Oct 23, 2012
|'performing a traditional Thai dance' - Extracurricular Essay
UndergraduateFreenchy - Sep 13, 2012 / ZombAA - Oct 23, 2012
|'Safe environment to express myself' - Evaluate a significant risk Common app essay
Undergraduatetina56 - Oct 22, 2012 / tina56 - Oct 23, 2012
|I am an Introverted Man (meaningful book/event)
3 - Thank you for your advice. I've edited this essay a lot and have added more connections to the story...
UndergraduatecaseySchooling - Oct 21, 2012 / caseySchooling - Oct 23, 2012
|"SIPA: Home Away from Home" UC Personal Statement #1 Response
UndergraduateisabelbalitaUC - Oct 15, 2012 / isabelbalitaUC - Oct 23, 2012
|Of Mice and Men Character Essay over Geroge Milton
Undergraduatejacystate - Oct 23, 2012 / — -
|750 characters about - WHY BU
UndergraduateAlex19 - Oct 22, 2012 / himanshusahay - Oct 23, 2012
|My essay is about my stream change and its benefits (hospitality management)
6 - Hi, Thanks, Actually I do have some broad areas, like Patient Satisfaction, or Implementation of Disaster Management Models for...
UndergraduatePreet 14 - Sep 11, 2009 / Siddi - Oct 23, 2012
|Columbia University Supplements
UndergraduateTadewool - Oct 20, 2012 / loreal - Oct 23, 2012
|'Threads curriculum for the College of Computing' Georgia Tech Essay Help
Undergraduatejt73 - Oct 10, 2012 / loreal - Oct 23, 2012
|Playing two roles at once, father and mother
Undergraduateljoss - Oct 4, 2012 / loreal - Oct 23, 2012
|'returning home from Calhuitz' - Rice Supplement Essay
3 - It's really an attractive story. And for Rice I think it hits the home. However, I do hold my...
UndergraduateBobbyJoe - Oct 21, 2012 / CIEL - Oct 22, 2012
|"Knowledge is the food of the soul." - my UF admissions
Undergraduatebruffin1010 - Oct 22, 2012 / ajdue - Oct 22, 2012
|'Only one life to live' - Help with my UC Essay
Undergraduatemixcookie - Oct 22, 2012 / mixcookie - Oct 22, 2012
|'a bowl of Mămăligă' - world I come from, UC Essay 1/ Common App
NEW - Describe the world you come from - for example, your family, community or school - and tell us how...
UndergraduateAP Procrstnator - Oct 22, 2012 / — -
|'Spritful helping those in need' - How will your presence enrich our community?
3 - As a child, every kid looks up to their parents. They believe they are their superman, their rock; the...
Undergraduatekaaayrob - Oct 22, 2012 / kaaayrob - Oct 22, 2012
|'Pulling flags, yelling, and dodging' - Rutgers Diversity essay
NEW - *note* I have 4,217 characters with spaces and 3,441 without , I need to shorten it through corrections and...
UndergraduateIanwardell - Oct 22, 2012 / — -
|"The Velvet Curtain" - College Admission Essay (HELP)
Undergraduatemhk1294 - Oct 22, 2012 / mhk1294 - Oct 22, 2012
|Would it be a bad idea to use this topic for Common App Essay #1 or #5?
7 - Oh okay, cool, so should I still use topic number 1, which would be evaluate a significant event, ethical...
Undergraduatesf18 - Oct 21, 2012 / sf18 - Oct 22, 2012
|'working the sales floor' - an experience at work- Common App Short Answer
2 - As I was working the sales floor one day, an older gentleman entered the store. After greeting him, the...
Undergraduatelukezayac - Oct 22, 2012 / solawnjay - Oct 22, 2012
|'My father and perfect life' - UNIVERSITY OF FLORIDA- Meaningful event
NEW - [i][/i]Essay Topic: In the space provided, please write a concise narrative in which you describe a meaningful event, experience...
UndergraduateAlexandriaa23 - Oct 22, 2012 / — -
|Write about an Issue of Important --- Sex trafficking --- Texas prompt
2 - Your essay sounds great! Let me offer a few suggestions The only difference is society. Can you be...
Undergraduatetrnnma - Oct 21, 2012 / Jennyflower81 - Oct 22, 2012
|'Co-existed with Jewish people' - RUTGERS DIVERSITY APPLICATION ESSAY
UndergraduateOwnpudi - Oct 14, 2012 / solawnjay - Oct 22, 2012
|'Enrichment through community' - Common App Diversity
4 - I think you should revise your last sentence.. I hope that reading this essay has helped you see what...
