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|UNC business school essay about a AP physics group project
5 - You say in third paragraph that your words look repetitive, but i find that you have a suggestion of...
Undergraduatepintianz - Jul 4, 2012 / joshuanderitu01 - Jul 15, 2012
|'bustling city life - piano' - Questbrdge National College Match
UndergraduateLaura_twilight - Jul 14, 2012 / KhanhZ - Jul 15, 2012
|'Studying abroad to learn more' (medicinal chemistry personal statement)
1 - Why you would like to come to Australia to study and your aspirations. For many years, I have...
UndergraduateMai Linh - Jul 14, 2012 / — -
|'endorsement and encouragement' - evaluating my significant experience
2 - Over the past few years, not only have I grown physically, but grown to be more tolerant and goal-driven....
Undergraduatepeterk94 - Jul 13, 2012 / Laura_twilight - Jul 14, 2012
|'I love eating food and finance' - roommate essay, babson supplement
UndergraduateShreyansh27 - Jun 22, 2012 / Laura_twilight - Jul 13, 2012
|'communicating with individuals' - PTCAS-Physical Therapy Essay Question
1 - Hi Everyone, This is my first post. The maximum number of characters with spaces is 4500. I have...
Undergraduaterizrajper - Jul 12, 2012 / — -
|<searching for my "forever"> - UCF-Bump in academic or personal life.
4 - Thank you for all your help. I will definitely take both of your suggestions and revise my essay! and...
Undergraduatecrshea - Jul 12, 2012 / crshea - Jul 12, 2012
|'cause of death among college students' - Why FSU is Awesome Essay
UndergraduateMadman59770 - Jun 19, 2012 / Madman59770 - Jul 12, 2012
|Essay about yourself (finance and investment interest)
Undergraduateela4490 - Jul 8, 2012 / ela4490 - Jul 11, 2012
|(My love for running) "Short Answer" activities
UndergraduateHayley5 - Jul 10, 2012 / marczawa - Jul 10, 2012
|Drunk on the Road - ISSUE OF IMPORTANCE COLLEGE ESSAY
Undergraduatehannahjung - Jul 10, 2012 / hannahjung - Jul 10, 2012
|'becoming an architect' - Georgia Tech Admission small essay
5 - Thank you so much Dumi. Your example is most helpful, and I will work with what everyone has said...
UndergraduateAnts in a Deli - Jul 9, 2012 / Ants in a Deli - Jul 9, 2012
|'everyone is not as fortunate as I am' - Personal essay for the FALL 2013
Undergraduatewhoami - Jul 8, 2012 / whoami - Jul 9, 2012
|'experience in health care prior to a PA' - motivation towards becoming a PA
11 - thank you...
UndergraduateRudyyunghoi - Jul 7, 2012 / Rudyyunghoi - Jul 9, 2012
|'dependant on computers and technology' - past circumstances and major choice
Undergraduatebwang13 - Jul 7, 2012 / dumi - Jul 9, 2012
|today most of the young children use mobile phone ,what is your opinion?
4 - If the topic is an "agree or disagree" type you should clearly mention your opinion at the end...
UndergraduateALI ASADI - Jul 8, 2012 / ah_zafari - Jul 8, 2012
|'to make the world a better, more brilliant' - Stanford on "Intellectual Vitality"
UndergraduateUnivibez - Jul 6, 2012 / Univibez - Jul 7, 2012
|'College, my second home' - Transfer admissions essay to Stanford
Undergraduateklhardge - Jul 7, 2012 / klhardge - Jul 7, 2012
|Traditional music give the info about a whole country; international entertains
Undergraduateankury9 - Jul 4, 2012 / ankury9 - Jul 6, 2012
|UC Transfer Prompt: 1 and 2 (How I found myself & overcame depression)
12 - Kevin, Nicely done. I enjoyed reading your second prompt. Even though depression may not be a great thing to...
UndergraduateKevinHaroldo - Jun 12, 2012 / Laura_twilight - Jul 6, 2012
|seeking knowledge and commitment to service are integral parts of the spelman experie
4 - Growing up in a small town in Georgia where people have very little education and the average income here...
Undergraduatesagittarius94 - Jul 4, 2012 / sagittarius94 - Jul 5, 2012
|Mrs. Peneva- this kind, caring, extraordinary person - influential person
5 - Thank you!...
UndergraduateHayley5 - Jul 5, 2012 / Hayley5 - Jul 5, 2012
|UCAS essay - economic and financial problems
5 - Dumi, you raise an interesting concern. Depends on whether it's singular or plural. Are the producers optimizing resources...
Undergraduatedigital - Jul 2, 2012 / BachChaconne2 - Jul 5, 2012
|'suppressing their true beauty' - Common App
2 - Even still, I am concerned to see family friends and neighbors of diverse ethnic backgrounds suppressing their true beauty...
Undergraduatesunshine95 - Jul 4, 2012 / basketball - Jul 4, 2012
|My Addiction - Computer Science Application
2 - Studying Informatics, Human Centered Design, and Engineering has ...---I know why you typed it the way you did, but...
UndergraduateKatlynedwards - Jul 2, 2012 / EF_Kevin - Jul 4, 2012
|'School to stimulate my mind' - Reason to obtain admission in college (Computers)
Undergraduateknan43 - Jul 1, 2012 / knan43 - Jul 3, 2012
|"the math's pros" - a common app big essay
2 - Different things have different pros and cons, and they usually fulfill one another. Math has always been one of...
Undergraduateathipatboy - Jul 2, 2012 / Katlynedwards - Jul 2, 2012
|'I need great skills' Essay for engineering to make an even better medical technology
1 - So i think the second and third paragraphs are REALLY crappy. Please help!! Describe the unique qualities that...
Undergraduateathipatboy - Jul 2, 2012 / — -
|'the day I changed inside forever' - University of Colorado Boulder Essay
Undergraduatejustsm0 - Jun 22, 2012 / justsm0 - Jul 1, 2012
|'always wanted to go to' - The top five reasons you want to attend Virginia Tech?
3 - Don't talk about ranking. Mention your ethnicity instead of referring to it vaguely. Be more specific as to the...
Undergraduatetokiwong - Jun 25, 2012 / avenged7fold - Jul 1, 2012
|Zicklin School of Business - top 3 criteria when looking for business school
2 - Your essay is good, but generic. Mostly, I got from it that you want New York, and Business. The...
Undergraduateammadshami - Jun 30, 2012 / lafortuna - Jul 1, 2012
|UF Statement of Intent - 200 Words - "The International Economist"
Undergraduateedgardocev - Jun 29, 2012 / edgardocev - Jun 30, 2012
|Introduction - ASP 100-GRND: Skills for Success
Undergraduatetau - Jun 29, 2012 / ah_zafari - Jun 30, 2012
|'About Jerry' - common app - Describe a fictional character and its influence.
10 - Oh. Thanks Kelvin. I'm glad and have taken those corrections. However, I'm scared if this essay is ever...
UndergraduateOpara - Jun 26, 2012 / Opara - Jun 27, 2012
|lower income communities- the factors that influenced your decision to choose nursing
2 - My dream of(not on) becoming a nurse started when I became a mother. We needed help(add a comma),...
UndergraduateIana - Jun 27, 2012 / Opara - Jun 27, 2012
|'a successful Aerospace Engineer' - Statement of Purpose - UT
Undergraduategoodboy - Jun 26, 2012 / Opara - Jun 27, 2012
|"time when you went out of your way to help a colleague" Competency based question
3 - EF_Susan Thanks so much for your reply. Here is an answer for another question if you don't mind...
UndergraduateAfel - Jun 26, 2012 / Afel - Jun 26, 2012
|'Enterprise solutions and computer science' Personal statement Essay for Fulbright
Undergraduatemuhannadmatahen - Jun 25, 2012 / dumi - Jun 26, 2012
|'DETERMINED TO BE SOMEBODY' - Howard University Admission Essay
4 - write about something unique. Jaybird has a point. There are thousands of people that apply to Howard that write...