UndergraduateNikhillRao - Oct 20, 2012 / tina56 - Oct 22, 2012
|'Unique academics and community service' - UC-Prompt 1 (Story to tell)
2 - Topic-wise, your essay has been done by many others. If I changed the name printed on your app, I...
Undergraduateafkbrb3 - Oct 21, 2012 / isabelbalitaUC - Oct 22, 2012
|THE LAST POINT OF "COMPUTER"--- DESCRIPTIVE ESSAY
2 - Computer is the most important invention which is used to get information easily an in a short time. The...
UndergraduateAghfoor - Oct 21, 2012 / Jennyflower81 - Oct 22, 2012
|One important sign of being psychological maturity is to be a responsible
NEW - Can anyone help me?? Thanks a lot!! The full title is :Do you agree or disagree with the following...
Undergraduatemisslittle6 - Oct 22, 2012 / — -
|Accounting and Finance, "The Language of Business" - personal statement
NEW - (Accounting and Finance) Accounting and Finance, "The Language of Business". This is what I was taught from an...
UndergraduateChanchii - Oct 22, 2012 / — -
|'Westport, a small colonial town' - this University of South Carolina Supplement
2 - One typo...From the rich and preppy to the goth and independent. Also charismatic is the correct spelling I believe....
UndergraduateGolfnut2013 - Sep 30, 2012 / musicmalay - Oct 22, 2012
|'Book knowledge / Robot car' - Common applications
UndergraduateLTC Lawrence - Oct 21, 2012 / LTC Lawrence - Oct 22, 2012
|Help editing my essay for Duke Supplement Engineering
4 - Okay two points: 1) Im a bit worried about how you introduce yourself in your first two sentences....
Undergraduateajdue - Oct 20, 2012 / Doom - Oct 22, 2012
|'Living live fighting one cause - animal protection' - college worthy?
4 - By being able to dedicate my life to one cause, it would be animal rights and protection. Not...
Undergraduatetaylornicholson - Oct 21, 2012 / krissytintin - Oct 22, 2012
|College essay (hardships of coming to U.S and how I overcame then)
Undergraduategraby95 - Oct 21, 2012 / hninaung - Oct 22, 2012
|'The prestige of the name' - Duke Supplementary Engineering Essay
NEW - If you are applying to the Pratt School of Engineering, please discuss why you want to study engineering and...
UndergraduateBella1123 - Oct 21, 2012 / — -
|'8 hrs of hiking / Chicago City Hall' - transfer essay
Undergraduateborto12 - Oct 21, 2012 / Abby5 - Oct 21, 2012
|Help reviewing my main Common App essay
3 - Here is my updated version: Evaluate a significant experience, achievement, risk you have taken, or ethical dilemma you...
Undergraduateajdue - Oct 21, 2012 / ajdue - Oct 21, 2012
|Harvard Supplement - Letter to Your Roommate
2 - Wow this essay is very well written! I like your chances for getting into Harvard. Couple things I have...
Undergraduatethepegmeister - Oct 21, 2012 / ajdue - Oct 21, 2012
|What should we do to manage our relationships? The importance of Communication.
Undergraduatenlpcgnt - Sep 29, 2012 / lilgreen98 - Oct 21, 2012
|'The Underground Home' - Michigan Essay Critique
3 - I agree that your essay is interesting but it does not answer the prompt. It seems closer to answering...
UndergraduateDoctorAn12 - Oct 19, 2012 / jsnelson - Oct 21, 2012
|'the death of my grandmother when i was twelve' - Common App significant event
3 - You should try and elaborate a bit on the "How did your grandmothers death made you stronger" part. ...
UndergraduateTFleet13 - Oct 10, 2012 / Lemonsnout - Oct 21, 2012
|'Sobering Comedy': What matters to you and why
2 - This essay is really good. The anecdote at the beginning with the joke at the end it a perfect...
UndergraduateDoom - Oct 21, 2012 / ajdue - Oct 21, 2012
|UVA Supplement- Secretly Like Ghost Adventures.
Undergraduatemcgreeky - Oct 16, 2012 / mcgreeky - Oct 21, 2012
|'My grades and class rank > ACT scores' - Yale essay
UndergraduateMemona - Oct 20, 2012 / Memona - Oct 21, 2012
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