Undergraduatesnaacks - Jun 24, 2012 / chessman567 - Jun 25, 2012
|'Character development and integrity' - Naval Academy application essay
Undergraduatemadeline18 - Jun 23, 2012 / karina23 - Jun 25, 2012
|UW CSE's personal statement - Finding my own path
Undergraduatenqtong - Jun 23, 2012 / dumi - Jun 23, 2012
|'mixture of diversities and cultures' - UW's CSE Short Answer Question - Diversity
5 - Thank you very much for your reply and corrections. I will definitely have fun at school. School is awesome....
Undergraduatenqtong - Jun 20, 2012 / nqtong - Jun 23, 2012
|Personal statement for MSc in Financial Mathematics and Computation
3 - "The water that bears the boat is the same that swallows it up." It is the Chinese metaphor that...
Undergraduategeniusnth - Jun 17, 2012 / adaiah - Jun 21, 2012
|'no way for me to be invisible' - Peace Corps Essay 2
3 - Is it necessary to use from before each item in the following list: who came from Mormon Utah, from...
Undergraduatepigwithwings11 - Jun 18, 2012 / adaiah - Jun 21, 2012
|'to earn as many experiences as possible' - SMU SIS appeal
Undergraduateholyeternal - Jun 21, 2012 / — -
|"Will you be my guest for prom?" - Spelman College
Undergraduatesnaacks - Jun 20, 2012 / EF_Susan - Jun 20, 2012
|'youth outreach clubs' - How my goals relate to my interests- Georgetown
Undergraduatekarina23 - Jun 19, 2012 / karina23 - Jun 20, 2012
|"Big changes begin with a small step" - How will your presence enrich our community?
Undergraduatemyzatil - Jun 20, 2012 / — -
|'diligent mind and body' - Rutgers Personal Essay
4 - The intro is a little slow and I would change "flourished as a" to "was". "Cultural expansion will...
UndergraduateAhmad1015 - Jun 19, 2012 / karina23 - Jun 19, 2012
|'When one dies...' - What experience defines you as a person?
Undergraduatemonicanaz - Jun 16, 2012 / monicanaz - Jun 17, 2012
|Argument Essay about Class rank for ApplyTexas Topic A essay
2 - In my opinion, the class rank system does not giveoffer equal opportunities to all students, and can lead to...
UndergraduateGoodmattenator - Jun 15, 2012 / dumi - Jun 15, 2012
|My daughter is my significant influence
Undergraduatedeannah21 - Jun 14, 2012 / deannah21 - Jun 15, 2012
|'The birth of my son' - Nursing essay (does this essay satisfy the question?)
4 - My life experiences which includeI personally don't think this is necessary, if anything you're just filling up your word...
Undergraduateola77 - May 22, 2012 / Guest - Jun 15, 2012
|'friendship and camaraderie' - Naval Academy Personal Statement
2 - The United States Naval Academy is where I want to be. The academy will give me unparalleled, wide-ranging skills...
Undergraduatesofiana13 - Jun 14, 2012 / EF_Susan - Jun 14, 2012
|'Bachelors of Science in Biomedical Sciences' - Short essay on career goals
5 - Academic goals would be how far you want to go into acadamia. Like in example you may want to...
Undergraduatescission6 - Jun 13, 2012 / KevinHaroldo - Jun 14, 2012
|'Pleasant Tragedy' - Personal Statement for Undergraduate School
Undergraduateelizkarimian - Jun 14, 2012 / elizkarimian - Jun 14, 2012
|"About the sea' - "About me essay"
Undergraduatekrissytintin - Jun 6, 2012 / EF_Susan - Jun 11, 2012
|(I want to study in the University of Hong Kong) - A personal statement
1 - I am apply for the University of Hong Kong.She requires a personal statement.My english is not very well, so...
Undergraduatellychinalz - Jun 11, 2012 / — -
|'I wear a scarf' - University of Michigan: your community and your place in it
Undergraduatenina2 - Jun 10, 2012 / dumi - Jun 11, 2012
|'not to fear death and to seize the day' - Most significant experience
2 - This is a very compelling essay about you and your grandmother. I really liked the essay but just fixed...
Undergraduatetiffanyfelix - Jun 10, 2012 / kimisizer - Jun 10, 2012
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